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So many updates!
I'm sure there is nothing relevant to the story hidden in this one however.
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It'll be different, but not necessarily any less dark or disturbing. I consider the tone to be far less abusive, but it's high on ethical ambiguity and taboo.
Some have bailed ship, while others have stuck with it for the plot. Or for the "plot", though there is currently more of the former than the latter.
EDIT: So yeah, tread carefully. There are points where it will seem very much like FoE and other points where it won't seem like FoE at all. Twilight's not the most impartial narrator, and the story has a lot of... things which make its telling complicated. I won't blame you if you want to cut out early rather than risk it.
Oh f*** you pinkie, you bucking traitor, you were the one to tell shining armor about Twilight and how to catch her. Twilight should realize what happened, at this point, Twilight should just try and find Rainbow Dash and spike, and try to figure out if they're still sane, and if so get them the buck out of there so they can meet up with Celestia.
Twilight should have taken Applejack instead.
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Well, I read it, and it made this song play in my head:
EDIT: video removed by author';s request.
Which is actually a good thing. It means your story pissed me off, which means it engaged me. I hate hate hate mind control and slavery. Probably because I'm just so 'Murican that I bleed Freedom and piss Independence.
That said... I don't know if I can continue. Now, this is a failing on my part, not yours, and that is this: I jsut can't handle bad endings. Just... well, if I wanted to see the bad guys win, evil triumph, and good people(ponies) suffering... I'd turn on the news. I read fiction to escape from that. To flee to a world where good prevails and the wicked are punished, where after much struggle and strife, the good guys can pull out a win. Maybe not back to sunshine, rainbows and Breezy farts, but at least to the point where healing can begin.
Now, my problem is that I can't very well ask you to just PM me a "yes or no" so I know to keep reading or not. I will say that the story has pretty good pacing, characters are in tact(those not under control), and you've drenched the atmosphere with a palpable sense of dread and desperation, which is all excellent. I did give an up-vote, because that is good storytelling, no matter my personal opinions. So, I want to keep on keeping on, but... guh, damn my over-inflated sense of justice! I blame too many Saturday morning cartoons growing up...
So... yeah. Damn fine job, and I may keep an eye on this, but maybe not. I know, I know, the loss of one reader on the internet must fill you with such sadness and sucked out your sense of meaning, but I can only do so much.
Keep up the good work, friend!
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Here is the clearest answer I can give.
0) This isn't revenge porn. Don't expect hate, violence, or righteous comeuppance to be the place this fic is headed. That doesn't mean "bad end" necessarily, but different readers will reach very different conclusions on that.
1) What you think is happening, how "bad" the "bad guys" are, and even whether or not they're bad at all(!), is something that will change for most readers multiple times.
2) If you hate MC in all forms, like, even if it is voluntary, then you should hit the back button with great haste.
3) If you jump to conclusions easily about what's actually happening, then you should hit the back button with great haste.
4) If you get angry enough to punch things, please don't hurt ponies.
Based on what you've said, I think you should stop reading now; but it is possible that the fic could change your opinions, so I can't really say. I don't think where the fic is headed is the same as FoE, but that's my opinion and YMMV.
I can definitely say if you've made it all the way through so far that you've made it much further than most who react in that way, so kudos for what that is worth.
unless she's talking about stealing apples I wonder where the illegal stuff she was supposed to mention is. It's absence could be suspicious. Also them heading deeper into the vampire bats territory is questionable.
And of course I just really since AJ lives with Big Mac, maybe she isn't just starting to go through things like she seemed.
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Wondered the same thing about her teeth. Do incisors count as front teeth? Too bad she didn't give us the number, as she had with Rarivamp's magic fangs.
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How do you figure? I mean, how do you figure Pinkie betrayed them?
... Also, I just had a vision of how they catch Rainbow Dash .
"Hey Rainbow Crash, I hear you're a lesbian."
"Am not!"
"Oh yeah? Prove it! Chop chop, clop clop, face down ass up, we don't have all day... okay, now watch the pretty stone and let it aaall go..."
OK after reading the story a bit more I am kind of getting both "sides" view points (even though we have only heard team I MUST %=/€ EVERYONE IN THE ENTIERTY OF EQUESTRIA, atleast directly on their opinions but from there attitudes toward Celestia I am guessing her rule is the opposite on the spectrum)
So I am going to dive into both groups for what I am getting off (no pun intended) of them... *I regret everything*
Team Shining boner is seemingly mostly focused on the sexual reform and expression for equestria allowing sex to be viewed in a way that is not taboo and even then something normal, that includes the extremes of the spectrum such as BDSM,same-gender sex (not certain but can guess not as much ),polygamy, and incest. They do not see sex not only as a thing to do but rather a desire that needs to be quenched and handled by a figure besides the pony themselves. A good guess would mean this to be a stallion who I guess in there idea of society is supposed to be in charge and in control of his harem and actions. Mares in this society have very little say in their rights being treated as objects and can be raped (I am hoping there is atleast a age of untouchabillity for all those fillies and colts) whenever a stallion needs to release his desires and belives the pony will be for it afterwards. However it seems the mares do not care rather enjoying all the kinkyness on how they are treated and rather enjoy not having to have to worry about all those tough decisions, torture and hold a mare hostage but eventually she will give in and is all for this plan (I know that is a theme for the story but trick can you let on of the "bad guys" state a minimum amount of time between hey I am only showing you what you may like and I am holding you hostage) So in the end they are a group who in there eyes is bringing enlightenment to the pony masses making sex (no matter the kind) totally cool no matter when, where,or who with through "re-education"and policy's that are supposed to be the best for every one in there eyes like rape becoming nearly nonexistent due to the eventual change in mind by a user who has been shown the "light" and things such as limiters put in place to make sure mares can not have to worry and let all the stallions handle the hard jobs, for as we know yay for team bros.
OK so we have a lot less to work with for Celestias side but a few facts can be guessed by the way team EVERY MARE IS MY EFF TOY that Celestias policy of sex is fairly old fashioned frowning Apoun actions that I had listened above probably having numerous laws in place that make said actions either illegal or apear immoral in the publics eye. However it can be assumed her laws are specifically falling more in line with the views of feminism taking the woman's side on key issues like gender equality and Rape.
However much is left to guess about her for 1 Is really what shining saying the truth or is he just trying to convert his sister into his ^#!# either way there is so little to work off of with Celestia.
So in the end both sides have VERY large gaps to fill and I can only guess eachs full motives...
I still want twilight to become independent and ruling her own kingdom with possibly a mix on reforms being more open to sex but not as extreme as TEAM COOL WITH SISTER SEX...this could be taken with a grain of salt however for she would then make enemies with the 2 most influential people in her life.
I hope you respond trick for I want your opinion on if I am capturing the groups fairly well.
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I have a feeling we're not going to get to much into actual policy
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I struggle to understand how you can make mind break, rape/rape threats, nonconsensual mind control, and nonconsensual "assentual" sexual slavery into something that has any actual merit. If they want to reform Equestria's gender politics, this is the absolutely most fucked up way to go about it. I struggle to understand how you think this holds any sort of moral ambiguity.
I keep seeing comments by Trick Question implying everything about the conflict will appear flipped on its head one or even multiple times, but even on a re-read I'm not seeing it. The only way I could even see this raising interesting moral questions is if we get a "the last few noninfected are now the scary boogiemen" situation.
Or if it's revealed that this sex cult is in fact the natural order and the mind control was in the past to make ponies what we think is normal. But that doesn't really Jive with the complete refusal to explain themselves prior to brain surgery...