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This story, I just... what is a spark-plug?
I think there is ALWAYS a need to leave extra space, Twilight. Now we won't get any vague warning to stop reading (that we will likely ignore anyway) untill the end of the NEXT chapter.
:{ No hidden message this time.
I... think that toy is a fleshlight. And I also think Spike has been acting very fishy for a while now. When he broke down on Twilight's shoulder, that looked like guilt from keeping things from her while she still treated him lovingly.
Twi... Do you even realise what you're saying at times?
Pinkie is evil. EEEEEEVIIIIL!
I have the next 18 chapters planned out (pending modifications, natch).
The chapter I've been waiting to write since the very beginning is only a few chapters away! I'll definitely blog about it when it comes up, but it probably won't be for a few weeks at least.
So is that toy a 'plug' or 'light'?
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No, I just meant I have the story planned out that much in advance at the moment. There will be some changes as we go, but the next few chapters should be set. I haven't written them yet.
However, planning them out in advance means I can write them out of order for a change of pace.
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It's a solid hunk of steel smaller than one's hoof and shaped somewhat like an acorn.
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And that's not even considering
Holy anal horndildoing, Batman.
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I've actually considered pausing here and starting the Trixie story in order to draw things out forever.
The trouble is, I'm not sure how I'd suggest reading order to ponies once this one is finished. Probably I'd have to add a chapter saying "go to this story next" or something.
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Hmm. Like, putting a link either right in the middle or at the end of a chapter that leads to an intermission story of sorts?
I continue to be horrified, and intrigued almost in spite of myself. Twilight is pretty clearly mentally compromised... or, at least, that's what I'm getting from this. For now, I'll just wait and see how this next goes wrong.
6481042 colour me excited for that!
6481438 So it's a Plug then? WTF is Spike doing with it?
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It's a butt plug, what do you think he's doing with it? Using it as a karaoke microphone?
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Celestia I hope so. That image is now stuck in my head and I can't stop laughing.
Especially since for some bizarre reason he's singing Whitney Houston's, "I'm Every Woman".
6487329 "SPIKE! KEEP IT DOWN, IT'S 11PM!"
6493058 We pretty much all saw it.
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Aww. Thanks!
It's a fine line I have to hoof with respect to the cryptic stuff. Too much and ponies might be led to believe there isn't any structure they can depend upon, which ruins suspense. At this point in the story, however, pretty much everything Twilight is writing is trustworthy (from her perspective).
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Well, I don't know if you ever intend there to be a pure clop chapter/side story. . . but now I'm convinced if there is one it will involve a sissified Spike literally singing "I'm Every Woman" into a butt plug, as rarities submissive. That seems like it would mesh unnaturally well with the themes and tone of this story.
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If you look through the comments you'll see a reasonable explanation on that one btw.
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Can't answer!
I haven't seen many readers talk about the vampony virus. So I'd like to bring it up.
Is it a variant of Toxoplasma gondii? (hopefully a softer variant). You can get it from garden soil, under cooked meat and most infamously attributed from cats and their droppings. (bats hmmm..., house smells like a zoo) It has a lot of the symptoms that are showing up in the characters. One of the interesting symptoms is that it affects men and women differently. For men more risk taking and more aggressive, for women more outgoing and promiscuous that's the nice side. However acute Toxo can cause a host of bad things from permanent blurred vision to schizophrenia. It creates cysts in the brain that change the behaviour of the host. ( brain control / lobotomy box?) Paradoxically, in its dormant state, it can be beneficial to some hosts as it increases dopamine levels during social gatherings. Sort of like the more social you are the more happier you are.
So I assume that Fluttershy being part bat now was patient zero. Probably got it from the (vampire) fruit bats. Finding that all of her books are lacking in this disease. Partially the part about ponies having a more higher libedo. After all she and Big Mac are a couple so she and mac would know if she has changed. It would be even more evident if she changed into Flutterbat and bit Mac during lovemaking. She went to the Crystal empire to do research since it hasn't been sanitised (yet). This is where the followers of "rise of spring" got hold of the infection.
But to be honest after I found out that the journal had been compromised I couldn't trust anything. So now I assume that this is a "wild toad ride" of the fractured psyche of a very sick Twilight Sparkle.
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It really depends upon the reader, and the story is going much more slowly than anticipated (keep in mind I have twenty or so chapters in my head that haven't yet been written and released).
Yeah, it definitely isn't the obviously magical collar doing anything.
Now that I'm caught back up to the current chapter, I have to say that while rereading things made me paranoid enough to see more patterns, I still see nothing to imply that Twilight is leading us to believe something we wouldn't conclude ourselves after seeing what happened. It's too cohesive, and the clues she's working off of aren't especially ambiguous. Luna's secret dream was frankly the most compelling reason to believe Twilight is very, very wrong, but holy crap she literally dragged the whole mess into a possible time travel/precognition tangle. I think the fact that she directly contradicted some things that conspirators told her is what makes her more convincing. It's annoying though, that no matter how I squint I'm just not understanding any better than Twilight what's going on. I agree entirely with her frustrated exclamation "Why does sex have anything to do with anything!?". I do note that she said Shining Armor was on Twilight's side, though; I simply cannot square that with things he said, especially the ones he said not knowing outsiders could hear. Luna spoke like they were working towards some utopia, but I cannot imagine how what he's doing could lead to that. I guess I don't understand where this story is going at all.
I find it particularly bizarre that Celestia is seemingly clueless as well. Combined with Twilight's dreams always EXCLUDING her (remember, Luna implied Twilight has some amount of precognition so her dreams might be meaningful), I'm pretty sure she was genuine in her confusion.
