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I’m just some dude who loves ponies the same way a lot of people do... Wait, you like them 'how much' now?

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Everyone knows Evan Fong by now. He's on Fox Sports, the Internet, anywhere! And for some reason, he was chosen to protect Equestria, a land filled with talking ponies, from an indestructible force that will destroy everything in it's path.

"Please tell me, why did you choose me?"


Hey guys! What's up? This is my brand new Vanoss fic because I know I can do better than the last one I made. Hope you guys like it! :) ~ Pixelized Dreams

Thanks to 'crooked' for proof reading.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 32 )

Everyone knows Evan Fong by now.

Nope, never heard of him.

Have to let Vanoss know about this one XD

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Any time Vanoss is mentioned, this happends lol

6254951 I know, right? Big fad's happenin, if ya' know what I'm sayin'?

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I think Evan Fong is Vanoss's real name.

Can we have Lui Caliber with his Squeaker Squad voice?

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Depends on where this story goes, but it will probably be likely.

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Which is meaningless to me, 'cause I don't know who/what Vanoss is.

The point I'm trying to make here is that writers shouldn't assume that prospective readers watch/read/listen to the same things they do. It's fine if you want to write for a niche audience, but don't make the assumption that something is universal when it isn't. "Everybody knows who X is!" Um, no. No, they don't.

6255929 that's also assuming that readers can't put two and two together, and realize Evan is Vanoss. It doesn't need to be stated, because it can be suggested. I'm also sure that anyone reading the title, then the whole description could figure it out.

I just realized.... the two best things, VanossGaming and MLP:FIM, are brought together

6257918 I think Wildcat, MooSnuckel, Delirious, Lui, (NOGLAAAAAAA), and terroriser need some credit.

6255929 It's just a generalization. I'm okay with people not knowing who this guy is. Hell, I don't even know who Donald Trump is.

HERE'S..... wait, it wouldn't make sense...
HERE'S DELIRIOUS!
SURPRISE MOTHERFUCKER

Yay! Delirious is here and he is.. Surprise Motherfucker!!!
That didn't make any sense but I don't give a flying shit

if they able to get thing like fore gta5, gmod, and other thing like that. I think I can't stop laugh. maybe a bandanabus.

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yup.


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That depends on THE WRITER. I'm just a proofer:derpytongue2:

Please update fucking hilarious

I'm waiting for the rest.

I'm waiting.

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MAKE MORE PLEASE!!! EASE THE PAIN OF CLIFFHANGERS FOR ME AND THE OTHER THAT WANT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!!, plz<3

I this story is cool. And really want to see more of this fan fiction

Yo word of advice you shouldn't make him so excepting and all OK with every thing no offence but uhh your story is kinda blah pretty good plot whole but its good

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Soon. Probably. I might rebrand this into some other HiE fan fic. I'm not all too big into Vanoss anymore. Might as well salvage this. :/ :derpyderp1:

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Awesome! hope to see what you can salvage out of this! :twilightsmile:

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