Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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How many layers of "Oh shit" can there be?
It's amazing how just three lines can turn everything you knew upside-down.
FU**ING CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Devil is always in the details.
Nice reference to Agent Sweetie Drops. Was Sunset possessed at the end?
Well..that was an ominous ending.
Also, regarding the potential context of the next "If..." chapter:
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7158928 Imgur's still blacklisting FiMF there, hotshot.
Wait...what? Sunset Shimmer, and, the her Shadow eyes, and the red text. What?! Oh, so much hype for the reveal
Holy shit... okay then, this chapter was a handful.
First of all, I really hope Flash Sentry isn't in the dog house for too long with this.
And that ending... Oh God that ending...
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I have no idea what any of that means.
...seriously.
Okay, people are taking the news well. Some better than others. I never expected the sex-crazed, pink girls to still be giving Flash's parents the cold shoulder. Then again, forgiveness is the hardests of actions.
A ha! More future talk!
Cinemasins' voice: "That's racist."
Wait, where did the SUV come from? I'm assuming Flash had it already, but still...
Sweet baby Jesus. This is a heavy dialogue chapter. I get why is that, but I never expected that to be so extensive.
Vinyl: HA! Jokes on you!
Flash: (Crap...)
*Sigh* if only...
Missing a "y" in the end, I think.
I think there's something missing in that sentence, there're three verbs and only one conjuction. IDK, it looks odd to me.
I'm hearing chains rattling.
That is true.
That's cute.
*Hurk*
That's... a pretty grim implication.
Oh, that's some major bull.
I... Kinda understand what Celestia feels. She always looks after the people she cares, but doesn't get to be selfish once in a while. Sure, the baby part is difficult, but denying your own wantings is also hard.
And that ending made my blood freeze over. Kill Sunset Shimmer! Kill her now!
7159009 Imgur images don't work on this site.
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They work for me :S
I wonder how much of that was actually Sunset.
First off, you forgot to do your customary video link for the "Thou art I, and I am Thou..." on this version. It's there on the LTE version.
Interesting that Flash's parents are independently well-off and don't actually depend on their jobs for income. So, Flash's father does well with investments and his mother is a heiress. They don't flaunt their wealth. That's the same setup as Rarity's parents. I find myself wondering how well they'd get along.
And yes, the whole "oppressive aura of death" bit was hilarious. With that cliffhanger, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
7159168 Well, for us, they are blank.
Pool party needs more Togas?
The Velvet Room battle though. They shouldnt have been able to survive against that combination of effects, abilities and moves. 3 turn paralysis and Ejection? 8 moves with no chance of returning fire and total loss of party?
Im going to keep reading, because unless if Iw as playing the game I could level grind another 50 levels or so, this is the point Id give up for it getting stupidly unbalanced.
Of course Im hypocritical. I want Evil to suffer for the audacity of it demanding to be better than Good.
7158954 KO those battles just keeps getting better and the gang is growing stronger. Let just hope that wasn't exactly Sunset at the end.
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You can still see it because the image is in your computer's cache, or at least that's what I think it is, but for anyone else looking at your comment the image will appear broken.
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Nah, the "y" isn't missing, "bod" is a very common shorthand slang for "body."
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Flash borrows one or the other SUV so often these days that I don't feel the need to explicitly point out he's driving rather than walking/using public transit.
Nope! It's American slang you're probably not familiar with.
Consequence of the mass edits this chapter went under. I don't like the way it looks either, but it's grammatically correct and anything else...*shrug* Didn't work.
7159168 Any LINK to an imgur image posted on FiMF will appear broken to everyone EXCEPT the person who posted it.
7159181 I don't believe I've been linking the YT soundtrack clip for the Ultimate Skills thing here on FiMF, because I propagate a block of text from one Velvet Room chapter to the next each time I do this. If it wasn't in this chapter, it wasn't in the last one. If it wasn't in that one, it wasn't in the one before that. IDK why it's in the LTE version, I forget why it isn't in both. I just copy and paste from past chapters to current chapters.
That was not Sunset Shimmer. That has To be Red Flag trying to frame her.
Nice, fun pool party in the morning, shadow battle to the death in the night. I was wondering what Celestia's battle would be like. There are way to many ways to say "oh shit" at that ending, so I'll just stick with the original. OH SHIT!
Yeugh, poor Rainbow... Isn't she the next shadow, too? Girl needs a vacation from the velvet room badly. Or maybe they all do!
