Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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What would Hasbroland be like, their Disneyland?
Dang, that horoscope. Sunset's really hamming it up.
Because nothing's more cheerful than a reminder that her family disowned her!
Hasbroland? Given all of the crossover elements in the story, I'm not sure what could be there. (Though I suppose there could be a Wizards of the Coast area... )
In any case, future event established... right in Aries range. If the target isn't Fluttershy, this might turn ugly. If it is, it definitely will.
Toasted marshmallow. And damn, Flash's parents are forgetful. Good thinking on Rarity's part about the younger girls, I must say. And good on Sonata for putting in about Fluttershy going, and coming up with the Hasbroland suggestion.
6005614 Yes, but instead of Goofy posing with you and going, "Gawrsh" , you get Cobra Commander screeching "Retreat! Retreat!" and instead of a Disney Princess it's a smug-looking Destro who's actually baking inside his costume.
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I wonder what would be there... Probably not just card games. Plane themed rides?
People in elaborate planeswalker outfits wandering around?
A carnival arcade with people vying for the child sized plush Tarmogoyf?
6005652 I would pay anything to see this in real life.
Elsewhere....
"Gee, Boneless, we got a whopper of an horoscope today! Whaddaya say we prove it wrong?"
"You know, I'm a big fan of these books and I dressed up to go to the movies, but three Daring Do marathons a month on this channel kinda wears you out."
"At least it's not another rerun of Hellcolt or Lord of the Bling."
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"What!?"
"Oh you poor dear! You don't even know what the ocean is!"
"I DO TOO know what the ocean is! I've seen pictures of it in books! And lots of people in inland cities never visit the beach either!"
"Eh, it's no big deal. Beaches in Seaddle get boring real quick."
"Hush, Flash, please don't flaunt your beach privilege before our poor, unfortunate Twilight!"
"Stop that!"
"It's settled, then! We're going to the beach! For Twilight's sake!"
"For Twilight!"
"You can stop facepalming now, Twi."
"Yeah, she does. But I'm not sure if what she wears still counts as a bikini."
"You tricked my sister-in-law to get your way!"
"I did no such thing! I didn't 'trick' her, I manipulated her. There IS a difference."
"She... had a bad experience at the beach once."
"A porpoise bit her in the hiney!"
"That would explain it, all right..."
"Just because we are willing to *ahem* 'go wild' doesn't mean we want the two of you to."
Everyone stares at Pinkie.
"Not on Sundays!"
Everyone stares at Rainbow.
"Hey, don't look at me! I close my door now!"
Everyone stares at me and Twilight.
"I'll have you know, the sexual component of a committed, faithful relationship based on love and trust is an important part of a couple's development!"
"Neeeeeeeeeeeerd!"
"I'm just saying we're setting a better example than any spring break flngs!"
"I don't think you're a good example for anything except reliable mattress construction."
"So we get to see a bunch of half-drunk teenagers in skimpy shorts and tees pawing at people dressed like soldiers and giant robots instead?"
"Didn't you have two?"
"Well, uh..."
"The more the merrier!"
"Right, right, Dusky Tinkle..."
"Twilight Sparkle!"
"Dear? Flash just called, he says he's going to Haytona to meet a girl!"
"That's nice, hon!"
"..."
"..."
"...I'm really embarrassed, but Flash is your nephew, right?"
"Mine? I thought he was your nephew!"
"Granny says she's sendin' me her old-timey bathing suit, though. She ain't havin' no truck wit' what she calls 'new-fangled bee keens.'"
So I put on my headphones, and listen to some music...
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..... Does school count as work?..... Jobs are for people who.. you know... are old enough to get them....
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ARE YOU-FUCKING-SERIOUS?!
Hasbroland? With Trasformers, GI Joe and... My Little Squirrel? (IDK). I am not sure what other Hasbro properties would be in there, but it sounds just as fun as the new Nintendo Park that's coming up.
And beach episode just three weeks away. Git hype!
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so a face hoof, but instead of a hoof, the ground? Makes sense. Thanksa.
You know, I wonder if Fluttershy ever bust a gut laughing due to what she heard with the bugs.
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"Dusk Shine?"
"That's a dude's name, mom."
"Starlight Glimmer?"
"Not even close."
"Oh sorry, my bad. Sunset Shimmer!"
"DA FUQ, MOM!"
6005760 You are the Hiimdaisy of this story.
Yeah.... wonderful
Seattle isn't that rainy.... *Looks at California* .... Never mind....
