Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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And so Fluttershy learns that you need Louis Black as much as you need Amy Poehler. Or something like that.
Am I a bad person for taking great pleasure in jellyfish stinging Sunset?
The fight was pretty much what a fight against that Shadow should be, full of sound, fury, and incredible feats of magic. It also came with some truly hilarious status effects.
Flash has maybe two weeks to max out Sweetie Belle's link before he misses the boat with her. And of course, before then is a certain Adversary, in the Biblical sense...
But those are long-term concerns. For now, it's time to relax as much as is possible while keeping an eye on Sunset.
Flash just has to watch out when Shimmer starts playing the shell game. round and round and round he goes, which girl he ends up with tonight noone knows. Except for everyone else.
Well, in retrospect it's unsurprising that Trixie's Shadow would have the Alicorn Amulet. Rarity becoming an assistant and Fluttershy a tree (heh, I thought you wanted that, Shy) was amusing, as was Dash's reaction to Flash being stuffed into Trixie's cleavage. (Being turned into a pony was karma, I'd say.) Liked seeing Fluttershy taking a bit of a lead and butting heads with Twilight. (Also her reaction to Cadance being Captain Obvious.) It was interesting to see Inside Out referenced, since I just recently saw that movie myself. I'd also say Flash is right that Shy's found a happy medium. She's not the complete bitch she was as Eris, but she's not the doormat she was prior, either.
any body else have the feeling that pinkie is really going to have a bad day soon (IE her shadow fight will be next).
Well, that fight was just a roller coaster from start to finish. I, personally, wouldn't mind having to go against it were this an actual video game, since it sounds like it would be fun to fight against (of course, probably not so fun for our ZITS here). And the ending, of course, was amazing. I LOVE it whenever character's use their righteous fury to utterly destroy a foe. It's just awesome.
Now to wait for LTE and the sex scene...
6709315 Oh yeah, that will be, interesting.
When those two meet, I hope that Pinkie's shadow uses the line from the anime, not the game.
I like that line better, and I feel it's more fitting.
"I am the shadow, of your true inner self!"
Reading this made me hungry, and in hindsight I'm surprised this is the first chapter to do so.
I called it! I didn't say so here but I figured that Trixie would be next
"What, you mean she's weak to anything pink and naked?" Rainbow asks. Twilight slaps her upside the head.
Hahahahaha Maybe Rainbow! Maybe!
Man, Trixie put up a fight. I wonder how many Flashy haters would love to see him sliced in half . I know how I'd like to see him soon , but I have to wait for the LTE version for it . Can't do it tomorrow, I'll be at college all day, and I'll never do certain.... business, there
EDIT: OH GOD, THE LTE VERSION IS HERE ALREADY? SWEET . Time to...... you know
6710267 It's actually already up.
After reading the LTE version, I just have to say... DAMN FLUTTERSHY! I could learn a few things or two from her!
And seriously, watch Sunset Shimmer! I don't trust her as far as I can throw her!
One thing that stood out to me. The Jellyfish sting. You know how to treat a jellyfish sting without a first aid kit right? It's probably nothing though.
6709315 It going to be interesting. My guess is that inside she still feels abandoned, due to her family issues. Sure 99% of her is okay, but a small part of her still feels like she doesn't have a family. She probably has some jealousy towards Twilight because she has to share Flash with her too. I wonder if her Persona with get an upgrade in addition to Flash's?
So RD got turned in to her ponyself and Fluttershy got turned into a tree, that's just down right funny, also I read the LTE chapter and DANG Fluttershy DANG!
I get the pancakes, Applejack gets bacon and eggs, and Twilight empties the refrigerator.
"We... we did check into Hotel Coral Essex, right?"
"Yeah..."
"So the fact that those, those, and those letters on the sign are burnt out is just a coincidence?"
"I dunno, let's ask those frat boys that checked in after us."
"..."
"....."
"...let's not."
"Same thing I do every day?"
"No, we're not going to try to take over the world."
"Tri-state area?"
"Not that either."