Also that ending sure was ominous :')
Ooooooooohhhh shit.
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH SHIT.
OOOOOOOOOHHHH SHIT.
It's technically possible that Sunset Shimmer is still evil (although I really doubt it), but after all the effort she's expended to convince the ZIT she's legit, she would have to be insane to suddenly reveal her true colors in a way that gains her nothing.
So either that wasn't really her, or she wasn't in control of herself.
...Something I just realized. Is Sunset the only character (aside from Wild Cards) whose Persona is of the opposite gender? I'm not sure if that's meaningful or not.
7158814 Holy, Fucking, Piece of, and I feel another one at least. So at least three, if not four.
I find myself wondering what manner of pink shenanigans Diamond Tiara's gotten up to...
Wow. Low blow, Lyra. I suppose she's keeping Flash honest, but still.
Huh. Hell of a Shadow design, especially the aggressive umbilical. I like it, but I seem to have a semi-closeted fascination with body horror.
As for that ending... Well, tomorrow's going to be very interesting.
7160246 I believe it was a rhetorical question.
I get the distinct feeling today's horoscope was inspired by your recent experiences with a certain anime.
That pool party is a prime example of why I keep all of my nasty secrets under lock and key. I would NOT be able to handle the embarrassment of talking about them, even with friends.
That fight was BS, plain and simple. A Shadow with 3 gimmicks, each of which is annoying enough on their own? Let's be real, Flash and co. only won because the story requires they win.
And we get a cliffhanger ending, sorta kinda. I'm not gonna comment on it, since I still hold a certain caution around SS, yet at the same time ya know maybe she has changed ya know yeah? Instead, I will comment on Ammy's upgrade. Dear lord, that upgrade. If that skill (maybe under a different name, but same effects) were available in the actual games, I would put it on everything I could.
7160766 Actually, the horoscope had nothing to do with Kumamiko and had everything to do with a certain story by a guy I'm following being revoked Sunday for a really stupid reason.
And yeah, Shiranui is a game-breaking skill. Shame it's on a Persona Flash will almost never use again.
7160800 Sadly, and we also haven't seen any of his older ones. I'm excited what the Ultimate Persona is of Flash, or of the World/Judgement Arcana. I only hope its something badass
7160807 The reason we only see a handful of Personas from time to time is because of the narrative structure of the story. If this were an actual Persona game, with dungeon crawling, grinding, etc. etc. and you were all playing it? Then yeah, the Ultimates wouldn't be showing up near as damn often until REALLY late, and there'd be more practical Personas flying around all the time. But it's a consequence of narrative separation from the gameplay conventions that for this last rush of boss fights with no actual grinding in between, all we see are the big guns. Because it's what makes sense from a narrative standpoint.
7160835 That is quite true, and even from a gameplay standpoint, if this were ever made into a fan game (I might do so with RPG maker), sending out weak Personas, especially in high level areas, like Persona 4's Heaven, like say, a Magatama, would probably mean bad news bears
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B-but... Amaterasu...
7160925 Thing is, Ammy's very much a dungeon Persona, not a boss battle Persona.
Well, well, things are starting to get interesting again.
I could write all day about why I'm glad we haven't seen the last of antagonist Sunset Shimmer, but I think I'll save that for after I learn more about what's going on.
Sunset is the Jester, Would that mean that what we have now seen is her shadow?
Celestia's Shadow Clothing... The Skill named Shiranui...
Is this related to Mai from Fatal Fury/King of Fighters?
7162999 Nope. "Shiranui" is a direct reference to Okami. That's the name of Amaterasu's past incarnation, as described at the beginning of the game, when she had her full divine glory.
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I see, thanks for the explanation
Tchh, I knew that a good Sunset was too good to be true... Really hope I'm wrong...
Heh. I find that funnier than I really should.
7163012 Got that as soon as I saw it
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Okay... now I feel dumb.
(Note to self, wake up completely before doing anything else, you lazy fk).
It's annoying when you get caught up on a story your reading when it's getting good. IT'S COMPLETE BS WHEN IT'S A CLIFFHANGER!!!! active fluttershy boot to the head!
7175773 Yeah let's try...not to post comments that can be interpreted as antagonistic toward the author, mmkay?
7175782 wasn't trying to be. Just voicing frustration over the fact that i caught up on a cliffhanger. If ANYTHING you should take it as a compliment.
So, she knows, about time too...it’s the beginning of the end..