Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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Damn.
Just Damn.
... I think this is the first time they've got the upper hand on Sunset.
And it was pretty awesome to see.
WOW im going to kill sunset
6062953 This is basically my reaction too.
O-KAY, that is done with at least.
Seriously, this chapter made my 'nads climb up to my throat. Everytime things get personal in whichever show or story I follow, I get this burning rage and scream bloody murder. You have managed to cause this reaction on me, Mythril, and for that you have my earned more of my admiration.
On another note: Did we ever learned of the results from the test Candence administered? I mean, that kind of a huge deal for this whole situation.
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She didn't go through with it. Sunset's retraction negated the need for it.
You know, I'm really curious as to what Sunset's real reason is. Is she really just a psychopathic sociopath with a grudge? Or is there something more? I really hope the latter, because that would make things more interesting.
Hmm. So, Applejack's actually seen Sunset and Fluttershy together, and knows they have a connection? That's interesting. Nice to see Flash's other friends joining the table. The ribbing was kind of funny.
Well, Celestia's S.Link is one step away from being complete, and Luna is two. I look forward to their fulfillment.
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I wouldn't call it an upperhand. They made her back down, but they haven't won. And this is just going to make her worse the next time she strikes. That girl has a serious pride issue, she's not going to let this pass without some kind of revenge.
That said, God this chapter makes me love Celestia and Luna.
Flash still needs to thank Fluttershy and apologize for being a gross mess though.
6063081 The test never happened, because Sunset caved and conceded the round to Flash.
6063098 It's too early to say.
6063009 Winning a battle doesn't mean you win the war.
6063137 Fluttershy deserved to have to smell Coitus!Flash after what she's pulled over the months.
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Well... no it's not winning the war. But it is winning a battle. The direct battle, even, by outthinking/planning her, rather than surviving a Zodiac beast.
Apparently 6063148 was about to say that too.
That doesn't mean I can't enjoy watching her face be rubbed in it.
Okay, that was satisfying to read!
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Don't get me wrong, winning a battle is important in the plan to win the war overall. But Flash can't let himself think this is over. Sunset is far to vindictive to allow this.
Oh HELL yes. I tried telling a teacher that some girls were bullying me and my friends, and then the next day, the same group of girls threw an OPENED FRUIT CUP at me and my friends.
I have a SPLENDID life.
6063148 Even for you?
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Well, Celestia said that she wasn't believing anything Sunset said. If they let her go after she retracted her claim, wouldn't that mean they are believing her?
6063272 Oh, I know the answers to your questions. But it's too early to say.
Yeah... Now I really want to see Sunset's excursions attract the attention of something of the likes of Nyx or Nyarlathotep and it shows her why the Persona "other world" is not a toy.
Things are really getting exciting now. And I can kind of understand Flash's reaction when he got back to the dorm. When your furious at just about everything and feel like punching someone through a wall, nothing helps quite like the heaviest, most head-bangingest metal you can find. Bonus points for playing it himself.
Damn Celestia! I think this is literally the angriest I've ever seen her. I'm talking in canon, fandom, hell I've never had Celestia blow her cool this much, and that's saying something as I put my characters through hell.
I hadn't even realized that the Celestia and Luna social links were as high as they were until they put their trust in him. I'll admit, at first I sort of suspected Celestia being connected to all of this, but now I see that she's just as much of a victim as anyone else. Also, now that I know about that clue, it confirmed a few things too. Still mad at myself for not seeing that...
All in all, this was a great chapter. Now, I'm off to hunt down Sunset Shimmer and cut a bitch. Who's with me?!
6063304 It's good you are keeping it to yourself. If we knew all the answers it would be less interesting to read.
Well... yeah. That happened. With Sunset Shimmer effectively in control of history, they can't nail her for anything. But that doesn't mean she's actually in control of reality, and open communication means that the truth has already outed. This one's a draw, by and large. Maybe a few points more to Sunset as the rumor mills grind away, but Flash has enough friends to tell their friends to tell their friends...
Yeah, this gambit may ultimately backfire on Sunset. At the very least, Celestia is aware of just what a little bitch she is. Flash's request to the contrary, she'll probably be watching Sunset like a hawk. One toe out of line. Just one toe...