"Most of it, buying enough food for us AND Twilight."
"Flash! ...you forgot about the drinks."
"Then what's with your plastic bucket and pail, and Sweetie Belle's inflatable pony innertube?"
"We're grown up enough not to be embarrassed by toys!"
"That they have sex with everything that mo--"
"No! Not that thing, the other thing."
There's a dangerous wrinkle to the side of her eye. The knife that has suddenly appeared in her hand is also suspicious.
"That's not 'ready', I was about to go to the toilet!"
"Velvet Room Management kindly asks you not to use the facilities in that manner."
"Flash, why ARE you dressed in fishnet stockings and a Playboy bunny corset?"
"I want to dress for the occasion, all right?"
"Boo!"
No heckling from the audience!
"Hmph! I must say, I hate wasting the first round just to find out weaknesses! Can we buy the strategy guide next time?"
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"She's GONE!"
"She's... she's trapped in another dimension!"
"What... was that just now?"
"Man, bosses get all the elaborate attack animations..."
//She's being mind-controlled!//
"How can you tell?"
//That bunny suit is NOT Rarity's style!//
Everyone gasps.
And who's to blame? She gives love a bad name.
"Why does that attack... only do... minor Pierce damage... when we use it... urk."
"Rarity, you insensitive prick! You have any idea how much that stings?!"
I've seen this look before... It's like a mysterious, overwhelming force has taken her over... Just like when she was browsing the the Black Friday sales at her favorite hat boutique.
I have the deed! That means she's mine!
"I don't think that's how--"
That's how it works!
i.imgur.com/dHmlorR.jpg
OOOOH-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO! OOOOH-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO-HO!
"Are you backseat-driving my gameplay?"
"Oh, I hate it when people do that!"
And leaves.
"Well... she DID always say--"
"We KNOW."
"Why do I feel like putting out blossoms and housing a family of chipmunks?"
"Flash, get out of there! She's gonna puff-puff you to death!"
"I can think of worse ways to--"
"Flash!"
"Yeah! If anyone's gonna puff-puff you death it's gotta be me!"
"PINKIE!"
[Ed: So, Flash is weak to anything pink and--]
[Ed: Hey! That's my line!]
"Uh."
"Oh..."
"What? What?"
"We, uh, pulled something else out."
"It's not our fault her costume's so low cut! They were bound to pop out anyway!"
"You mean she's--"
"Don't look, you perv!"
Choose! Choose the form of the destructor!
"Uh, Fluttershy? Why are you looking at me like that?"
"SOOOOOO CUTE!"
Fluttershy suddenly scoops Rain-- Rainbow Dash, I guess, and snuggles her like she's never snuggled before.
"Gah!"
And my stockings have a run in them and I BROKE A NAIL!
"There was a little bit of brain, too. Twi was not impressed."
"It was all mushy and feeble! I need to put you in a strict reading regimen when we get back."
"Nooooo!"
Half my body stays on the ground.
"What the--"
"We didn't say we put you back, dude."
"Oh. Well, this is awkward."
"That's like twelve rounds during a turn-based boss fight!"
"Yeah, well, none of us had enough SP left to revive you, so Rainbow Dash had to run to the corner store to get a soda for Rarity."
"I didn't run, I flew! How awesome is THAT!"
"So awesome you spent four minutes doing loops and corkscrews!"
"When ELSE am I gonna get this chance?"
"...huh."
"What's wrong?"
"...my lower body is on backwards."
"Crap, I TOLD you we didn't line him up right!"
"I-I can see my own ass!"
"Flash, remember how I said I... wanted to have a turn with you on this trip?"
"Yeah, Fluttershy?"
"IchangedmymindIhopeyouandTwilightarehappytogetherbye."
I remember that. My father had it. He had to sit on a donut cushion for weeks.
"No kidding. My stomach feels absolutely empty."
Twilight punches me HARD in the arm.
"I think you''ve lost the right to joke about that for a while, dude."
...so we're guaranteed at least one massive explosion later tonight...
"No, but Apple Bloom got one tattooed on her butt!"
