TThe Observer Effect
MLP: FiM
Sad
A young man recently moved in order to work as a security guard for Canterlot High School. One night on patrol, he discovered an abandoned unicorn filly. Two and a half years later, these recordings are the only evidence left.
Human
Twilight
OC
soulpillar · 10k words · 42 2 · 1.2k views
THumanity's Greatest Pastime
MLP: FiM
Comedy
A human is running Ponyville's first, heavily filtered, connection to the internet. It's only a matter of time before the ponies break through… and find out the truth.
Human
Twilight
Celestia
OC
soulpillar · 2.4k words · 1,489 23 · 20k views
TThe Sun & the Rose
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
An English knight married a kindly woman, touched in the head, who thought she was an alicorn. She was right.
Human
Celestia
OC
soulpillar · 102k words · 2,690 63 · 28k views

Apr

27th

2015

Final edit done! · 10:24am Apr 27th, 2015

I've gone through S&R, and I'm pretty proud of what I've got here. There minor edits all over the place, but some parts have undergone some narrative changes.

Chapter 5 changes:
- Some tweaks of Gareth's dialogue when he met Gleaming Horizon.
- Some tweaks of Celestia's dialogue at breakfast.

Chapter 9 Changes:

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