Also:
"What? What is it?" Vinyl looks to Octavia. "Tavi, what am I missing out on?"
6063415 Omitted detail: When Vinyl's around, Sonata has text-to-speech on. Or possibly the rest of the time as well, since it's more reasonable.
Might go back later and clear that up...
6063304 Fluttershy said that sunset's persona was really horrifying looking, is it possible that sunset's persona could be manipulating her or controlling her in some way, has something like that ever happened in the persona series where a persona goes rogue and taken control of it's owner?
6063495 That's a very interesting theory! Of course, I won't respond to it at this time.
6063459 Hmm. If Sonata had it on when she talked to Flash about the accident, then Fluttershy knows her secret. If she didn't, then Shy only got one side of the conversation, and I don't know if that's enough to piece it together.
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She didn't say it was horrible looking. She said it was terrible. That could mean it was ugly, or super powerful, or any of a number of possible interpretations. Though, given that this is Fluttershy who is afraid of it, I have to wonder if it might be a dragon of some kind.
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From WHERE is the spoiler?
Personally, I find the fact that Sunset suddenly became a bully sophomore year very interesting (As I have said before). Equally interesting is the fact that the Leo Shadow was a no-show last year. I've speculated that maybe Sunset was possessed by Leo shortly before sophomore year, and that's why she became a bitch. We'll see if there's anything to that. Probably not.
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Spoilers!, if you or anyone haven't played the games mentioned in here, then don't read this comment:
There are no instances of a Persona taking control of it's user; however, in Persona 3 there's a group of Persona Users called Strega who were all subjected to an experiment to bond each of them with an Artificial Persona. However, because these Personas are alien for them, they subconciously reject it, and the Persona in turn is actively trying to kill its host. They survive these attempts by taking a Persona-supreser, with the unfortunate side effect of a shorter life span.
Also, in Persona 4, before serving their host, Personas are originally Shadows that represent all the supressed thoughts and emotions the characters have; that they reject. When denying the existence of these emotions, the Shadow Self transforms into a Shadow Boss and attempts to kill its host, but will return back to it's previous form if defeated. If the host instead accepts these emotions, the Shadow Self becomes that character's Persona. It is explained in one of the spin offs, that if said character tries to ignore these thoughts again, the Persona will turn homicidal again.
Long story short, a Persona can kill it's host, but it can't control him or her.
6063544 it was just a random thought I had but thank you for saying that
So far, I'm really enjoying this story and how setting really work well with the narrative. I look forward to seeing what how far things will go in term of conflict.
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You two need to learn how to spoiler-tag correctly.
You obscure the plot element with the spoiler tag, while stating from what source does the spoiler come from OUTSIDE of the spoiler tag.
Here is an example of how to spoiler-tag correctly:
I know Mythril said he'd be taking care of comments that don't follow the rule. But I see no harm in just re-stating what he said multiple times.
Edit: 6063645, you also need to correct that commentary, buddy.
6063607 Comment deleted for improperly marked spoiler.
6063645 Comment deleted for improperly marked spoiler.
You were warned about this, people. What game you're spoiling goes OUTSIDE THE SPOILER TAGS so people know whether or not to avoid the spoiler.
6063355 Comment deleted for improperly marked spoiler.
6063304 Good one. You got me there.
Also, I noticed someone else reacted to my comment, but their comments were removed. They didn't cover the spoilers with black bars or something?
6063703 A couple chapters back, I set some firm rules about how to properly tag spoilers for Persona games. As of now, anyone who fails to comply with those rules gets their comment deleted.
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Sorry, let me rephrase that. But in Persona Q, didn't Zeus possess Elizabeth?
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There's no point in Sunset trying that card after this point. There's evidence that she's not with child, and the promise of Cadance being ready to administer a second-opinion test hanging over her head.
6063709 Well, that sure does explain why I got a notification for a reply to my comment, while the comment has been deleted. Got me a bit confused at first.
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The problem is that you need to put from where does the spoiler come from OUTSIDE of the spoiler tag. And that comment is going to be deleted too because it is not even obscured in anyway!
C'mon, it isn't really that hard.
Right there with you 'Tia.
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6063734 The problem, as HS11 said, is that the rule is "what game you're spoiling goes outside the spoiler tags". You didn't do that, so your comment got deleted.
