Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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She's Nervicited.
He nailed her straight into another world.
Oh... shit... Shitshitshitshitshit...
I was worried this chapter might end like this.
I will be on pins and needles all day tomorrow.
6097672 You sound like you are surprised.
AJ now knows some of what's going down and we hit the do or die point with Shy. Welcome to the show people...
Well, that's certainly one way to do a cliffhanger. Not that it is an actual surprise to me, I just didn't think it would go this way.
Fluttershy really barely has any mask left at this point. She's only hiding things from the kids now.
Also, that god damn cliffhanger. I know most of us probably saw it coming, but still.
Oh fuck! It's Tuesday already?
We all knew it was coming, but nobody was ready. Next chapter is gonna be a doozy.
Wait, what?! We're in Zodiac now?! NOW?!!!!
HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK!!!!! I NEED TO GET MY-
SHIT!!!!!
Everyone! grab your weapons, and prepare for combat! I repeat, grab your weapons and prepare for combat! We've got a live one coming!!!!
Yay! I'm here commenting early! I wonder ......will they fight naked? Of course, that app they have will cover them, but what after? What happens next? No one knows! except maybe like two people including MythrilMoth.
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Ah, shit...
I wonder what the precise reason was that Flash and Dash doing it disgusted Fluttershy. Fluttershy just straight up telling Applejack that was unexpected. I wonder what AJ was thinking as she heard all of this. Twilight's right that the reason they don't know what Shy's went through is because Shy won't tell them; I wonder if Shy will open up about that tomorrow. Sunset being in Neighpon is interesting.
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Maybe she's just fed up with Flash screwing every girl in sight and getting away with it? Maybe it's something else? Maybe we'll never know.
It's interesting that she went somewhere for Spring Break? Just because she's a psychotic sociopath who has gone out of her way to ruin several lives doesn't mean she doesn't do normal shit too.
6097889 On the first, I meant that there were a number of possible reasons, and I wondered which one it was. Not asking for an answer, just wondering.
On the second, I meant that it was an interesting choice of destination.
I'm hyped!
6097669 hahahaha nice one
Oh shit.
Dammit! Had a great joke primed and ready for this:
6097770 Yes Ma'am! Puts on utility belt full of bagels, throwing knifes and bacon longsword I'm always beary prebeared for any unbearable Shadows!
So, Flash and Rarity aren't wearing anything going into Zodiac. First instinct is probably gonna be to hit Black Butterfly. But that's virtual clothing. So when they exit Zodiac again, they'll still be butt-naked, probably in public, definitely in front of their friends.
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6098233 Considering what they had for evening plans, I'm not sure if they packed their phones. Better run back to the cabana Flash!
It really is strange how ZIT has pretty much disregarded Fluttershy's birthday. No planning, no tension, no anything. They either assumed she was safe, or just didn't give a shit.
Eyup, weirder and weirder.
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Hmm. I seem to see a mention of a phone there.
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"But... you're going to fight... don't you think you should fight with... you know."
"NO TIME. THE BREEZE IS COMFORTING DURING TIMES LIKE THESE."
~ Wolfram Alpha
6098340 Yeah, I overlooked that part. Still might leave Rarity out of the fight though, but I imagine she brought her phone with.
I wonder what the fight will be like since Fluttershy is already aware of Zodiac and can fight. That is, assuming this is a Birthday attack. I could imagine Sunset triggering Zodiac just to send the message that they're never safe, no matter how far they run.
Also, if Sunset really is in Neighpon, she's 13 hours ahead of Haytona. Probably not relevant though.
6097675 I was anticipating exactly this happening. It's just another thing entirely for me to actually see it happening. It became much more real than it ever was in my head. I did edit my comment to tone it down after a few minutes because I felt it looked like I was freaking out too much. That doesn't lessen the impact I felt upon seeing the single line:
The word Zodiac is all I needed to see. I instantly knew this is the biggest moment of truth since the Fluttershy-Eris reveal. And I am absolutely terrified for Fluttershy's life for more than one reason.
