Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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top kek.
this is gettin gud.
Yeaaaaay!!
Now let's go beat the shit out of Shimmer!! Please!
*Reads texts*
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Another thing, I swear Twilight had said Aunt SATAN instead of Satin.
Wow...just...wow.
I know this a weird thing to say, but this one is possibly the worst one for me in this entire chapter. I mean, it goes without saying that the majority of them are all sickening and vile, but I could deal with that because this is a High School and because the Teens are Monsters trope. But this one is likely from a teacher, supposedly a mature adult, saying something so unbelievably insensitive and petty about someone who has just lost their father.
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Fixed, you're welcome.
6340583 Teachers are people too, and some of them are miserable, cruel, spiteful people.
Nice chapter. Figures that Sunset would crash the funeral. I have nothing to say about the nasty texts that hasn't been said already. I recognized the preacher as being from Hearts and Hooves Day. I did spot the following;
I believe there was supposed an "it" in that sentence.
This... now this was worth the wait.
My eyes were burning with a murder rage. The thought that she'd even dare to show up her dirty face there is enough to turn me into a rampaging beast.
But in the end, they realized that their true power comes from the heart, and that the heart is strengthen through bonds. The Power of the Social Links, is the Magic of Friendship. Everything is coming to full circle now. The destination of this journey is going to be one marvelous sight... This is going to be very interesting.
*shakes head* What the... I think I chanelled Igor in that last paragraph... Should I be worried?
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*sigh* Really, MythrilMoth?
MotherFUCKER
This has to be the biggest asshole move if I've ever seen one. No, wait, this is way past asshole moves, that's just plain fucking evil.
What kind of sick person crashes a funeral.
Ho-lee FUCK, Sunset Shimmer. Just, fucking hell.
6340608 Thanks, I'll fix it momentarily.
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Can someone say, CALLED IT?!
Okay, but no, I'm not the gloating type, especially since it was kind of painfully obvious.
Anyway, I liked this chapter. I especially liked how Magus showed why he's one of the greatest characters in Chrono Trigger.
Keep being awesome, Moth.
Remember me saying this?
Well, I was wrong; I remembered reading the text that said "who needs farms when u have fast food" and immediately getting pissed at the idiot who sent it. I actually said "where do you think the food comes from, you idiot?!"
I just hope the others don't try to game the system and force their relationships to a better state just to power up their Personas. Good thing Dash already hit Rank 10, because that definitely seems like something she'd do.
As for that encounter... If I didn't know any better, I'd think this was an intentional act to strengthen the bonds of the group. As it is, it looks more like Sunset being the world's largest asshole and crapping on a solemn occasion, but if you tilt your head right, this almost seems like a cry for help. I'm probably way off base, especially given the dialogue, but these actions don't seem to mesh with what I've seen of her in the past. At least, not to me.
And Pinkie raises a good point: Nine-on-one odds look pretty good. Yes, Sunset is going to be an end or near-end SMT boss, with all that that implies, but still, definite numerical advantage.
Sunny's god complex is showing. And it's not going to end well for her.
When Sunset has to finally pay the piper for her access to all the game breaking abilities she has I think she might end up brain dead.
Deals with the devil only end well for the devil himself.
6340722 Pretty much what I said even as I was writing that.
So... Die for me! added with lowering attack power.
Note, Immediately when I saw Heavy Dark Damage, I just thought of Alice. Hmm...
So, given Sunset's actions in Tomodachi, the phrase "Aunt Satin's funeral" doesn't sit well with me... I might be overreacting to this one, though.
The story is approaching its climax, and the players have been put on the board. Though the journey is far from over, the time of Judgement has begun!
6340808 No, because Die For Me! is an amped-up Mamudoon (instant kill or nothing). THIS spell is damage-based, not OHK.
6340867 Don't read too much into that. It's just one of those "see what I did there" things.
6341007 HEY HEY HEY! MARK those P3/P4 spoilers! Or I'll delete your comment!
Done, sorry. I apologize for that. Though, by now, people can just look those games up. But I understand. I apologize.
