• Member Since 10th Aug, 2014
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Just an ordinary guy in an ordinary website making extraordinary stories.


In the city of Los Santos, Vanoss and most of his crew are testing out a new glitch in the latest update, but somehow suprisingly they all end up in Equestria, they're bodies trapped in their GTA V characters and somehow developing otherworldly powers.

Together they must all work together to figure out how they got here and stop an ongoing war from destroying itself.

Not a parody or spoof of anything, but an actual story with a plot an setting and grammatical stuff like that.

The characters in the fic will include Vanoss, H2O Delirious, SilentDroidd, I AM WILDCAT, Lui Calibre, Sark, Daithi De Nogla, Mini Ladd, and Terroriser.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 380 )

Some punctuation problems, but for the parts with Vanoss and gang I couldn't stop laughing. Although some of the things the Mane 6 said and did seemed off for their character, it was still a good story.

I love Vanoss and all his friends the videos they make are hilarious. As far as I can tell Vanoss and everyone else seem to be in character. So I can actually see this happening in a video. Now I just wait for the next chapter and hopefully the mane 6 aren't too ooc. Good luck and I await chapter two.

~Emo Rainbow Corporationz

I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

I don't watch a lot of MLP, so I'm sorry if the Mane 6 aren't very much in character :twilightangry2: and I also sort of
rushed the mlp part just to get to Vanoss.

4890654 Dammit I forgot about SilentDroidd!

4890917 NEIN! I have a plan for that, and it'll be completely random:derpytongue2:

Needs a bit of work but I like it. 7/10
When you have someone talk don't just have there name afterwards.
(Your Story)
"No, not Delirious, no one cares about him," Wildcat.
(How anyone would have done it.)
"No, not Delirious, no one cares about him," Wildcat stated. :scootangel:

4891208 Wa-wait? How would down vote a piece of criticism, quite honestly I found those bits a tad annoying. But chugged on through, agreed. Needs more work, and please people don't down vote criticism, that's the worst you can do.

Edit: The worst you can do is delete criticism.

i dont care if this story may have been written bad this was just too fucking hailarious for me to notice

OMG FINALLY!!!:rainbowwild: NOW TO READ!!!:yay:

can't STOP LAUGHING!!!!! MORE MAN, MORE!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

You really did a good representation of vanoss and his friends, causing to laugh a lot X,D

You have to do more man this shit is funny!!!

Oh boy I can't wait to see everyone else's reactions to the ponies, specifically Delirious.

HA HA HA :rainbowlaugh: oh dear god that was fucking great but where was Droid i needs my Cockatoos :rainbowlaugh:

What happened to Sark? Your description has him, but he isnt in the story? Unless you plan on bringing him later or something. Now, only if this had Seananners in it. Lol

I never said he would come NOW, I will spoil it a little and say he comes later in the story :facehoof:


are you their skit director

4893418 No but I'll take it as a compliment :pinkiehappy:

its pretty good so far keep goin! :D :twilightsmile:

Well that was fast, not that I'm complaining.

Then Droidd came, with a taxi......with his destination to Cockatoos.....That was unexpected. :rainbowlaugh:

All I have to say to this is... yes... WELL FUCKING DONE!

Good so far, maybe have the glitch go even further so they can change into their Gmod outfits while the abilities of Gmod and the same for COD and Skate 3 maybe? It would be funny to see what they could do with Gmod abilities in MLP and the things they could spawn in.

What I'd do in this situation or how I see it.
Droid - Hey you wanna goto cockatoos?!
Me - fuck yeah!
Droid - ok we need to take a right here a left here another left and the portal...
Me - wait WTF!!!!!
*drives through portal and sees ponys*
Me - I'm done I'm fuckin done...
*pulls pistol out and commits suicide* * respawns in the same room*
Me - shit!!!

again, CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!!!!!!!!

Yes. I have waited my entire life for this. THANK YOU, FOR MAKING A MLP/VANOSS FIC! :raritystarry:
*Cough* Uh, yeah, anyway, I love it. :rainbowkiss:

Okay. Just a thing here.

Haven't even read it yet and the first thing on my mind is "Oh Faust, Delirious with unicorn powers.... We're fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucked."

I'M DYING! I'M FUCKING DYING!!! MY SIDES:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

*Sniff* Eheh..you just got yourself a fave, a like, and a follow.

This is absolutely HILARIOUS!!! I hope you continue this story.

OMG so good!!!!! Make more please for the love of god MOAR!

o.m.g i have never laughed so bloody hard in my life :rainbowlaugh: you my good sir are a FUCKING!!!! saint thank you :pinkiehappy:

I'm gonna be waiting for the day when Vanoss or any of the crew find this, heck, they may even do a reading of it. Now that would be fucking perfect. :pinkiehappy: As for the story, it is so well written, it seems like another Vanoss skit, only longer. Spike approves as well. :moustache:

This chapter made me smile and laugh! Nice work!

Oh, if only Marcel was here to join the party. He'd understand what's going on... :yay:

oh...my...celestia....*gasp* I CANT BREATH! I think that i died a little inside.. please just....MOAR!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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