Speaking of her, this chapter... Damn, I want to give her a hug, metal stick to the balls be damned.
"Zodiac"
FUCK.
> Because of your...*ahem* encounter prior to sleep, you are now in Great status!
Oh. Well. That's better. (Yeah as if that would be a game prompt XD)
Oh, Fluttershy. It isn't enough to just undo the wrongs you committed if you don't change what led to them in the first place. Treating the symptoms without addressing the disease isn't solving the problem. But first, the fact that there is a problem must be recognized. Fluttershy is clearly too close to the situation to fix it, and she resents the implication that there's anything to fix. Still, she's cracking under the rest of the dorm's blended positivity and guilt, especially Sonata's.
As for that cliffhanger... yeah, this is not good. Especially since bringing their phones doesn't seem thematically appropriate for a romantic rendezvous.
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Dude, read the credits on the Story Description.
EDIT: I'm an idiot that should be 100% awake when commenting. Apologies to all concerned
6098971 *weary sigh* He's complimenting Zef on being funny, you twat. Jesus, calm the fuck down and THINK before you jump down people's throats once in a while...
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She also doesn't really seem all that remorseful. She's stopped doing it, but stops before admitting she actually did something very wrong.
This is... understandable, it's much more pleasant to stop offending behavior but not actually apologize, but is very hard to accept given the magnitude of what she did.
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Added an edit with an apology. Though in my defense, I think in my comment I portrayed calmness. In hindsight, perhaps I should have added an emoji to help tone it down.
6099056 We all derp from time to time.
Funny as it may seem, I'm going to echo the sentiments here :) These chapters represent a lot of personal investment and months of planning, the characters taking us into surprising and interesting places, and lots, lots, and lots of brainstorming. And even then, I'm only there to propose the most general of ideas; it's always been MM who decides if they fit with what he has planned, and does the heavy lifting of actually writing. I'm looking forward to the execution of these story arcs as you all are :D
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Technically, the principals don't know either; Cadance just omitted that particular detail because it's not worth the trouble of explaining everything yet to Applejack.
But... Fluttershy's mask really is but a faint echo of what it once was, isn't it?
Quick note to all and I don't want to make another blog post just to retract a now-deleted blog post:
I discovered it'll be easier on my creative flow to write the two versions of this chapter simultaneously, so LTE and standard WILL simulpost today after all.
So if you saw that blog post, ignore it.
Damn MythrilMoth, at this point all you have to do is start killing off your characters left and right and you'll be the next George R.R. Martin!
Just one thing...please no orgies, it'd just be too much .
Wow. Um, I guess something bad happened with this "Highlord" for him to have so many comments deleted, either by himself or by MM.
UUUUHHHHHHHHHHH SHOULD I BE WORRIED...???
6099253 Not really. I just clicked the Post Comment button too many times thinking that it wasn't working and ended up posting the exact same comment severl times, so I had to delete several of them to avoid getting on anybody's nerves, that's all.
6099370 I had wondered why I stopped in to check and saw a delete flood...
6099381 Sorry about that .
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Oh, wow. That was an unfortunate event
Sorry for assuming the worst.
6099464 It's ok, I forgive you .
Warning you all right now, you MUST read the LTE version of today's chapter because some of the most crucial events today happen outside of Flash's POV.
Moth, you EVIL BITCH!
6099313 There's no particular reason. Tarot and Astrology are, technically, different and unrelated kinds of divination. It's just that Persona uses Tarot as its central motif, and Persona EG uses classical Western Astrology as its own vehicle :) Flash, being the Protagonist of a Persona-based story, draws the Fool because the tale is about his "journey", and he also happens to be a Virgo.
6099646 Uh, mind telling me where these 'crucial events' are? 'Cause I just scanned LTE twice and saw nothing besides the sex.