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Update!
Wait, first update in four months? Oops.
Don't worry, we'll be returning to regular-type TSJ-ness very soon! I will probably do a quick review of the Journal, however, to see if a rewrite is called for (I may want to rewrite and reformat the entire thing at this point in the story, but it honestly won't take too long if I do—and there might be some new material that gets mixed in, but I'll post a long list of changes so nopony gets confused).
I hate this story so much. Please, continue!
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I'm afraid I can't stop any more than you can.
Loved the part with Spike coming in and leaving again right away. Very show-esque.
And Thunderlane is not a bastard! Hurray!
Also, Spike may already be marked as a cunt. I had not expected that, but considering what we know of him and his relationships with the mares in his life, it wouldn't be that surprising.
Love it when I'm checking something that hasn't updated in awhile and then it updates on that very same day.
Pleasant treat.
Sweet, was hoping this story would start up again. Thunderlane's visit was surprisingly mundane (for Twilight, though probably not Thunderlane). The tub scene was sweet; it points pretty heavily to Pinkie wanting her to join the other side, but not being willing to betray Twilight or even coerce her too much.
Edit: This is the second time it's been noted that the collar is fast drying. I wonder if that will become relevant in the future?
"Well, yeah! With your tail lifted even, if you like, wanna show everypony who owns you. I mean, if you're wearing the plug because you're Rarity's pet or whatever," said Pinkie like it was no big thing. "I don't think it's supposed to be for you, but it was here and convenient, and who knows? Maybe you'd even like being Rarity's." - Hmm, so mares are allowed ownership too. Good to know. Unless it's just Pinkie being Pinkie, she isn't all that initiated into the Order after all.
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OMG SO AMAZING!! Trick, (if I may call you that) you are too damn good! I've been waiting for this chapter, checking everyday. Come to think of it, I may have a problem. The storyline is getting so involved and juicy! Also, What if Thunderlane is secretly with the order and came to scope the library and twighlight out, so that he can return and dominate her in the night.
God, I have an evil mind. At least I can take comfort in the fact that I'm no better that anyone else reading this! Come on, we all have those thoughts. I do love to theorise, though.
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EDIT: Wait, what about the collar drying?
I have to say, this is right up there with Regression in terms of stories that fill me with a blend of anticipation and dread when I see them update.
I actually had to pause for a moment and think about which orifice Pinkie meant when she said "cake-hole." I'm not sure if that says more about her or me.
Oh dear. The thing about a resistance movement against a force that uses zombie math is that the moment one member is converted, you have a tremendous security leak. This could go very, very poorly.
Twilight has most definitely not thought through Operation Pink Slip. Even in the best case, she's going to regret this.
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You can call me whatever.
Trick, Trickster, Trixie (my actual middle name), Tee Kyoo, Tricky, The Meek and Powerless Trixie, Wolf, Bitch, Anna, Hay You, etc.
EDIT: I actually regret the amount of sex that the story is going to contain now and in the immediate future (partly because it feels like pandering), but it's an inextricable part of the storyline. So you can expect the frequency of naughty to increase precipitously starting with this chapter.
On the upside, you can also expect it will frequently be disturbing rather than masturbatory... although given enough time, that might turn my readers into bigger perverts than you already are.
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I don't think that I can be a bigger pervert. My pervert level is over 9000! (Sorry, couldn't resist, it practically begged to be said.) Also, I really like the disturbing aspect of things. Most stories I have read that are aming to have disturbing elements in the sex part fail miserably. The author just gets caught up in what they want, and don't think about how it comes across. You, my dear evil woman, have definitely achieved disturbing, and I look forward to more! Also, I think I'll opt for trick. Has a nice ring to it, don't you think? Plus, it's what I've been calling you so far.
To be frank, I'm not certain weather I'm pleased or not that this updated. This story is the only one that has ever bothered me. Before you think I'm delicate or something I'll explain why. I am a Dom. I'm kinda like pinkie is, trapped between the two sides. BDSM is a pretty important part of my life, on par and interspersed with being a brony. However, the problem is the rule of consent, the ability to just change ponies with the slightest assent. I can see also the drive for freedom in a sexually repressed society. Celestia is an extreme opposition that could only be overcome with extreme action. This story just kinda hits a little close to my hearts I guess. Still it is well done and engaging.
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Oddly enough, were I in the readers' shoes, I would probably also feel disturbed by my own story, and it would be hard for me to read—but this is because I wouldn't be able to trust the author to know that it was leading to a place I could be comfortable with.
As the author, I'm not concerned. I can't say whether or not you should be, however, because I don't know your mindset. However, I can at least say that Things May Not Be Quite As They Seem.
The next chapter might begin a series of reveals...
