Flash Sentry, a new student at Canterlot High School, must adjust to life in a new town and school, make new friends, battle evil creatures that threaten mankind, and solve the mystery lurking within Canterlot's social media network.
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So, I'm re-reading the story, and I just noticed something. You know how back on December 8th, Flash says that whoever Eris is, she has a grudge against Rainbow?
I'm not sure, but there could be a possibility that Eris is either Gilda or Lightning Dust.
5652376 No, it isn't either of them. Because neither of them are CHS students. They don't have Canterbook access. This has been discussed.
Hmm... I thought Rainbow was coming back for the new year... or have I misunderstood?
Yes! The best part of the costume system from P4:G! Running around an otherworldly nightmare in suits and ties!
I did some thinking, and some counting, and some more thinking... and I can only say that it will be very interesting to see how the hell you will pull this of.
Interesting horoscope. Rarity's birthday party is going to be interesting, what with the formal or semi-formal dress requirement.
5652400 She's coming back on New Year's DAY, not New Year's EVE.
5652416 Mind being a little less vague?
I had to read that horoscope twice to make sense of it. Rather clever, that.
Then it turned out you meant it literally. Well, when facing a fish-goat, call in the goat sucker.
Nice to see Sonata easing in to her new surroundings. She's in good hands.
And formal attire? That's going to be... interesting. I wonder if Dash will try for a suit.
5652436 Oh...Ehrm.
Heh, I never thought you'd respond... Ok, here goes. As we all know, there's twelve signs in the zodiac. Until now, we have five people being attacked (since the start of the story). The mane six will be included by default, meaning you have a total of eight targets "ready". That means you have to come up with four more, giving them background and stuff to make them seem plausible and making them fit the story.
And then you said once that this story will be finished in september? Then I started thinking "Hmm, if he's going to keep the suspence...there is no way Eris will be exposed until at least summer... and he still needs to keep the readers on a leach." Then I realised that we have two antagonists, but still. In my opinion, even if Eris would be exposed, you would have to hold on to Mephistophiles identity until the very end or the story will be just battles for the sake of battles. This is just my opinion.
That's a lot of work. I have no doubt that you will pull it off, but as I said: it will be very interesting to see how the hell you will pull this off, because whatever happens, I will be baffled.
I just felt I was ranting so I skipped everything but the punchline.
I'm calling it. Combat dresses for the girls.
5652376 Mythril already disproved that theory.
I can't wait to see what Rarity is wearing for her birthday party. I just hope she can run in it.
Because Flash is too ignorant and lazy to do it himself. Or maybe just forgetful. How many personas does he have now? 20?
5652471 Everything important in this story is already plotted out. Just relax and enjoy the ride.
5652506 We're up to 19 by my count, including Chupacabra. My original plan was for Chupacabra to manifest DURING the Capricorn battle, but I decided to do it this way instead.
5652603 Oh, I know, and trust me, I am. ...but the suspence is killing me!
Eeeh... not much to say about this chapter, except that it was cute. Sonata is finding true friends in the dorm, more shenanigans with Twilight's family, Home-made pizzas (which I agree, are always better than restaurant pizzas).
I find it a nice touch that because it is new year, you ended the chapter with "tomorrow's" header. I think this will be the first time where the next chapter starts at the same moment the previous one ended in this story.
HAPPY FAKE NEW YEARS!
Aaaaannnd that moment's gone.
5652385 Ooohhh yeah... WELL I FEEL STUPID. XD Umm... *goes through memory searching for someone else besides Fluttershy who could have a grudge on Rainbow* Uhh....... at least it will be a surprise (at the moment)!
5652376 5652385 5652499 I musta missed that discussion. (Personally, I thought that was the case too. Way to yank the rug out from under me Mythril.) Also Grici's Pizza? (Don't think I didn't see what you did there.)
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I believe I was the first one to voice that theory in the comments... Just in case either of you are curious about the previous discussion on the topic, here's the most relevant comment, and MythrilMoth's creepy-grinned reply.
I can't blame you for missing/forgetting it, since it happened nearly three weeks ago...
5653098 Around these parts we also call it Fici's. Make of that what you will.
¿Que?
Gee golly gosh, it feels like it's been forever since we've seen you!
Yeah, Flash does need to get in some more practice per boss.
OH MY GOODNESS THAT IS ADORABLE! I WANNA HUG IT AND PET IT AND CALL IT GEORGE!
SUBARASHII! HAPPY NEW YEAR, PERSONA EG!!
Beware of goats. They may attract chupacabras.
BEST HOROSCOPE THUS FAR BY A MILE.
5652616 How do you think I feel? This guy just keeps coming with twists, surprises, turns and... I don't even know! All I know is that this is probably one of the most underrated fics on this site! Probably because Flash is in it. I really don't know why people hate him.
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I have high hopes that it will be featured when Mythril competes the entire story.
5654154 Same here. He deserves it.
5654109
All of Flash haters exist because now Twilight has a romantic interest, A.K.A. She's no longer avaible for them.
5654259 *nerd voice* Actually it's because Flash has no character whatsoever! You could replace him with a plank of wood and the scenes would be no different!
*normal voice* But yeah, no, I don't really get it either. The way I see it, Flash is kind of a blank slate. And any artist will tell you that you should love a blank slate, not hate it.
5654742 If the blank slate is a supporting character, then they come off as boring. But if the blank slate is the main character, it works better because we're in the point of view of an ordinary person reacting to the extraordinary situation. It helps that we can see their character develop internally.
I just had a moment of brilliance:
Since Sonata can't sing anymore, she has no way to express her passion. Unless, she starts writing songs.
How does that sound?
5655966 That's an interesting thought.
By the way, while I'm here: Today's chapter may run a bit late. I was up all night with a sick dog and I am beyond exhausted.
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*Sarcastically
Darn! I woke up really early for this!
And sorry to hear about that. But why?
5656274 Why what? My dog was sick, I had to stay up to make sure it wasn't serious. He's been having gastric troubles about once a month for a while now. It usually happens around two in the morning, lasts a couple hours, and the whole time, he paces restlessly around the house while his bowels make the most ungodly noises. Evidently this is just A Thing, and I just have to make sure it (a) passes, (b) isn't accompanied by diarrhea and vomiting, and (c) isn't bloat. It's led to several sleepless nights since it started.
(And then to top it all off, I got less than two hours of nap time in before something ELSE woke me up, ARGH)
I have the strange felling that the next shadow battle will look sorta like what the new game looks like
5654742 To me, that's just an excuse. There have been plenty of background characters that have received no development, but instead of being hated, the fans develop them themselves. The only difference between Flash and those characters is that his EqG counterpart has gotten a speaking role.
Well, I thought this fic would suck only because of the Flash Sentry tag, I was terribly wrong. This story is a masterpiece, even though I've never played Persona before. Great story, keep rockin' !
PS: Eris is Fluttershy
5658293 yeah, hes gonna throw us a loop with the dormmates,
PS: Eris is Firefly
That was a Capricorn joke, wasn't it?
5659213 PS Eris is the janitor
5926769 Chupacabra is also the Persona fused.
6457257 PS Eris is Eris.
ROFLMAO!!!!
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Man the more I read of Sonata the more I want to give her hugs ... and if this was a game, it'd be when I'd either plan on dating her exclusively or making her part of my herd. She really needs the love. And the Breakfast Burrito.
uh...well that’s a new one.