So, about my question...
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The whole REASON for the spoiler policy is because PEOPLE READING THIS STORY ARE PLAYING PERSONA 3 AND PERSONA 4 RIGHT NOW AND DO NOT WANT TO BE SPOILED ON THINGS LIKE THAT.
Also, you didn't tag your spoilers sufficiently in my estimate, so your comment was deleted. I've posted the warning in no fewer than THREE CHAPTERS *AND* the story description, so you have NO excuse and I'm done being nice about this.
As to your question? Fuck your question. I hate Hellsing.
I promise it won't happen again.
At this point, I really wonder what kids these days learn at schools... Even though it's a fanfic, it still hits parallels to how kids really act nowadays from what I've experienced though I might've just been unlucky in that regard.
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Sadly, horrible teachers do exist in real life Having just such a teacher in Primary School (local equivalent of Elementary School) lead to severe Social Anxiety Disorder and my long standing issues with authority figures.
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Or it could just be a case of Evil Cannot Comprehend Good. This version of Sunset looks like what you'll get if you take her canon personality, remove any redeeming qualities and amplify her desire to be superior to everyone else to the logical extreme.
When you think about it, all her attempts to hurt our heroes have indirectly contributed to their growth and the strengthening of their bonds. She's just too blinded by her arrogance/sense of superiority to see it. If/when she does realize that her schemes to harm the ZIT has actually benefited them (even indirectly), she's going to have an epic Villainous Breakdown.
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Do continue reading. I guarantee you'll want to hug Fluttershy after a certain plot event.
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Has there been SMT games where Light and Dark became damage moves rather than OHKs?
6341403 I think most of the main SMT games and the first two Persona games actually, I know that I've seen skill sheets where they were damage moves instead of OHK. Zef would know better, he's the bigger SMT guru of the two of us.
... I am so full of righteous rage right now that I can't feel my face any more. Turns out, smiling pleasantly. If only there was a way to relieve this anger on its intended target instead of beating the stuffing out of a punching bag. Going to go do that any way, but still, it's the principle of it.
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Re: Light and Dark damage-based skills:
Yeah, the Megaten games do have those skills, though they're becoming increasingly rare. Persona 1 and 2 had them like any other elemental, but Digital Devil Saga only had the one Light-based damage skill (Xanadu) and Nocturne had several signature skills like Amaterasu's Godly LIght. But Persona 3 had none, and in Persona 4, Ame no Sagiri has God's Judgment and Hell's Judgment, both of which are percentage-based (HP-halving skills) instead of just outright damage.
6340583 There are teachers like that in the world who just make their students feel like complete crap.
6340601 At my high school we had a teacher who told one of her students that see didn't care about them and told her to kill herself. No lie this is 100% true. I forgot about our shop teacher who punched a student in the back.
http://www.heraldmailmedia.com/news/tri_state/pennsylvania/james-buchanan-hs-teacher-charged-after-allegedly-punching-student/article_26004ce2-bc3a-11e4-a488-5b4ca8b29420.html
http://www.publicopiniononline.com/local/ci_25113569/parent-spanish-teacher-tells-students-i-dont-care
Also great chapter keep making this awesome.
Okay, this just doesn't make any sense. Sunset Shimmer did that JUST to troll Applejack. What is her damage?
I wanted to punch Sunset Shimmer for that, which is saying a lot.
I'm at a loss for words, right now... in more ways than one.
The more I read this, the more I'm convinced that this Sunset Shimmer isn't even human (especially considering her nonsensical, seemingly goal-less actions and that amount of control over Zodiac (I mean, she controls both the texts and the shadows)). That's the kind of crap Nyarlathotep (especially the one we see in both Persona 2 games) would pull off.
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Nah.
Punching is too good for Sunset. Something Involving...a Woodchipper sounds better
6342321 Poetic justice would be to give her the Oreo. If you got that, you're cringing right now. If you didn't, I'm not explaining it.
