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The Blue Angels: the greatest stunt pilot group on or above Earth. When one of their recruits is involved in a horrible mid-flight accident, the last thing he ever expected was being saved by a blue angel of his own...

^------------Inspired by this epic pic by johnjoseco.deviantart.com

WARNING: This story contains quite a bit of Applied and Theoretical Physics, so just a heads up! ^^;

Also contains strong language/suggestive content when appropriate
MAY become mature later on depending on reader feedback...which I do greatly appreciate and welcome :)

Further Story-related information may be found here:http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/92839

Ponyville Reference Map for this story: http://s938.photobucket.com/user/9moviefan/media/PonyvilleMap-1.jpg.html?sort=3&o=78

Song Playlist (warning, may contain spoilers!) :
Blue Angel Playlist

Chapters (71)
Comments ( 6333 )

Yes, please to be with the continuing, yes! :twilightsmile:

Perfect music for this

This is a definite track and thumbs up. Good job author.

pretty good so far, although it seems a little quick-paced for me. I would have liked more elaboration on the stunts he was performing before and during the flame-out.

368148 I didn't wanna get too technical and bore people to death
:twilightsheepish:

The maneuver he attempted to pull to pursue was basically a very abrupt flat half loop or banked turn, but at WAY too fast a speed to keep up with his target, causing him to black out. The flameout was caused by his elbow hitting the throttle controls which slammed them shut, choking the engine of air, and causing it to stall out. He then dumped too much fuel into it in a panic to start it, and that flooded it. Hope that clears it up a bit ^^;;

368115 Thanks!

You got it!
I'll try to have the next chapter up tomorrow!
Things...well...things don't go too well for Volare to say the least :pinkiegasp:

368130 LOL yes evil baby commander :rainbowlaugh:

368137 LOL which company owns Top Gun?
Imma be sued by them for this story at this rate :rainbowlaugh:

368115 Thanks! :twilightsmile:

Hell yeah, I want it continued! :pinkiehappy:

Hmmm... yes, I do like. Please, continue. :rainbowdetermined2:

368171 Okey dokey lokey! :rainbowwild:
368217 Will do! :rainbowdetermined2:

368209 Thanks *edits posts* :twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:

And yessir! *salutes*

I would love to see more of this!

Well, it could use some more description (it took me about six paragraphs to realize they were actually in the planes for instance), and there seems to be a lot of telling rather than showing as to the traits each character has, but the character themselves interact in a fun way, and the jargon seems legit, so kudos for that.

368335 Heh thanks for the critique
I fixed the first paragraph to show they're in the jets ^^;;
As for the characters, well...ever heard of the Chekhov's Gun rule of writing?
"do not include any unnecessary elements in a story."
I tend to use that alot in my writing...so I tend to only focus on what matters instead of too much side-info :twilightblush:
And since Volare is one of the main characters of the story...much more info on him to come!
Oh and I'll also explain his name soon too ^^;

>2012
>Not continuing a fabulous story such as this.
ISHYGDDT

This looks alot like the story on here named "the stranded pilot".

I look forward to more of this.

368482 Whoa...I didn't see that at all :applejackconfused:
Heh, but from what I can see in the synopsis...the similarities end pretty quickly soon :twilightsheepish:

Tracking this like a guided missile.

Minor quibble, I seriously doubt Volare would be a Major at the age of 23.

Want to read about Rainbow joining the Blue Angels? Right here

372313 I saw dat!
Buncha these sorta things popping up now, but they're all RD joining the Air Force of what have you...mine's taking...a bit of a different path :rainbowdetermined2:
Hrm oops...I meant to say Lieutenant :twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish:
He's Navy not Marines
*edit edit edit*

FURTHER EDIT: Volare is a Lieutenant Junior Grade

The board is... set.
The pieces are... arranged.
Let the game... begin.

372426 We come to it at last..the great battle of our time...:rainbowdetermined2:
Oh wait, that's a later chapter :rainbowwild:
:rainbowlaugh:

And now Rainbow Dash knows he knows her some how. 'Kinda interested to see how you'll handle this.

372531 Oh don't you worry....they're both gonna have secrets that'll shock each other soon
:trixieshiftright:

372616 LOL funny you mention that since Twilight basically views the "bipeds" in an alien way
:rainbowlaugh:

This just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for more!

So there's going to be some physical conflict and not just social ones eh?

...

That's terrible.:fluttercry:

@V-pony: I've received at least 10 email notices now that your fic has been updated, yet when I click on the link provided in the email, I brings me to the story page where it shows that nothing has been updated. I usually read the updated chapters of any fics upon getting the update emails from FimFiction. Do you think it could be the websites fault, or are you possibly doing something on the website? :rainbowhuh:

372893

Just got another 2 emails about the fic being updated.

372920 Ah jeez, sorry, I kept spotting errors and I was editing them
The chapter is set now
Sorry about that
:pinkiesick:
Is there a way to edit them wiithout sending out those updates?
:applejackconfused:

372958

I honestly don't know since I've never posted a story here before. You might have to talk to an admin about it. If anything, it's a minor annoyance.

372970 I think I will
Sorry bout that ^^;;

Thank you to all who have commented so far!
I write for feedback and cookies! :twilightsheepish:

*sigh* another brony in Equestria. I suppose this one has a little twist that the guy is a pilot but...the odds of this story being anything but formulaic are not looking good :fluttershysad:

374072 Patience, grasshoppah!
:twilightsmile:
Small difference already: he doesn't necessarily WANT to be there. Heck, he just realized his dream of joining the Blue Angels and now it's all been taken from him against his will...I'd be fairly frustrated too!
:twilightangry2:

his dream of joining the Blue Angels is taken away form him? oh boo hoo! just get him to join the wonder bolts :ajbemused:

"Volare looked back and forth between the two before he screamed in confusion and fear and took off crawling across the lobby. "
I can't read that without chuckling from the visualization.

374152 Give the poor guy a break; he just nearly died! :twilightsheepish:
And I think joining those guys is the last thing on his mind at the moment, seeing as how he has trouble just standing up right now :fluttershysad:

374194 Glad ya got a chuckle out of it. I'm so mean to Volare :rainbowlaugh:
Dash, you're kinda a dick XD

Also, all the awkward sorta chapters should be outta the way and the true plot of the story can now commence!

Also also, please feel free to shoot me ideas and tips on what you'd like to have included (The plotline gets fairly flexible from here on out) or if you see something I'm leaving out or neglecting, let me know!
Thanks!
:pinkiehappy:

374637 I feel so appreciated!
:rainbowkiss:
For real, thanks ^^

Okay... this is awesome. Enough said. But the title of the chapter made me go,
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"And he did, and then his jet started falling out of the sky and-"
You! Rainbow Dash! How do you know what the "flying machines" are called? Fuckin' paradoxes...

You, my friend, are missing the, "Chapter 2:" in the front of your title. :twilightblush:

DUDE!

He's got the same Manestyle and colors as Clockworx, Celestia's mad scientist!

374692 lol you're welcome :rainbowlaugh:

374701 hee hee hee Dash is smart enough to listen in on their conversations and figure out what a jet is :P
Or maybe I'll addresses it later...Dashie has alot of things she hasn't talked about that she's seen on Earth ^^
374711 thanks! Fixed it!

375224 Who's that? Oo

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