Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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Holy crap...
I admit I like the way you handled this universes counterpart to that incident, but holy crap!
The way you handled Nightmare Moon in this universe is genius. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this in 2015.
Ho. Lee. Sheeeeeeeeeet.
Very unexpected, and see you next year!
Flash can just gasp, I Screamed. Screamed Hard, like until I nearly lost my voice. Then I calmed down and read the rest and here's what I said,
and I quote,
"Celestia has to be god. No doubt. She begged, begged!, for the charges against her sister to be changed from attempted murder to assult. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?! WHADDUYA WANT HER TO DO FINISH THE JOB?! I can't do this.... the emotions are too strong."
Well, damn. That was certainly a visceral chapter.
This is how I saw you writing this:
"Okay, how do I handle EQG NMM? I'VE GOT IT!! Attempted murder with a knife. Then I'll take a nice, short hiatus. Yup, my followers won't be spamming the comments section, alright!"
I was just thinking, 'Dafuq, why is she telling some random new person who is in a dorm that caused enough suspicion for said woman to be there?" lol
Well, wasn't expecting this kind of revelation today. A lot of visceral feelings in the story, mixed with [READ: personal reasons] have put me on edge, which is a great sign of your writing skills, having moved me in that way. Kudos
So that's a thing that happened. As some one who has been literally stabbed by family, I can now understand your version of Celestia a lot better.
Well, it's not like she could fire agony rays at Celestia. Still, yikes.
As for the voting, I hope Luna is keeping an eye on the vote totals. And timestamps. Definitely going to need timestamps. This is actually an interesting thought exercise from a programming perspective.
Looking forward to more.
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The real superpower of those of the Fool Arcana isn't infinite Persona potential. It's getting anyone and everyone to open up to them.
Gh...just the very realistic handling of a NMM-style breakdown...I got chills from that. Kudos to ya for that.
Whoa, didn't see that one coming.
A pretty interesting, if slightly over-the-top, way to incorporate Nightmare Moon into the Equestria Girls universe (well, an Equestria Girls-esque universe). I kinda like it.
Luna is Thug. I love her more.
HOLY SHIT!!!
This may be the half-asleep ramblings of an already-weird guy, but...
I can't help but wonder what her evil name would be in this universe.
Nightmare Stab?
Stabbity Moon?
Knifemare Moon?
Ouch, right in the feels there.
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Dude, you have no idea what is down the road.
6137214 Well, I did decide to read this story as an attempt to stab at in by I think it's going to stab me back even harder later like most SMT games. Except Devil Survivor. That one not so much.
SHIT SON!
This is a scary way to think how Nightmare Moon would be in the human world. It shows how she rebelled against her sister out of jealousy, ended up hurting her and was separated for years because of her mistake. She's lucky she has such a forgiving sister.