6342692 Damn Mythril... talk about brutal...
Three things that I just thought about and that keep bouncing in my skull:
1. When Twilight got hurt during one of her first train sessions, Cadance took her to Zodiac so that Twily could spam Dia on herself. Did Flash was pulled in aswell? I honestly can't remember him mentioning "Zodiac materialized around me suddenly, but it was gone in less than a minute."
2. In the previous training session, Rainbow had a hole punched in her chest, but she was revived inmediately (luckyly). Did the revive also mended her clothes?
3. This one is a bit bigger. The events that happened in the 5/5 chapter are derived from a S.Link event, an event that, according to Persona games and Moth himself, could happen at any date of the story and be the same all the time. So, if Fuji Apple would die always at the 7th Rank event of the Strength Social Link, which can happen at any date; that would mean that his funeral, and the story event that leads to the forging of The Judgement, would necessarily have to happen after the S.Link event. A Story Event dependent of a S.Link event is... not very usual, especially when it is only the 7th Rank of a non-story-based Link. If this was an actual game, then the moment between the Rank 7 of the link and the funeral would be too far in between to make sense if the player dashed throught that link, or if the player attended Rank 7 after the 5/5, it would make much less sense. Thats a really big sequence breaker right there.
If I were part the dev team for this game, I would point this out and suggest the following: Make Fuji Apple's death and funeral scripted events, and have the Strenght S.Link become unavaible after certain rank, so that the sequence wouldn't break. Or even, have Rank 7 play out in three different ways: 1) Way before Fuji dies (this one would make the link unavaible until after the 5/5); 2) When Fuji dies (this event would be pretty elusive, and would also make the link unavaible until after the 5/5); and 3) After Fuji's death and funeral. This would of course leave Rank 8 unaffected in any way, and the other ranks after it.
What do you guys think? Or I'm taking that too seriously?
Sorry for the wall, have a
Fuck you Sunset Shimmer and fuck everyone else for texting such shitty-ass messages behind her back on her dad's fucking funeral
Other than that, this is the chapter where the story went from great to amazing. Keep up the good work!!
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1. Unless I'm recalling things incorrectly (which is entirely possible), Cadance only suggested bringing Twilight back into Zodiac for that purpose but never actually went through with it.
2. Since she was wearing her Black Butterfly outfit at the time, I'm guessing her regular clothes were unaffected.
3. If this were a game, here's how I think it would have worked: Fuji Apple's death, his funeral and the subsequent event are not dependent on the Strength S.Link and always happen on a fixed date. Since the post funeral event leads to the forging of the Judgement S.Link, it would technically require the Fool S.Link to be maxed out first (which is not an issue since that is a story driven S.Link). However, the Strength S.Link would be affected in the sense that it can't progress beyond a certain rank until after the funeral.
P.S. I think we passed the point of taking things too seriously a few chapters back
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1. That might be it, actually. It didn't occur to me.
2. I completely forgot about that fact. Gotta love virtual reality
3. Other than a few details, that is exactly what I theorized. Glad to see someone else thinks the same.
Ps: Overanalysis FTW!
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Saves them from having to explain any clothing damage. Also good for Rarity's sanity
6340755 Some part of me thought that all those texts were written rather spontaneously by Sunset herself just to get a rise out of AJ. I must say your hypothesis seems quite odd at first glance, but there may yet be meat on those bones... This is a Persona story, after all, and there could very well be a Greater Scope Villain or something along those lines that has Sunset in a corner.
Uh... no. It really isn't. Ruining a funeral via abusing the mystical powers of Social Media is indeed a lesser crime than rape. Is Flash really so stupid as to think that this is worse than that?
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Have you forgotten what Sunset uses zodiac for? Every single time Sunset drags people into Kodiak, it's to kill them. She's not writing the texts; those are a side effect. Her purpose is murder.
Which IS, in fact, worse than rape.
6342740 Not brutal enough
Sunset is going to pay for this. Slowly, painfully, and tenfold everything she's ever done to anyone. And when that happens I'll enjoy every moment of it!