"Sweetie Belle!"
"She did!"
"She did?!"
"Ah did!"
"WHY?!"
"Cuz everyone's got one and Ah didn't!"
"And it was either that, or her own face!"
"WHY?!"
"We wanted a matching one with Scootaloo but she's not here, so..."
"Actually, you're supposed to pee on jellyfish stings."
"Hmm..."
"Flash, NO."
"'Bacon Bits' are NOT a spice."
"Tell that to Axe deodorants."
"And make sure that's the ONLY thing that's up around her."
"But Cadance said--"
"Cadance gave you permission for anyone BUT murderous psychos."
"Fine..."
Which means one person is eating for two and another is eating for eight.
Beaks, claws, giblets... they taste just like Hayburger nuggets.
"We can rent out a jet ski and a banana boat, though."
"Yeah! I always wanted to ride the banana!"
We boggle as both Sunset and Pinkie choke and sputter and turn bright red.
Sunset approaches us.
"Nothing better to do than stare at the twilight, Flash?"
"Better than gawking at the sunset!"
"Girls, girls, just enjoy the glimmer of starlight, all right?"
"Grrrr..."
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At least, until Twilight rushes over and tackles her to the ground to wrap her in a robe.
We look at Sunset cackling madly as she holds a... well, a keg of colorful gunpowder the size of her head with "The Big 'Un" printed on the side, and try to decide whether to let nature run its course or prevent any collateral damage.
"It's not like I was the one who cried over him and finished off the Shadow while someone else barfed her guts out..."
"Cards Against Humanity again?"
"Yes. You'd think they'd get tired of that game at SOME point."
"I... I didn't know... you did crossfit..."
"You didn't really think all my ninja skills came from random Zodiac fights, did you?"
"Yeah... but... next time? Ask me if I... want to... take lessons... first..."
"Oh, quit complaining. You'll feel your arms again two days from now, tops."
"Round two."
"Gah!"
I sigh. "I'm sorry, Fluttershy, but I already told you, I'm too busy to volunteer at the shelter."
"B-but the bunnies!"
"I can't."
"And the kitties!"
"Sorry."
"And--and the ponies!"
"I-- wait, what? You have ponies at the shelter?"
"Not yet, but if I can find out which status effect Trixie hit Rainbow Dash with..."
Huh... So, I think this is the first time Flash has had to be revived? Feel free to correct me if I am wrong.
6712554 Second time.
I got stung by a jellyfish twice in the same day while at myrtle beach. Didn't hurt too bad until the next day. Also the nice work with LTE scene way to kick it up a notch.
And Hidden mirrors her...
And Hidden mirrors...
Ditto.
That LTE scene though... Yikes!
Trixie sure put up on hell of a fight. Note to self: never kill Flash Sentry in front of his girlfriend or you will have 5 minutes to live. Surprisingly I was hoping something like that jellyfish incident would happen to Sunset Shimmer, except I wanted it to be on her head.
Am I the only one who finds how the friendship between Flash and Fluttershy has improved just a bit funny? They have gone from trying to and at one point actually killing each other to having casual sex.
I cannot say I particularly care for the development of Fluttershy and Flash having sex. I thought it was dumb when he did it with Rainbow Dash, Sonata, Rarity, and Cadance on the previous trip, but as contrived as that whole situation was, at least there was a weak attempt to justify it. Here it just sort of randomly happens because apparently the story needed him to make another mark on a bingo sheet of how many main characters he's been able to have sex with.
Dude, this boss-battle was a bitch to break down.
I'm let down that the LTE version had absolutely nothing for the "time" Flash spends with Fluttershy (it being a first for them, and quite a bit of build up). Just skips it, and those scenes are the real hook for LTE to begin with.
Will there ever be an addition to that were we see what they do? It really needs that extra oomph! Rather than "Let's get it on" ... "It's done.". in less than a paragraph.
Gotta say, This was one of the most interesting fights I’ve seen.
For the LTE version:
Fluttershy and Flash...it was only a matter of time.