6063816 The thing you have to understand is that there are people reading this story who are in the process of playing one or more Persona games for the first time, and do not appreciate spoilers that are unmarked or incorrectly tagged. These rules exist so that the readers who HAVE played these games don't accidentally ruin things for the readers who have NOT.
In other words, you need to respect the other readers.
6063676 sorry.
It really is a shame to see how far sunset has fallen, and just how far she might fall still.
I do really hope there is hope for both her and fluttershy.
I do really look forward to how and when juan truly steps into the spotlight as it were.
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The rules have been stated in the story!
"May 19th (Saturday)", on the Author's Notes.
Saying that you didn't know the rules because you didn't check the blog is a bad excuse.
We have replaced it with a lifeline reading app. Just take a photo of the palm of your hand!
"That we shower together? They already know."
"I'll throw a shiny thing down the hall, and when they chase after it, you close the door."
"She has experience with small, excitable critters."
"Wow, that's... unusually nice for her."
"She wants us to take care of all the litter boxes and giving pets their med pills for a week, though."
"Aaaand there's the other shoe."
Fluttershy nods back. She stands up, and throws a smoke bomb at the floor. When the smoke clears, and we're all finished coughing, the girls have vanished.
Pinkie grabs her head. "They're gone! ...oh no, wait, there they are." And Twi and I facepalm as Fluttershy tries to drag the girls out the window and falls flat on her back.
"Thing is... this is all a simulation. We've been recording your life for a TV show ever since you were born."
"Huh. Well that explains why the town turns into some kinda minimap whenever Ah leave school or th' dorm."
"And I'll keep reminding him of it till the end of time itself."
"I get it, I get it!"
"Nnnope, I don't think you do."
"You mean, by keeping you out of the loop about one thing, we completely missed out on ANOTHER thing?"
"Mebbe ye shouldn't keep people out of th' loop in th' first place. Jes' bein' honest, here."
Then we look at Pinkie Pie.
"Iiiiii miiiiiight have kinda sorta signed us all up for a Candyville Saga game..."
"Pinkieeee! Half my friends list is asking me for in-game money now!"
"Mine too!"
"Everyone I know is PMing me for bits!"
"Oops?"
"Uh... allons-y?"
"No. No allons-y. This is one allons you shouldn't have yd."
"One more outburst and I'll have Twilight Sparkle take over your job and I'll even give her a new office."
"Uh, yes. That's exactly what I just said."
"Wait, let me rephrase that. Half of it is true, half of it is lies!"
"Which half is which?"
"MY half is true, of course."
I have seen some amazing facepalms in my time here, but Celestia just had the most epic one yet.
"Yes, you were taking care of dirty business all right."
"Flash, one more pun like that and I'll have you in detention."
"Sorry, m'am, my mind is a bear right now."
"I think you meant 'bear in mind.'"
"That too."
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"..."
"..."
"Young lady, I do not think posting, 'Oops, my bad #yolo #lol #nothingintheoven #leggomypreggo #eggonmyfacenotdownbelow' counts as a retraction."
"Gah! This seat is ice cold!"
"Even Vinyl going blind? And Ms. Lobster's outburst? And your team losing the tennis tournament? And the flood that almost cost us our courts and tracks? And--"
"Okay, maybe not everything everything."
It doesn't help that today's lunch special is bacon cheeseburgers with a fried egg on the patty.
"You already said that."
"I did? That's messed up."
"That's messed up."
"WE GET IT!"
As she screams, Pinkie's eyes start staring in opposite directions and her hair flattens itself out. Twilight hurriedly takes all the cutlery out of her reach while Rainbow stands up and gently leads her to Cadance's office...
"Uh, Flash? Aspirin and Mntnt. Dew? Not the best combina--"
Friday, April 29, 2016 / Early Morning
"Or a dance-off, or a rap battle, or just kids going, 'Warriors, come out to play-aaay' like in my time."
"Sorry, what?"
"Uh, forget I just said that."
6063877 The only one "escalating" here is you, friend. All you need to say is "I screwed up, sorry, it won't happen again". Instead you keep harping on and on about it and that's not helping anyone. What YOU need to do is chill the fuck out and back away from this before you're excluded from the discussion of this story in a way none of us want. You get me?