Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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Okay, at least Flash is pulling himself together. After all, he's got one member of his team on his side. This is gonna be tough to fix...
I'm surprised his Family Social Link didn't go up this chapter though.
Well this chapter was a refreshing breath of fresh air for me! Absolutely LOVE how you handled Cadence and Flash's parents in this chapter!
Also, congratulations! You've now made me want to see a prequel to this involving Flash's parents!
That was a close one. This nearly went from Persona EG to early How to Disappear Completely. Still, there's definite hope. I just hope this time in between will cool down emotions, not curdle them. Calcified resentment is the last thing anyone needs.
Well, that and Flash's dad asking questions. Or speaking much at all, really. The man seems to have the sensitivity of a brick.
This is a good start to recovering. I should have guessed Cadance would be the first to forgive Flash since she's made that same mistake more times than anyone can count. Pinkie is a good place to continue, then get the others before getting his girlfriend back. With everything going on I wonder if he'll have time for Tennis practice later this month.
Flash's dad caught my interest but I don't expect much from it. I hope Flash maxes the link with his parents soon.
Okay, nice to see that Cadance's rationale for removing Flash was so that tempers could cool. With any luck, this can be patched up sooner rather than later.
You see this right here? You know what this is to me? This is hope that he'll pull through. I am LITERALLY praying for this guy now.
Nice to see this story back in action.
We almost went to a locked bad ending here. hopefully flash can back up what he says here.
*shudders* Ugh, I remember having that once.
*sigh* I also remember that.
You and all of us, Momma Flash.
Oh, but I dooo!
... Like I need all my S.Links back on track.
Well, the only better was off by one spot, and the clear indication in the chapter's narrative about the next move, I think I better stop holding these bets
Excellent chapter. It made me feel miserable for Flash. That's a power, Moth. Good work. Waiting the Weekend's chapter with eagerness
Achievement unlocked: Road to recovery.
I would literally pay to play a fan game rendition of this story.
I thought for sure Flash was going to end up with the wrong crowd after the previous chapter. Hopefully things get better later on.
KO awesome chapter, hope things will go well as Flash starts slowly with one friend at a time and he'll face his own fear.
Oh I'm not worried about Pinkie too much.
Rainbow on the other hand...
C'mon, Flash, buddy. You can do it. We believe in you... Well, we who care, at least.
Baby steps. Always take baby steps.
7930662 I said he fucked up, I know he did. But it's not like twilight hasn't seen it before.
This may not have been what you expect from a series like Persona, but boy is it captivating and interesting. Road of investigation, now road of redemption! Keep at it Moth! You've come back strong!
Well, congratulations. You managed to fix everything I disliked about this arc so far in a couple of sentences. Knew there was I reason I started reading this. You are amazing.
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It may have to do with the fact that the Fool is Reversed or that Judgement is Broken.
7931808 Hmmm...I guess that's true. I was just surprised since the family social link isn't broken.
Oh thank discord, he at least has one on his side. Makes my point moot from last chapter but thank everything its getting back onntrqck, even if it is going to take a while.
Man, even the food porn is gone when Flash is this depressed.
7930986 With sexy scenes and everything included .
Man, I was feeling bad for Flashy almost the whole week, but thank goodness this one ended with some glimpse of hope and the acknowledge that Flashy wasn't the only villain in the story . What about his dad though? That must've been some real skeleton in the closet
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Ok, so there is a plan. I like that there is a plan. I wish it had a better planner, but we can't always have what we want.
7931235 It is because Twilight has seen it that it upsets her so much.
D-dad? What did you do?
Okay, Flash's dad disturbs me, but his parents are very wise.
Cadance was cool here. She really does have a good heart, and knows about what Flash is going through better than anyone.
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Honestly it was a long time coming. I mean following the story in a straight through, almost non-stop read up to this point. Twilight's been toxic as hell. I mean there are lots of scenes that shows she cares ... but then she turns around with acting like a horrible person (And only Flash's shadow has yet to call her out on it.).
Dick move, and bad on his part. But this was bound to happen. If not angry, unprotected sex with Trix (his second time he wasn't wearing rubber), then someone else. But with all the filth dumped on him for a good chunk of a year in the relationship. Yeah, it was a train wreck.
...Wait, what?