Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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Wow...Flash doesn't have a good poker face, does he? Wonder what will happen next...maybe Twilight will find out and dump him and then an even more worse shadow will pop up...
I hope the two stay together...though I'm guessing Sunset will soon interfere with that.
A Penis Monster. I did not expect that at all
I feel this is an appropriate message for Flash.
Well, I take it that upgrade's lost forever. I liked the opening bit with Pinkie. And is it just me, or was Spike shitting on Flash's shoes karma?
Oh dear, the only way Flash could have a bigger dick now is if he covered it in woad and called it Prince Blueballed.
Wow, he is in some serious trouble.
KO awesome chapter, looks like Flash has a lot of more problems on his hands. Hope he work things out.
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Omg, if Flash and Twilight split up I will cry myself to sleep for a whole week. This story is the only thing that I read and I have grown attached to it since the start. I will cry if they split up. I swear!
7235318 I said I hope they stay together!
Now that I think about it, I'm surprised at the opening of this chapter. I thought Pinkie would come in and Flash would be horrible to her too...huh. Guess I'm just expecting too many bad things to happen in this story right now.
I'd have read this chapter earlier, except I had to do something that could've been done a lot earlier.
This chapter... was tough to read. Flash is doing some really ass-inine stuff to his wonderful life, and he knows it. Yet he can't seem to pull his mind out of the gutter. The fact that he all of his Personas except the ones from Fool and Devil extremely concerning.
Then, there's Mara's sudden appearance. Quite fitting that a monster of the Inverted Tower Arcana is the thing that will crumble everything good that Flash has earned.
Moth, I love your cooking, but you put too much spicy sauce. Can we get a glass of milk?
Chapter was great as usual.
I cannot believe you actually put Mara in the story. And you even gave him some level of justification instead of being, like, 'lol penis' or something.
Oh joy, Flash, please, get your legs out of your arse and start fixing your life. Atleast in the story they recognise that the fight appeared out of nowhere.
7235441 Well, Flash has been such a dick lately, it seemed only fitting.
7235465 But still. It's especially jarring because I seem to recall you saying Mara wouldn't be making an appearance (or maybe I'm just remembering wrong, who know?).
7235478 I did say that, but that was back in October 2014. A lot of things that are in the story now weren't expected to be in it back then.
Wow, apparently what Flash did was such a dick move that even the Velvet Room hates him now. He better get his act together before he screws up the team even more.
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Could be worse, he could always have ended up having to deal with Mishaguji for good measure! Cursed Emissions, indeed.
I really, really hope I'm wrong here, but suddenly I suspect that Flash isn't going to get it together and fess up to Twilight until the penultimate Velvet Room fight.
Man, I feel like jumping in as an unofficial psychiatrist to help work out the problems between Flash and Twilight, just to see this fight stop.
So...how long is this train of self destruction going to keep going before someone actually slaps some goddamn sense into Flash.
(Personally, my money's on Fluttershy. Either her, Sunset or Twilight. Maybe Aj.)
7236229 I am official, and I don't even know where to start with these two! It is clear that there's a trust issue, and my brain tells me that after everything that has happened, the outcome is only one, but my heart can't accept it.
I would have thought Betelgeuse would still work, or is Flash just that stubborn.
I love that even his default Persona seemed pissed at him. Seriously Flash, when wide swaths of your latent sub-conscious are refusing to co-operate with you, maybe it's time to take a moment and evaluate your life.
Flash...
That's all I have to say. He's pissing me off so much right now, I can't even give a solid comment.
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Not his latent sub-concious, but the figments product of the people he knows are/will be extremely dissapointed at him. Magician, Priestess, Empress, Emperor... All of them are the people he doesn't want to let down, but has, and is extremely defensive towards them, rejecting them in the same process.
With the exception of Fool, who is himself and and Flash can't concede whether he's right or wrong, and Devil, whom Flash doesn't have the best disposition towards, he himself has locked down the bonds that he has created.
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Right, but a Persona is also the Mask you use to face the world. So while the represent they people in his life, they are also themselves aspects of Flash (which is how I interpret why so many of his are part of pop culture vs the standard forms we see in the games).
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His Parents maybe...
It's been a long time since Flash's Panic weakness was last a factor. Was that intended to be foreshadowing for this?
The Velvet room is been getting less and less secure all the time. I wonder, did pulling Eris inside all those months ago create a virus vector?
7239988 I don't think you completely understand what happened in this chapter. It had nothing whatsoever to do with Flash being hit with Panic status. Also, you might have missed the last few paragraphs...
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A minor problem early on in the story is often used to introduce a concept to the audience. When it comes up again, it still qualifies as foreshadowing even if the more serious version has a completely different cause.
Of course I know what happened. I was being deliberately vague for the sake of people scrolling too quickly on the index page, and because going into detail served no purpose at the present time.
Enjoy your vacation from writing.
7240018 Except there's no relation between the two whatsoever. Flash getting hit with Panic status way back at the beginning of the story is just A Thing That Happens in the Persona games. It has absolutely nothing to do with his problems in the present.
Don't automatically assume something is foreshadowing just because you expect foreshadowing.
A giant, green penis demon....so, Flash´s well, dickery, is represented by Mara? Also, I can´t wait to see how this all turns out
I am a long time fan of Persona and was wondering when Mara would show its ugly face
If there wasn't that (rather stupid) love affair going on in the background, you'd think Flash's reaction would be:
"You know, I've been doing this for nearly a year, and I'd think I've seen everything by now - and then we get a giant penis demon literally dropping in, in the middle of a fight."
7242139 "Love affair"? Trixie isn't a love affair. Trixie is a booty call. And that's kinda...WHY the giant penis demon showed up in the first place. Was...was that not clear? Did I not provide enough clues for readers to pick up on that?
7235465 damn. Just damn. The relatability scale is skyrocketing right now, but still flash really fucked up and his instability with his soul and mind proves it with how he cant use most of his personas in this fight. Looking forward to the next chap whenever its up.
7242186 I'll be the first to admit, I'm not the most versed in American slang.
And yes, I clued in and it was clear enough. But even knowing that, that thing's appearance still feels "wat" inducing (hence my comment).
7240671 I'm pretty sure Mara's appeared in one of the fights, on Silver Spoon's birthday, I believe
7243370 only if it was LTE (I haven't started reading that) Mara has yet to appear until now.
7243378 Hmm, possibly, been awhile. I can't remember the date of Silver Spoon's birthday
7243370 No, you're wrong. Mara has never appeared until now. You're mistakenly thinking of one of the Geminis, which had a penis-shaped head.
7243378 Mara has not appeared until the most recent chapter. Not in either version of the story.
7243497 I thought Flash summoned Mara for that fight? Fight a dick with a dick. Must be misremembering
7243599 You're absolutely misremembering.
7243497 thank you for the clarification.
7243644 Thank you Moth, I'd re-read the fight....but I can't remember the date of the fight
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It's 5/22 (Sun), the 5 part day, 6 parts in LTE.
7243842 Thanks
Seems to me like Flash is going through the same thing Fluttershy did. He'd better confess to Twilight and get his shit together before things pass the point of no return. I really hope that Flash and Twilight will be together in the end, but I wouldn't be surprised if Twilight broke up with him for awhile after what he did. And then there's the issue of why Twilight is so bent out of shape about Silver Spoon.
Things are just going to keep getting worse before they get better, aren't they?