6005842 Twilight was referring to the quality of the education, not the quality of the students.
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How well you learn is affected by your peers.
6005760 *notes use of Daytona USA theme every time they say Haytona* Well, as long as they don't run into Florida Man. Or his equivalent, anyway.
6005672 Probably.
6005957 Because her apartment is like 20 feet away from the lounge?
6005956 You know, Haytona and Canterlittle are really good names. Mind if I use them?
6006107 Sure, go for it.
6005760 Man, I needed this review. Reading your review made me feel better about everything that's going on with them. I internalize their situation as if it were my own.
Hey Flash, I have an idea. Why don't you just stay with Twilight and her family, and continue school in Canterlot High? Clearly your parents won't care either way, so why not?
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burn my dread, the best persona related song in my opinion.
nice~.
oh P.S.
are these inserts into the story you add in comments one's you would have considered cannon? Cause if so I really have a lot of work to do adding them into the chapters .
6006232 Nah, my MST-style riffings on the chapters are just for gags. Unless I specifically say so, or noticeably break out of the jokes to comment on something (or outright make a separate post) none of it is canon to the fic. :p
(Frex: I wondered what any other Virgos would think about today's doom-and-gloom horoscope, wondered which named characters haven't showed up in the fic, and just thought that Cheese Sandwich would be useful for a joke. But unless Moth says anything about it, my quip with Cheese is NOT part of the story in any way.)
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okay, well just so you know I added those into my copy of this chapter none the less.
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Dude. MST3K-style riffs aren't meant to be included as additions to the material. It's just Zef having a laugh and sharing it with the rest of us. Haven't you ever watched Mystery Science Theater 3000 or Rifftrax?
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yes I love mst3k (I just watched their take on a German dubbed hamlet), but I really thought they fit well with the chapter.
6006764 You're missing the point...
Also, please don't alter any copy of any chapter of this story, even for your own personal use. It's...not a cool thing to do.
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Trotting STAAAAAAAAAAAART~
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fine.
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D&D scenarios!
You know what this story is missing (and that Zef would probably maim me for even suggesting it)?
Battle Cut-Ins.
Those shots of the character's eyes that signals when they'll hit a weak-point or get a critical. Or even when they first summon their Persona for the first time.
6007513 Things like that are on the art table for later, after the major, time-sensitive art is taken care of.
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For an extra fee you can purchase a Random Encounter.
For a premium you can enlist the services of a Dungeon Master, who will set up a quest for you where you must traipse around abandoned attractions, filled with harmless booby traps, while cheap animatronics and larpers harass you.
The paperwork is still pretty expensive.
Ah, now we get to the end and, BEACH CHAPTER!
In the future course, I'm sure future me is happy and drooling over the entire thing.
Also, you managed to up the 'dislike' factor on Flash's parents, I mean they seemed a little 'out there' before, but now they are damn well ignorant.
I am looking for the next scene in the future where Flash gets tired of it and goes 'It's find, if you'll excuse me, I'll got to have a threesome with my girlfriend'
Who's willing to bet THAT would get a reaction?
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If you bother to read the skills Moirae has, you'd see that it is not a navigation Persona. Aphrodite remains on that role. Besides, even if Sonata could also give back-up, what would Cadance do if she gets a replacement? It's been already stated that she cannot fight.
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I used the name Hayami in one of my stories as a Equestrian version of Miami. You could've used Hayami if you wanted to, but then again you don't really read clop fics do you?
6008202 Hayami, Mihaymi, and all other ponifications of Miami are stupid-sounding.
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I don't care...
6008240 It's just my opinion. I don't care for the way it reads.
6006161 Not so sure it's that simple. Until now Flash has been indifferent to his parents. He either goes along with it or ignores them. We haven't seen him outright disagree with them. I could see his parents try to take the reigns when they find out he's been living in a girls dorm, has two girlfriends, was given a blowjob by the nurse, etc. All Sunset would need to do is leak that info to them, and they'll suddenly care enough to move him away, "for his own good." Hands off parents tend to overreact when their kids do something embarrassing.
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Hmm... that too.
Flash....
Don't do a Heroic BSOD.
You will regret getting kicked in the butt by Zecora
I just realized.
Fluttershy is an Aries.
Aries is a goat.
Iron will uses goats as assistants.
Fluttershy became flutterbitch after meeting Iron Will.
Coincidence? I think not!
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You and me both.
I cringed.
Flash's mom... *Leon Facepalm*