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OOOOOHMYGAWD SO EXCITING! I can't wait!!!! HHHHhhhmMMMmmmmm? A series of reveals you say? My inner detective is already working away... Seriously though, I am soooo excited now that this story has started up again! One might even go so far to say that I am... *twitches uncontrollably* FANGIRLIIIIIIING!!!
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Celestia extreme opposition? So far the only evidence of anything wrong on her part is maybe some sexual repression that may or may not be her fault. The only actual writing from her seems to indicate her reaction to the craziness is "things seem crazy, I've locked my door and am looking into it." Not once have we seen justification for Shining Armor's actions, and Luna's claims are mostly that the horrible stuff is lies and misunderstanding, which seems rather contrary to the crazy factions apparent sincerity and directness.
For lack of other leads, I almost feel the simplest explanation at this point (from my perspective) is going to involve changelings. And time travel. Time travelling Changelings. Definitely the simplest explanation.
6809827 mayhaps I should have explained this better. What I meant is Celestia is a force to be reckoned with. To oppose her at all is to oppose something truly powerful. As for the proof of the oppression I see some hints of it.
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A secret conspiracy makes sense as a way to oppose her on something, yes. It's just all the stuff they conspire to do that appears insane.
Go twilight. i cheered at her plan. here's to hoping it comes to fruition, would be a crowning moment of awesome if princess luna pulled a toriel and interrupted a bad situation at a critical moment to aid twilight. as for her and pinkie, i'm worried, but pinkie seems to be genuinely the BEST of the opposing side, unwilling to compromise on her ethics even if her desires are at odds with twilights and the old society. She seems intent on sweetening twilight with submission, but also won't let her fall into it either, always pushing her back up the stairs as she becomes familiar with the territory so she can make informed choices.
CHERISH THIS HORSE!
As mentioned in this blog post, I'm currently in the process of rewriting the entire story. Most of the changes will be restricted to formatting and voicing. Any major changes will be announced as they occur, both in the associated chapter and by blog post.
Chapters that are yet-to-be-revised will be prepended with a period. There may be minor conflicts between revised and not-yet-revised chapters, but I will post when this happens.
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Do you think that there will be enough changes that I'll need to read the whole story again?
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No. I'll blog and comment any changes that are relevant to the storyline, and I am anticipating very few of those. The only one I can think of at the moment is that a few of the materials used as badging mechanisms (copper, gold, etc.) may change up a little.
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Alright, thanks!
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Nope, I revised that one when I dotted everything.
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Day 40 is about halfway-revised, actually. You'd be able to tell from a glance because the formatting is different, and the writing is different too (mostly fixing saidisms and removing bold for italics, but it gets obnoxious once we're deep enough into the story).
Originally I had planned this to be a series of books from different characters' perspectives. Trixie's story would be the next in line. I'm not certain whether I'll be doing that or not, but it's probable.
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Don't you know, you're not supposed to actually go back and revise things. Revising a long story is supposed to be author-code for "this story will never update again". You're doing it wrong.
Oh well, I am already excited for updates.
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This is true. I had no idea what an undertaking rewriting 135,000 words would be. But I have the next 15–20 chapters already planned out, so I'm motivated to do it.
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I had to do a double take at the word count. The first chapters were so short, it makes you forget just how much has already happened, and we're still at the stage where everyone just keeps saying "you know nothing
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I know, I know. I'll probably end up posting a new chapter before I finish editing, but the next scene is going to be long.
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Long and sexy, or long and full of information contradicting our current, flimsy theories? Both are good, though.
Well, that was a thing. I'm completely with Fan Of Most Everything on this: this is disturbingly engaging to read. It's both amazing and completely weird how you managed to write a story about ambiguously villainous BDSM vampire MRAs and make it actually good. I don't really know how I feel about that. It's all very explicitly sexual, but it's not actually descriptive enough to really be just porn. It's kind of a weird animal.
Let's not even talk about how I feel about these "extreme sexual taboos" not even being some of the most extreme stuff I've personally seen, never mind read about. I actually laughed out loud when I realized that. I can't even properly complain about the bits involving Spike, because I wasn't that much older when I made that experience from his side and still can't honestly say I feel particularly bad about it.
I don't think I could stop reading this if I wanted to. I'm actually curious what will happen next.
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Wait, are you saying that society used to use infantile masturbation to cure colic/insomnia, or that they used to let siblings fuck? Either way, I'd like to see the source.
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Yes to both of this, in various places and at various points in time. And if you'd like to see a source, you can politely ask for it and I'll see about spending the time to look one up for you, instead of just stating that as if I owe it to you to provide one.
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It was meant to be a request, although I suppose polite is sometimes hard to convey over the internet. Still, I'm aware of no scientific data on these subjects. I'm interested in the source, please.
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Fair enough, my bad. People have just been really rude here lately, no idea what's up with that.
