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TLP


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Godfather's Rapid Reaction Force, CIF Team 1, stay behind to sacrifice themselves for the sake of humanity, and a handpicked group of scientists and elite soldiers. After activating the Medusa device with the Cortex, the energetic pulse kills all cryptids in a 3-mile radius. Unfortunately, it also kills the Team in the process. Or so it seems...


My Little Pony belongs to Hasbro. Call of Duty belongs to Activision. And any videos belong to their rightful owners/companies/businesses. And comments of why you did or did not like it are much appreciated.

(Knowledge of the Extinction game-mode and its story-line is highly recommended.)

Important Note: This story and its chapters are, as of December 8, 2016, being re-read by me and edited. This is due to me feeling that I could've done this so much better and I was pretty new to this. Expect all chapters to go through mild/major changes or even deletions. All chapters from Chapter 2 onwards, will be archived in the form of a Google Doc, for those who want to read it un-edited, including any chapters I might delete.)

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Comments ( 868 )

Finally! An Extinction crossover! I'll give this story a go! :pinkiehappy:

Honestly, I do like the story. But you might need to change character's thoughts into italics instead of bold. Your writing's fairly good, could use a bit of work, but it's still enjoyable nonetheless. I still hope you bring in the Cryptids to Equestria! That would be amazing! :twilightsmile:

TLP

Really glad you liked! And about the bolds and italics, I'll do it ASAP. I'll go back and fix any and all errors I can find after I finish the next chapter.

As for the cryptids... :rainbowdetermined2:

"It's all part of the plan..."

Bloodey hell you stoll my idea

Comment posted by TLP deleted Aug 28th, 2014

Yeah more like the cryptids is taking over the rainbow factory and the cryptids rhino just kill rainbow dash and crush her skull and the cryptids rhino beinging eat rainbow dash flesh. :moustache: pretty scary of rainbow factory the sequel is coming.

They can't hurt Dashie! :rainbowderp: I curse you for this! :rainbowwild:

*BANG* oops....






Fluttershy did it, I swear.

TLP

4891636 Sorry, but you know about rules of engagement. It still applies to them.

If it makes you feel any better, nobody' gonna die. :scootangel:

TLP

4891194 Um..damn.:rainbowderp:
For starters, cryptids can't walk on clouds..

Secondly, cryptid won't appear for quite a while.

Good chapter, need to check your math though.

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4892397 ..Can someone slap me please:ajsleepy:

I'm on it. and thank you:rainbowkiss:

The quote at the top is from President Theodore Roosevelt,
Also fairly good story, I'm beginning to like in spite of my hate for COD Ghosts.
PS hope you get better soon!

TLP

4893291 Out of all the famous quotes, I forget Teddys' :ajsleepy:

And thanks! I'm working on the next chapter righ now, but it'll be out tomorrow. The medicine I took is making me...s-sleepy...

Damn you, N-Night Quill...

4893350 It's good I forget quotes too, But I also despise Nightquil, I'm nocturnal so use dayquill just as good with no sleepy time required:twilightsmile:

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4893366 Yeah, I use DayQuill also, but the one day they didn't have any...:twilightangry2:

The medicine is taking over, so I'm gonna hit the hay. (No pun intended. :eeyup:)

TLP

4890784 And now you do! Quite a dream, no?:rainbowkiss:

4893384 Well sleep well and may Luna bless your dreams.:twilightsmile:

Frying any cryptid.. or human in a 3-mile radius.

If it also kills humans why not just use a fucking neutron bomb instead of wasting their time with making an advanced brain bomb!

Very good chapter! I did see some things though...

Marcus chuckled and said "Your not my commanding officer! But we should get moving. It's already dark.."

When someone is about to say something, add a coma right after the word "said" so it looks like this:
Marcus chuckled and said, "Your not my commanding officer! But we should get moving. It's already dark.."

As well as adding periods too. Unless it ends by saying said, spoke, whispered, yelled, announced, you have to add a coma. If it doesn't just add a period. Like this:

Marcus nodded "Ok, lead the way. And why're you in a ghillie suit?"

to this:
Marcus nodded. "Ok, lead the way. And why're you in a ghillie suit?"

