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New entry, but this one is a short one. Most of the next entry is already written (and it's quite a bit longer).
I decided to split off this entry from the next because there are too many topics, and too much text. No plan on when the next entry will appear, but it's titled:
Day 49 (Pinkie's Secret)
definitely not ominous
What? Twilight doesn't know how to write a scream? I'd expect her to be intimately familiar with every different way to write a scream, from "Aaa!" to "Aah!" to "Ahh!". (Or maybe she never read any stories or comics written in the style that would bother to write out screams? I guess it's plausible.)
(Really, though, I found it very jarring when I saw screams written as "Ahh!" in the Pendragon book series, when I was used to it being "Aah!" or "Aaa!" I associate consecutive "h"s with sighs, and consecutive "a"s with screams.)
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That's a good point. Perhaps she means she doesn't know the best way to write it, having seen it done so many different ways...? If only we could ask her.
EDIT: I added a touch more loquaciousness so it would seem less unsparkley.
I get that you're going for moral ambiguity but one side is into forced lobotomy and weird sexual mutilation whereas the olther side (Celestia) seems to just be holding the idiot ball
I think it's a shame you'll be focusing less on this story, especially since every chapter essentially ends on a cliffhanger.
So, this chapter... Not really enough info to theorize on Gala Apple. We know Shy's wings changed when she became a vampony so it's entirely possible she's not normally a batpony. But otherwise we have no idea how much shapeshifting magic could be involved with them. So that could be anyone, including someone new.
Didn't Twilight cast the bite reversal spell on Applejack?
Also while Caramel was in Appleloosa crowd scenes I believe, the main pony in that and the confirmed cousin of the Apples was Braeburn.
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we really don't have enough evidence for Celestia's actions to know anything about what she's doing.
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I'm not focusing less on TSJ, don't worry! I'm just changing the schedule of updates to alternate from one thing to another. This mainly affects the zen koan collection.
EDIT: Also, Twilight wasn't able to get the spell to work on AJ.
It is really hard to describe how i feel for this story, when i see a update notification for it i gett really nervous and i want to save the chapter for later and later and later, but the feeling wont go away and it is mixed with excitement and curiosity at what lies beyond so when i do read it i get instantly giddy, my energy levels spike and all the feelings just presist till im done with the chapter then i get sad due to the next one not being there, but at the same time i get really excited for e nrxt one because the one i just read was so awesome. That is how i view this story as far as i believe i know.
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Aww! I'm glad you like it!
I'm pumping out chapters as fast as I can, I promise.
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as long as i know one will come i dont care if it takes a few days extra, quality over quantaty for the most part, though your not lacking there in any way
Braeburn is Applejack's cousin, not Caramel. Braeburn is also the one who lives in Appleoosa.
Anyway, I smell a trap.
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Shit. Corrected.
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I didn't even follow what you said there for a moment, but it's fixed now.
NOTE: I accidentally called Braeburn "Caramel" throughout the entire entry (even though I used "Braeburn" in all of my notes!).
It should be fixed now.
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I notice no acknowledgement of any traps in that reply.
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Generally I prefer to neither confirm nor deny such spurious accusations.
Although keep in mind, this story is intended as a branching-off point for others, so Trixie's letter may not be entirely germane to Twilight's current woes... apart from the fact that she is getting a sense of how widespread this thing is now.
my conclusion on this conflict, one side is oppressing some sort of truth or facet of society, while the other is exploiting that factor along with a condition that increases sexual activity in a victim to essentially trick others into embracing another form of enslavement. poor twilight is stuck in the middle of this nightmare and left with really no one to trust....especially since Discord broke some sort of cannon somewhere, whatever could he mean about breaking a cannon when he caught the main villain for the last season instead of agreeing to side with the guy
Hmm. Hmmmm.
You know, I think this is the third story I've read where Trixie hooks up with Braeburn Apple. Okay, they're not officially together here... yet. Yeah, I don't think mentioning he's handsome would've happened if there wasn't some interest. The pony doth protest too much, methinks.
Of these three, the last actually had a kinky slave-wedding between them, with a bound Trixie having her leash handed over to Braeburn. It was quite touching. And kinky. Very kinky.
Anyhow, this new pony... she has steel earrings and a steel collar? Hmm.
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You're right with your notes about Gala Apple. We know too little yet. We don't even know how Trixie can tell whether somepony ever worked on a farm or not, as she didn't elaborate on that point. I'm also reminded of your musings about the earring and collar material. This one has steel, what does that mean? A higher rank among 'mare-cunts', maybe? Fluttershy for example does appear to meekly go along with Rarity dressing her up. That's no different than how they used to act together, but let's not forget that Fluttershy truly is a mostly passive and submissive personality.
Now that I think about it... every 'converted' mare apparently gets earrings and collars made of some form of metal. It's a pretty obvious thing, but I never looked at it this way. Marble also happens to be very heavy, much heavier than either gold, steel, or copper.
Two more things:
1) Have we actually seen a stallion vampony yet? I only remember mares with fangs, Rarity, Twilight Velvet, etc. Twilight Sparkle believes her father bit her, but it could've been her mother instead, right?
2) It's actually partly Twilight's actions that made her own vampony infection spread so far. She pushed her body six hours forward after waking up with her parents. So, an unknown amount of time between the bite and the sleeping pills wearing off+six hours+one lost day+sleep in Ponyville. Even if she cast the cure right after waking up in the warehouse it wouldn't have been enough, since she's already added six hours to the duration and the spell rolls the infection back only by about a day.
So, how's the next chapter coming along.
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It's almost done, but I need to publish another story before it will appear.
I am working, promise! (Plus I have all next week off from work.)
5724691 Thanks for the update.
OH NO Now I have to wait for chapters... At the speed I've been gobbling this story up that's going to kill me D:
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I know!
Fortunately, next week is Spring Break and I fully intend to do a lot of writing!
Update tomorrow!
It's slow progress to write because a whole bunch of crap is going down all at once (in the story, I mean). I'm pretty close to the natural break I had planned for this entry so it should be done once I'm awake again.
Increased activity of the Snark Glands seems to be a symptom of progressing vampirism infection.
As an aside, I'm kind of amused that this story uses both "vampire bat" and "vampony" at the same time. The "vampire" is kind of already in there. Makes the vamponies seem a bit redundant.
Second Viewing
I can imagine Creepy Twilight getting business cards that say so.
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*claps slowly* wow just wow XD
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I agree fully
I had something to say about trixie and all but I forgot and I'm to lazy to re read that Letter
And then Trixie teleports the entire table map halfway across town. Don't you just love it when canon steps on your toes?
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Teleporting correctly is much harder on nonliving objects. Trixie didn't choose where to send the table.