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Ooh, update!
Ok, I know your Twilight is super sheltered and all, but you're making her all but clinically brain dead here, please let her at least have a little brain at all times.
Well, fuck you too, shitfucker. I do hope we're not supposed to be in favor of this. If we are I'd suggest showing a more positive side to all of this at some point.
Yeah, fuck it, the entire order can burn in lava.
Twilight briefly controlled by Luna? Horse insanity indeed.
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7253378 You know what this kinda sounds like? the third Wave feminist movement, fueled by islamic misogynists. With all the batshit crazy libtard garbage inbetween. thats also probably why this story gives me the hebejebees. Here's hoping Twilight comes to her senses and breaks out of the desire+gratification hole she's been dragged into.
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7253793 Atleast I don't believe aliens are trying to beam up our cattle. also its not tin, it's a titanium aluminum alloy designed to deflect radio waves.
also it's not what's in our sky we should be worried about but what awaits beneath the oceans surface and in it's obfuscated depths.
7253845 Yes, yes, all must fear Calamari face.
*twilight, don't give up, no matter what, we'll always be here to protect you
*YEAH JUST DO WHAT I WOULD DO, BELIEVE IN YOU
*Hey twilight, you beat me, theres no way these guys are gonna hold you down
*what you haven't spanked these loonies yet? you got this twilight.
*Technically, it's impossible for you to beat them! but, somehow, I know you can do it!
*Twilight, You are the future of ponies and sex, You have to stay determined.
Trick Question:
A few questions:
What are you trying to show here?
As you know I've been trying to view them in any positive light. But after this (a direct link to team crazy) I can't find any redeeming qualities. My initial thought that they have contracted the equestrian equivalent to Toxoplasmosis* and they're not themselves. The world you've made, whether intentional or not, is a bleak dystopia.
You say you like to explore moral ambiguities but where are the ambiguities? If they are sick as in medically sick?
You've yet to show me why the mares seemingly hobble themselves. For what purpose or is it something else that caused it? I do know about the African tribe where the women subjugate themselves to beatings to show their dedication to their husbands but, it doesn't hobble them. I do know about D/s relationships that some people enter into but they're very consenting about it. Not 'assenting' as the characters here are saying. I also know about the stories from Pitcairn Island but that was a toxic environment that make the people act the way they did. Again is this world just a toxic environment where the ponies are doing things that under normal conditions they would not condone?
I can only assume at this point that Celestia is not around and has been neutralized in some way. I don't see how Luna would want this either.
Why is it that Big Mac has such a large of a harem? (Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie, Cheerilee, and now he's trying to get Twilight ) Why? what's so special about this apple farmer? I'd assume Twilight's brother would have first dibs on her in this wacky world you've made.
Why oh why are they trying to convert Twilight over to their side and then proceed to show her why she shouldn't? I'd think that they'd try sweetness and light. That they aren't any different than what she's used to before they show the darker elements. Believe me that how cults get their followers. Here there is nothing like that. Please don't tell me that there's a timing issue they've already past that point.
Also why bother with Twilight at all now? At this point it wouldn't it be easier for them to forget her and continue on with their conquest or kill her. You really haven't shown Twilight or us why they need her. (or did I forget something?)
In all is there any good from Team Crazy? Or are they just demented or deluded individuals following a sex-cult.
*Toxoplasmosis is not that deadly nor is it that severe. about 1/3 to 1/2 of the human population has it.
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I can't directly respond to anything that would give away story elements.
"Ambiguity" might be the wrong word, since some readers will see strong moral values in one direction or another. It's definitely fair to say different readers will see different things. The picture will likely become more cohesive over time, but that may depend upon the reader as well.
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Twilight has almost zero experience with male genitals, and things like this are probably going to squick her. It's easy to forget how unusual those sorts of sights are in the days of the internet.
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That's fair. I didn't expect you to answer me in the comments anyway but more of: Are you sure this is the direction you want to go? Because this is what I see from here.
Hopefully soon. I am getting slightly frustrated with not knowing what the hell is going on and this is, in some ways, me lashing out. sorry 'bout that.
This story is endlessly chilling, disturbing and confusing. This is one of the great horror stories
7253853 Cthulu was a prank played on humans.
7254222 I'm pretty sure she's seen a cock before on Thunderlane, she should have been able to put two and two together a bit faster than that, especially where the tenting would have to be.
7254346 The true evil is the goblin elves living in my favorite hat.
Still loving this story. Brilliant intrigue as ever keep up the great work!
First off, yay sissymac! I just hope one or more of the alicorns end up dominant, cause having all of them be submissives is a bit far. The law of large numbers alone would demand some variation, though the poor sample size would be far from representative. What about Flurry Heart? I suddenly got it in my head them casting the spell on her and being 'yup, 100% dom.'
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Team Crazy's argument is that they're satisfying Coherent Extrapolated Volition. That argument is a bit weak, because of the mind controly stuff. The difference between "assent" and "consent" is all the difference.
As to the hobbling, it's extreme but not maiming. Other than the lobotomy it's all on the same level as say, the lizard man. Maybe a touch less so, since it's cosmetically hide-able. There's nothing inherently wrong with these kinks, if they were fully consensual. Even the lobotomy would be...arguable. And of course very, very hot if you happen to have those fetishes.
As to why Big Mac would have a large harem, it would be because there's a natural imbalance in Dominants vs submissives in favor of having many subs for each dom. Combine that with the ~3:1 gender ratio, and male dominants should be in high demand...as would transgender ones.
As to why they need to convert Twi, there are two reasons. First, the imminently practical one of nullifying a powerful, resourceful enemy out there. Secondly, and more importantly, she's still their friend. They don't want bad shit to happen to her, and they consider the whole of her unconverted time bad shit. Twilight is physically, mentally, and emotionally strained. She's mentally and sexually frustrated, and had never been in a sound psychological state to start with. All Team Crazy wants is to help Twi, and they honestly don't see a real non-fictitious problem with it. They're almost certainly wrong, but not evil.
Also, consider what they're fighting against. Like ours, their brand of sexual Puritanism is off the rails. It's a sexist, repressive, and unjust system that has persisted for centuries or more. It's harmful to a whole class of ponies at least, and perhaps to society as a whole. It's entrenched and invisible and poisonous.
There is a world where Team Crazy are the good guys... If they were right about CEV (they almost certainly are not) and lived in a world much more like ours. But Celestia is not malicious, and consent matters. Both sides are bad guys here- Celestia allowed sexism and oppression, and Team Crazy for pushing past the bounds of consent. On the other hand, they could both be seen as good guys- trying to fix a great evil in their own imperfect way.
OK, this is probably the one thing I really didn't expect to come up.
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Yeah, I think we can take it as red that the crusaders are compromised.
My reaction exactly
So anyone else think Big Macs state was a bit of a "drag"...
I'll just leave now
W E W L A D
I always thought Braeburn would be the girlyboy.
wait no stop please don't do that. please don't imply that
I don't do gmilfs man I just can't
IT'S HAPPENING
As adorable as it is to see Twilight act like how the average internet user does when exposed to any Rule34, it's kind of getting annoying that every little new thing makes her have a miniature freakout.
She really never had a chance at all, did she?
Soooo is someone following The Order bankrolling her? I can't imagine she's getting a lot of dress work done with all this work she's doing for the order.