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4894181 Ask Godfather.. :rainbowwild:

Long story short, it's more effective. Why? For starters, it doesn't put Earth in a 6 year nuclear winter. As if it would matter..

TLP

4894312 Thanks for telling me. I'll get right on it. Typing at 11:30PM on Night Quill is almost like typing with hooves. :rainbowlaugh:
Regardless, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :rainbowkiss:

TLP

4893514 Thanks. And I dreamed of hot dogs sexually seducing each other with mustard...

The fuck, Luna..:rainbowderp:

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4894915 I'm very glad you do!

And 101 veiws already?! I love you all :rainbowkiss:

Nah,overkill would of been a grenade turret. Or a mini gun turret with explosive rounds

That last line... :rainbowderp:

Smells like I just opened a can of whoop-ass.

Damn, that is so cheesy, but awesome nonetheless. :moustache:

No, there is no such thing as overkill unless you nuked it.

TLP

4896587 Sorry, couldn't help it.

Then again I think I should change it...

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4896571 Or a minigun/grenade turret with incendiary/corrosive bullets :rainbowkiss:

Your wrong about the Spanish part Die for your sins is really morir por tus pecados

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4896982 The fact that I'm a descendant from my Mexican parents is like salt on a 3rd degree burn :ajsleepy:

But thanks for pointing it out regardless. I'll fix it immediatley.

Sorry man I did not know you were Mexican man I didn't mean the way you thought I did

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4897560 Heheh, don't worry about it man! I was just kidding. I'm not offended at all, just making a little joke :pinkiesmile:

I love this story so mutch, but by the way, 'everypony' is used when its just ponies. 'Everyone' is used when you refer to humans. Same with both ponies and humans, not 'everyone/pony'. But if you want though, you can still use 'everyone/pony', im probably the only one thats bothered by it lol

...jeez these guys are low-level...
I mean,no hypno-knife? At the end of the campaign? And no upgrades?

Oh, Claymores. I love getting killed by those in Call of Duty. :facehoof:

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4899023 Lol, sorry. Got it mixed up there. I'm on it.

And I'm glad you liked it! :rainbowkiss:

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4899531 No, they all got hypno kknifes, since cryptids aren't in the story (Yet...:rainbowdetermined2: ) they got no use for them. Same with Feral Packs, Armor, ect

And things like IMS and Vultures will appear soon. I don't wanna rush this story, buut..:twilightsmile:

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4899780 Ah the good old days...

When I get killed by a danger-close Claymore before getting a Tactical Nuke...

:twilightangry2:

I hope you get better soon!(writing stories with a 110 degree fever? Thats some bucking dedication!)

Crotch shot! Love it! :rainbowlaugh:

Also this:

"WAKE THE FUCK UP YOU WEAK SCUMBAGS OR I WILL SHIT DOWN YOUR NECK!" Marcus yelled, he didn't remember the full sentence The Gunny said from F.M.J, but he didn't care, as it still proved good results.

I got a good chuckle out of this, only because I got the Drill Sergeant voice pack for Ghosts. :ajsmug:

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4901529 I don't like to be one of those people that take 2-3 years to update. Nor do I plan to be one. Besides what I do is think about what I'm gonna write, mentally plan it out, then type it. I don't just write a bunch of nonsense. I know what to put in and how. I might screw up sometimes, to others I might've already! But nobody's perfect. And my story has gotten the attention of alot of people and the like/dislike ratio is unbelievable! To some, or most, 27 likes might not be much, but honestly I could care less. Don't get me wrong, I love the amount of likes, favorites, follows, hell even the dislikes! But what keeps me going is knowing that at least SOMEONE likes and appreciates my work and effort and looks foward to more.

I know I sound cheesy as hell and I sound like a broken record, but it's the truth. And I feel damn proud to say it.:rainbowdetermined2:

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4901743 The fact that you guys are liking this..

I already do. :rainbowkiss:

TLP

4901705 Oh yeah..just wait when he meets Spitfire..:pinkiecrazy:

Mate...don't kill yourself writin' this...

TLP

4901949 Don't worry. The medicine the docs gave me lowered me to a 97 degrees. So I feel a helluva lot better.

And I plan on dying of old age, or in the Marine Corps. Whichever is fine by me. :pinkiesmile:

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