A normal guy playing a game of team fortress 2 finding a server to find a map that says ponyville but right when he clicks connect to the server a portal opens up sucking him into the world of equestria turning him into a sniper. Will he make friends or will he just shoot them thinking it is just part of the game?
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Hmmmm has potential this train has potential but just one thing
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Pretty good so far. As a tip instead of 'Twilight: "Really!? Where!"'
You could have : '"Really!? Where!" Said Twilight.' I'll be watching in the mean time.
4460232 thanks for the tip!
Awesome story! Despite the unusual way it is written, I am really enjoying it!
4462228 thanks, and sorry about the way I write it
still new at this, but enjoy!
valve should be Valve
4462779 fixed it for you
Haha! Purple haired marshmallow
im a mixture of confused and interested the story's Idea has potential but some of the time Im wondering whats going on
Dat twilight sniper XD
"Could you speak softer I mean really, do you want me to get deaf!!!"
The sentence above should be : "Could you speak softer? I mean really, do you want me to go deaf?!"
Also, what's with all the -'s ?
???: WATCH OUT BELOW!!!!
The sentence above could be rewritten like this: ' "WATCH OUT BELLOW!!!" Said a voice from above. '
Also, do you have a pre-reader ? If not you should probably get one.
4473485 I'm writing these chapters with an ipad so it sometimes put the -'s from time to time. Also no I don't
and I need to have one.
4473485 Really "!?" Thats it? HE NEEDS MAJOR Mistakes Like mispelling
Can you make the chapters longer
4480822 I could try but my brain wont handle over 2000 words in each chapter
. Ill try to make this longer when I get the time
4482641
YOU WILL GET THE TIME!!!!!
This is going to end badly isn't it?
I can easily tell it will end badly.
Good job to.
4488560 thanks
but I won't promise anything in the future.
Am I the only on who feels that Blueblood is about to receive a Jarate to the face?
show her your hats.
4489904 You Not XD
KABOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!
Yay :D
Please become the Christian sniper please!!
4482641 Just mentally split the chapter up into smaller parts.
4518683 I don't understand what that means, care to explain?
IT LIVES! Hiya Silver.
4518790 I'll tell you later; I have to go.
4518808 herro
Well this is an Ed, Edd, Eddy reference from when the Eds went to Rolfs celebration of the Sea cucumber.
4518882 it is?
well might as well to find that episode and watch it. Feels like I missed the episode.
4518790 Use your mind to imagine that the long chapters you're going to make, are smaller parts.
... Oh my god...
..... Cool
I love it
"Twilight, if your going to make mares lesbian for you try harder than that."
"Well then I'll keep my scope on your head and if you are the fake before the vows are done I'll blow your head off!"
This guy's not playin' around anymore, time to get sniping mate.
I efing love this story so much
Mwhaahahahaha!!!
Knockout on start is done to much!
Good story?!
well shit
criyssys fucked
ooohhhhhh.
So why upgrade him to CBS and not something like Piss Cakehole/Cakehole Piss, or Weaselcake
4635677 well I never heard of piss cake hole before in my entire life when I played Tf2. Even watching strange G-mods or SFM I never discovered piss cakehole. I'll search it up to see what he looks like.
4635805
Sorry it took me so long to respond. He's the Carver of the Painis Cupcake style TF2 monsters. See Piss Cakehole meets Painis Cupcake by JTNighty.
4637897 saw the video, interesting and seems OP but weakness and stuff but I want to use a boss more widely known to many people since CBS is also is a boss in the saxton hale's mod. And dang does he gets bloody