Also my money is on Thunderlane being here to dominate Twilight. Pinkie is insanely hard to read, but there was at least one moment where she wanted to tell Twilight something but didn't. Some possibility that he's there to dominate Twilight, but not involved with the Order, though; Pinkie is playing Twilight like a fiddle, and it's either to train her to submit to the Order, or it's because she wants her to be more in touch with her sexuality and has correctly perceived Twilight's desire to be dominated.
A Possible reason to why the horn, wings, hoofs? Without the creepy
What would a doctor do to strengthen a weak eye? One way is to cover the strong eye with a patch. If these dark-mares are actually newly hatched then their dark magic is petty weak wouldn't you say? Therefore to get their magic up to snuff quickly then; removing the horn, primary feathers, hobble hoofs is a means to make them use and strengthen their dark magic. We know that the horn and feather regrow so it's not like permanent. We know that they don't need to use their horns. (I.E. Twilight and her teleport with an ounckse on)
So why not use the ounckse? not enough of them perhaps? (after all they are illegal) Also Luna's probably kinda embarrassed that she's rusty with dark magic.
The only thing I can't answer is why not the males? some hypnosis: 1) they will as soon as enough females are ready. can't have them both out of commission. 2) they are actually not as strong as the females. So they don't have to go as far. 3) it still gives the females the thrill of being submissive in a Dominate/submissive way (D/s) ( need to checkout D/s relationship in BSDM subgroup. I believe that submissives are actually vary capable people ) 4) the males have multiple females and without the females in control it could get out of hand quickly.
I'm thinking about reading this, but something tells me to be worried about this private journal of Twilight's.
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If it helps (or hurts), I haven't retagged my stories yet but Drama, Mystery, Horror, and Thriller all apply.
6617876 I'll start reading this soon... But I know a part of me is going to regret it.
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Probably! There have been a few public ragequits so far.
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Doesn't really add up with things. Everyone seems quite serious about things, they're just contradictory.
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That depends. I won't tag a story with changelings if that would spoiler the story, though the Groups might give it away in a case like that.
In any event, it's safe to assume changelings are not hinted at in any of the story so far.
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Wow, you're a fast reader.
You came in during a long hiatus, but fortunately I'll be posting updates again soon.
6757644 Can't wait! :) To be honest I started out morbidly fascinated by what's going on, but I think I'm slowly starting to acclimatize(?) to everything.
What are you doing to me?!
Hey Twilight, better to operate under the assumption you've been compromised and work from there. Hope for the best prepare for the worst and all that. Who knows though?
P.S: Why in the name of King Louis the 14ths colorful pleated trousers have you not figured out that Rarity knows you're here you eggheaded grape pony?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!
P.P.S: favorited. :)
Also, just to be crystal clear on this, Shining Armors plan to counteract a sexist society against stallions is to form a patriarchal society based on misogyny and sex?
Hey Trick Question, I love your writing! You are amazing! Ya have me hooked!
When are you starting this story up again, I really want to know what happens!!
Also, I'm a newbie. would someone pls tell me if there is a way to turn spoilers off?
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There isn't a way to do that; you just have to mouse over the black area. That's probably for the best because there are lots of different things ponies could decide to hide there (e.g. the following is TMI: Trick Question is a lady with a penis (for realzies!)).
The story will pick up in the next few days. I'm behind on a bunch of important writing projects that come first (primarily I need to update Broken Symmetry today).
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Maybe! It's still rather unclear, unless you trust Twilight's impressions. (So far that strategy has proved less than reliable...)
6778333 Well actions and words from Shining Armor thus far haven't exactly been painting him and the Order in a particularly mare friendly light if you catch my drift.
Thanks Trick Question!! Really excited for the second part!
Only one problem... I'm on an iOS device! Your right though. It is probably for the best, I don't think I want to know what was under that spoiler anyway!!! Thanks for your trouble!
OHGAWD! I FOUND A WAY TO SEE UNDER SPOILERS ON MY IPAD. WHY, TRICK, WHY!?!?
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Because I was born with one?
6781619 You are seriously the best right now, trick. Respect.
6762303 *based around a D&s lifestyle. as a Dom myself, i think i can see where the Order of Spring is taking this and i have a couple of theories on what is going on, but i'm reluctant to share just yet as i still have questions that need to be answered.
however, i can tell you that we Doms are NOT sexist in any way, shape or form! we have the utmost respect for our subs! also, consider that in the story that stallions are truly oppressed; misandry is rampant in the author's Equestria. while i'm not a fan of the Order's extreme fetishes and somewhat dubious thought of consent, Celestia's sins are far worse.
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I'm not condemning the lifestyles of people who practice these things in their own lives between two individuals of consent. Nor do I think it's misogynistic/misandrist to do so.
One of the telling points for me that it isn't just a healthy thing is his willingness to speak about his own sister in that regard even though she was clearly not a part of this. Plus the dyke comments didn't help at all. There's also the orders issues with consent are falling slowly more and more FoE considering what Twilights parents were getting up to with her. It's gonna take a hell of a lot of maneuvering to drag the order back into a good light is all I'm saying.
Besides, I'm still of the opinion that going to the opposite extreme isn't the proper way to address gender inequality
6793137 to be honest, i'm not really sure who's side i'm on anymore. who's telling the truth and who's lying; it's too hard to tell. at the current moment, i think i'll just sit back and see how things unfold. you are right about one thing, this does kinda feel like a FoE story in many ways. *facepalm* i don't know why i didn't see that sooner.
the truth about everything will come in time... or not. still an entertaining read, though.
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You know what the real kick to the gut is I just only NOW realized, complete moron that I am? "This is the first story in the Rise of Spring setting." whatever's happening ain't gonna end with this fic. Twilight's doomed to failure at least for this particular fic.
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Rite m8, this should be raising more red flags than communist russia.
It's okay to enjoy a little marshmallow, Twilight.