Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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D'aww... I fully support Flashlight now... You've convinced me.
WHERE- I mean, Excuse me but where might this content be, because I haven't been able to locate it.
5468631 The instructions on how to find it are right there. I left them deliberately vague so as not to aggravate any mods that might be wandering around here, and yet clear enough that most people should figure out how to find it. In the future, once the story is properly up for viewing on my website in full and up-to-date, I'll change that to "See the bonus content on my website" and that'll be that.
I was ecstatic when Twilight won. This was a really sweet chapter.
And I read the alternate version with added adult content, and I was pleased with it.
What the hell happened to Fluttershy? Huh... the timing of how she ran off like that, and how upset she is...
....... Damn it.... I'm suspicious again....
[Flash shares a tender moment with Twilight]
Yeah, pretty accurate statement, since it was mostly cuteness over anything else. Not that I find it dissapointing .
And I swear, by this point, everytime you write detailed descriptions about anything (attires and wardrobe), now I just read: "Applejack is wearing a red dress." My brain cannot picture so many details
Altough, Snails being nowhere in sight is kind of unnerving... aaaaaand now I think he did something bad to one of Twilight's personal effects, namely Spike.
5468794 With Spike locked up in the dorm and the keys in Flash's pocket?
Coincidence? I think not.
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Oooh Okee!
Ok, now I'm really worried about Fluttershy. Either all this is one giant red-herring or...oh boy.
I was actually expecting something to happen to Twilight when she won. Something right out of Carrie even.
I fear the worst for Fluttershy. PLEASE LET HER BE OKAY MOTH. I don't think my heart will make it with all this drama.
~ Ze Royal Doofus
5468804
Touché
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Haha, I have the same problem. I just don't understand descriptions, no matter how simple or in what language I just cant picture what the author is trying to tell me (not to mention that I believed Twilight was too flat to use a dress like what I am barely able to understand of your description). That is why I prefer images and I'm liking the format on MM.net, pretty images
About the "extra" material, yeah, that mas more cute that anything else. Given Twilight is going to wake up really sore the next day, sleeping with jewelry on is really bad.
Ooooh, that Chekov's Gun with Fluttershy. Damn the fact that I am caught up and have to wait for chapters to post!
I get a page not found message while trying to access the bonus content. Oh and Sunset Shimmer should have set up a trap in case she lost, she could go out causing trouble for Twilight. Maybe a bucket of pig's blood?
That "bonus content" was really cute, and the way you patched us over to it was quite clever. Good show, MythrilMoth.
>>gamexpert1990
Total agree, sudden disappearance from both characters. It is fishy.
"This may be the first time I've ever seen her without her hat."
But in entry 10/30, the halloween dance, she took off her hat ahwile for the full metal alchemist, the Edward Elric costume, right?
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Then you're doing it wrong. You have to manually edit the URL with the chapter number (NOT the date!) to get at it. Using the calendar on the left won't help you, because only two chapters are up right now: the very first chapter, and the very latest chapter.
5470413 Derp. Yeah. But you can also handwave that as "other than when she's wearing a costume".
...eh, I'll fix it later.
I liked this chapter, although I am curious as to exactly what happened to Fluttershy. If Snips or Snails did anything to her, will Flash manage to hold onto his promise of not killing them, or will he make good on his threat? I know it's likely the former, but you never know.
At this point, Sunset is becoming almost comical in her dealings with Flash and the girls. All she needs now is a dastardly mustache she can twirl.
Also, the bonus chapter was very cute. I do wonder what repercussions will arise from this, seeing as how everyone seems to view Flash's room as a communal area. I almost hope it's Luna or Pinkie that walks in on them in their current state. I think they'd have the best reactions, at this point. Shining would likely just try to kill Flash.
Oh boy. I kept waiting for the other show to drop, but it turns out it was offscreen. I really hope I'm wrong about what happened to Fluttershy. Still, Sunset's definitely going to seek revenge...
(Also, go Coco!)
Is it sad that I read everything so far in one day?
~Silver Spade
5471937 Sad, no. Impressive and a little frightening? Yes.
5471937 All hail Silver Spade, great and Powerful (s)he be!
I am irrationally disappointed that there is no spartan-style battle armor on her person.
No galoshes? But what if it rains?!
Anyway, a nice little interlude. Worried about Fluttershy; no idea what's going on with he.. Oh. Oh. Oh shoot. Just had idea. It is not a good one.
5471980 The sad part is, I was going to wait for you to finish it so I wouldn't have to wait. Oh well Keep up the great work your stories tend to keep me entertained the most.
5473169 DANG STRAIGHT! BOW BEFORE THE AWESOME MIGHT THAT IS THE GREAT AND POWERFUL SILVER SPADE!
~Silver Spade
Yeah, gotta agree with everyone else: that bonus at the end was adorable. Mildly arousing, but adorable.
I. MAGICIAN (Twilight Sparkle):Have sexy fun times in room!! rank 8 (Rank UP!) Lol
I've tried multiple times it doesn't work!
I've done all of the steps you have told me to do. Not the date the number 78, I've replaced the "001" and the main part that I don't remember of the top of my head. And, when I DO replace the "001" it says Web page not found, and when I change the main part it says that it may be under maintenance or that it may have been moved to a new permanent site... which one is it!?
AAAAANNNNNDD Twilight moves in for the kill, an extra spurt of speed as she catches up with Coco, I can't believe it folks looks like she's going for the 'I want to spend the night with you option!' THE CROWD GOS WILD, the two links are speeding towards the finsh, Pinkie and Trixie just behind by a tails length! We're at the final leg of the race!
I adore the pacing Flash and Twilight's relationship has had. Twilight is a sweet and in many ways very demure character, yet I have zero trouble buying her showing so much cleavage or the intimate details of the LTE version. It's entirely earned.
Beautiful chapter, and cute LTE bonus scene. This seems like a good chapter to ask something I've been wondering: How does romance work in the Persona series? I have figured out that in the games romance apparently is linked to social links, so it is essentially dating, but I do not know how many people you can date at once in the games or how to pick who should be your main relation. Also just a minor thought, if Persona EG were a real game (wish it was) would Flash always end up dating Twilight or could the 'player' pick anyone as a romance option?
Okay, this one was another curveball. As with what happens with those, I'm not sure how well does this one reflects the events of this rank up.
Bloody hell fire on a matchstick! $200? I only ask because that seems like quite a lot for just two days work. If I were to pull a twelve hour shift at work that'd only net me 70 quid...
...and once again, the connected blog post no longer exists.
7107626 Of course, dollars are probably less valuable than quid. Add on that minimum wage is at least ten bucks an hour, and it really isn't too hard to make 200 in two days.
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I caught this as well.
... But i imagined edward in a stetson first.