First of all, you need to be of course aware that none of this is universal, may or may not have been accepted by greater society, not usually something that crossed cultural lines and is in any case badly documented.
It is known, however, that childhood masturbation was treated very differently from how it is today, including and up to manipulating children's genitals for various reasons, not necessarily limited to calming them down at night:
http://psychohistory.com/books/foundations-of-psychohistory/chapter-1-the-evolution-of-childhood/
(Warning: contains a historical woodcut pertaining to the topic. Not too graphic, but still, be cautioned.)
As to the other, it's well-known that, for example, the Egyptian royal family practiced second-degree incest and sibling marriages as ways to keep the royal bloodline pure. Even then, attitudes to what exactly is prohibited and to what degree has varied, although it was nearly always strongly forbidden. This is something easily looked up on Wikipedia.
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I think that article can be summed up by the quote: "As one battering mother put it: “I have never felt loved all my life. When the baby was born, I thought he would love me. When he cried, it meant he didn’t love me. So I hit him.”"
It seems to be central that the data is missing. These ideas and stories seem to fall in the sometimes ascended urban legend category, a confluence of superstition and mental illness, much like the children who attempted to sacrifice their friend to the slenderman. There is no solid anthropology describing a culture of practices, except as a dismissive jingoism or excuse.
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You're free to look for better sources yourself, I just grabbed the first thing that had roughly the right keywords on a casual readover. This isn't exactly a topic I have on permanent file, as you can imagine. It is something I've stumbled over from multiple sources, usually as some kind of footnote on unusual childrearing practices throughout the ages. Enough so that I'm taking it as more than just empty rumor, but if you want something more authoritative, you're probably asking the wrong person. Sorry.
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For the record, I don't recall where I got the information from. It may have been a relatively unreliable source (e.g. Kinsey or Hite), or it may have been from a compilation (like a dictionary or history of sexuality book).
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Thanks. It's my theory right now that this subject is unique in having no better sources. AFAIK this topic is uniquely taboo in a way that prevents proper study. (see rind et al. controversy)
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Yeah, you've probably got the right of that. This is hardly a topic that is ever publicly discussed at all, whether today or historically, so whatever background there may be to it, there probably is little enough hard writing to find even if you know where to look - and most people understandably wouldn't want to be associated with it even if they knew where to find it. For what it's worth, it's somewhere, I've stumbled over references to it often enough to consider it more than hearsay. Sorry I couldn't be of more help.
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That's a hard question to answer, partly because the rewrite will take a while.
Nothing major will change and I'll post notes to explain what did change when things do change. So if you read ahead you shouldn't miss anything. But some of the flavor of the posts will be different soon.
I haven't updated TSJ in a while but I will be updating it again very soon.
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...wait. Your middle name is Trixie? Well I guess say9ing that Trixie is the only one that can avoid this herevampire situation isn't just me being overly o[timistic for my favorite character after all! Well, Trixie and Rainbow Dash. as her element gives her a significant bonus to her desire to be loyal to her beliefs.
Second Viewing
Twilight at this point you've made out with and shared a butt plug with an 11 year old dragon(though the latter is currently unknown to you) sex with your brother is a step back towards normal at this point. Or at least it's a lateral move.
So....business as usual then?
And here's where i bail. I really tried.
So, I just realized the age thing for the mane six. Twilight is actually by far the youngest of them. Fluttershy is the oldest, at one year older than Pinkie Pie. Pinkie pie was the second oldest, meaning Rainbow is much younger than Fluttershy. This would mean that Fluttershy was severely held back to be in that flight camp class, which seems likely. Rarity was a senior in Cherilee's class (who had started teaching recently enough to be wearing leg warmers) and started her business shortly after. (this explains how Fluttershy could immediately transition to being Ponyville's ranger, since Fluttershy is older.) Twilight Sparkle was in *kindergarten* when all this was happening, unless we're arguing that she was taking her college entrance exams. So she should be about 12 years younger than Fluttershy, 11 years younger than Pinkie Pie, and 6 years younger than Rainbow dash.
My reaction exactly
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Why exacly dose this matter
A minute of engineering:
I suppose that Twilight should suspect that austenitic stainless steel is pretty resistant to good old mineral acids. Aqua regia?
I'm a bit confused about plugs: since stainless steel is hard to cast, they probably are turned on a lathe from rod stock and then polished, so they should be pretty expensive. But I googled and they are actually relatively cheap and look a bit too shiny in pictures, so "stainless" part may be a lie and they could be cast from some kind of zinc alloy and nickel plated instead.
Also, as a bonus derivation about pony industrial production, ponies have plenty of accessible electricity since they are mining chromium and (mentioned later) magnesium in significant quantities. I wonder why it is not used for lighting?
Looks like I picked up a theme very relevant to story's main points. Again