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PresentPerfect


Writer, RCL co-curator, EQD prereader, dramatic reader, VA, fic reviewer. Vote for my next fic to release!

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Sunset Shimmer is a girl with problems. For instance, there's the students of Canterlot High getting bewitched by magic from an unknown source. Then there are her attempts to enter a band in the Battle of the Bands, only one of whom can actually play her instrument! Not to mention she still hasn't gotten over her feelings for Flash Sentry. Oh, and let's not forget her massive inferiority complex in regards to Twilight Sparkle. Yeah, like that's not constantly hanging over her.

It's almost more than a girl can take and still keep sane.

Written a week prior to the Rainbow Rocks release. Has nothing to do with the movie... Outside the six or seven things I predicted!

"You're like an American version of Blueshift~" -RainbowBob

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Comments ( 26 )

I found this to be a fun story, and fun stories like this cheer me up when I'm feeling down. Thank you for putting a smile on my face, and I'll definitely follow you to see what stories you have planned next. :twilightsmile:

Sun flash Does seem to be pretty good.

Also, I demand a refund from this free story: it wasn't bad enough.

More seriously, to me it felt like only the ending was a proper shitfic, but I have the same tastes of an anglerfish

Sunset is better than Agagio, and will always be the original. The Original Character of the EQ Universe.

Anyway, good story, i adore Sunset Shimmer.

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5036760
Go read anything else in my gallery with a Random tag, Discord's Deli of Chaos excepted.

I feel I was tricked

"Just so long's I don't get stuck playin' bass again."

But AJ, the women love bassists!no they don't They're really good with their strumming, if you know what I mean:duck:

Literally, she exploded into bloody chunks that flew out into the crowd, leaving a stain on the wooden stage. One of her fingers landed on the head of that mint-green new girl, who grabbed it, gasped excitedly, and ran out of the auditorium, holding it aloft and screaming like a fangirl.

My god, PP I fucking love you. :rainbowkiss:

Your shitfic mastery is like no other.
:heart:
^ This thing here, stop stealing it from me! :trixieshiftleft:

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5037505
It could be worse, I tricked myself by writing this. :(

5037874
I'm glad you had an appreciate. :D

5037922
S-senpai!
:rainbowlaugh:
Much appreciate to be had here. I think that could be increased by the vodka, but who's keeping track of these things?
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Definitely making that follow button a real investment for me, you are.:yay:

> dat Lyra

> dat two-word scene

> dat upvote

So, what I'm getting out of this is that Fluttershy's hair extensions are an eldritch abomination?

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5042616
I don't know why it happened, it just did.

5042660 I blame Discord.

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

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5046727
I work for Equestria Daily as a fanfiction pre-reader. I not only know how to submit fanfic, I know darn well this one wouldn't make it. :V

The fic's both marvelously gripping and a real heartstring tugger up until the day of the competition, and it is side-splittingly hilarious throughout. Keep up the good work, Present!

5036760 I just find it amusing that it only got really trollish once Twilight arrived; it's like she somehow brought the stupidity through the portal with her. :rainbowwild:

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5096976
You're too kind. :D

5097128
What's to say she didn't? :V

5097765 You raise a good point! :pinkiecrazy:

The song ended. The crowd went wild. Twilight gave them the double guns and winked.

"Friendship, bitches!"

The school was saved

that killed me right there...:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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5298629
I aims to please. :D

This story was good in a lot of ways, but I was kinda hoping that it was have steadily gotten crazier as it went on. I mean like, A LOT crazier (teenaged girls exploding into clouds of gore, not withstanding). Fluttershy's hair and Pinkie Pie's... general Pinkieness, threw me off a bit in that regard. I was expecting non-ecludian geometry, lectures from Noam Chompski about the nature of man and the complete breakdown of reality as Sunset tried really, really hard to be the straightwoman in all this insanity.

Nevertheless, this is still an underrated fic that deserved much more attention than what it got.

I think the most important question here is this: If Pinkie's hair ever enters Fluttershy's hair, do they open a rift in the fabric of time and space that leads to the Astral Plane?

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5812449
What do you think happened to Applejack's parents? :B

Twilight Sparkle would have known what to do, for sure. It didn't help that she wanted to shout about being surrounded by idiots.

I'm pretty sure that's exactly what Twilight Sparkled would have done. :twilightsheepish:

You did well with Sunset, and actually sold me on her caring about Flash, if later than I'd have liked considering how early you established getting back with him as a goal. As far as from nowhere deus ex machina resolutions go, this one integrated with what Sunset had been going through pretty well. Oh, and you got some good jokes in there, too (especially "Consarnit" and Trixie).

Reviewed here.

Yeah that pretty much is how I remember it going

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