Ever had a desire to stop being buffeted along by life, and just go back to the good ol' days?
A young entrepreneur is tired of the hustle and bustle and corruption of the big city and returns to his hometown in the country, hoping for a simpler, happier life...but although his personal battle for happiness is only just beginning, a certain family is about to become more than just his inspiration to fight on...
Page generated in 0.143 seconds
Total duration
1,095 users online
2,152,812 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
It's a.. so-so start. Not that impressive. Maybe your next few chapters will be better.
349417 Heh, I know it's a bit vague....but if I reveal too much about V's reasons to leave the city right now...it'll seem like I'm just repeating myself later in the story
I always suck at story intros anyways
349432
It's something like a prologue? Well it's going either way to be a HiE or a PoE one... Good luck for the next chapter!
349438 Heh yep, more of a very extended story summary preview thingy (the original chapter title was actually "Prologue" but I felt that was kinda lazy XD; )
New chapter coming up in a bit!
And they WILL get a bit longer soon!
EDIT: it's up!
Chapter three is up!
...Feedback is sparse...
Oh wellz!
*soldiers on*
It gets a bit more..in spirit of the show after this!
Chapter 4 is up!
Heh, hope I wrote the characters correctly (keeping track of the Flim Flam brothers is a pain!)
Things will get...interesting as Detective Pinkie Pie tries to solve the case of the disappearing Apple Family!
hells yea
It's as good as far as crossovers go. A very good plot so far and Applebloom suggesting they slash tires? Anyway keep up the good work.
Great job so far keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.
377755 Thanks!
I've hit a bit of a wall on this one, but I've got the whole plot bullet-pointed, so it's really just a matter of fleshing it out
Stop stealing my time, college!!!
*shakyfist*
Damn those educational facilities and stealing time from the important things.
And in this story I especially like that fact that out of the mane 6 it's centered around Applejack. Cause Applejack is my favourite pony
378310 And I would like to thank you reading this story has given me some inspiration to do a cross over of my own.
387880 You're very welcome!
Heh, AJ is my fave bu Dash is certainly a close second
It's like: I could see myself with someone like AJ for life, but I'd hang out with Dash in a heartbeat, idk
Heh, I'm just about past this wall on the chapter...I've never written nonsensically like Pinkie Pie speaks and it's....tough to say the least
I shall prevail though!!!
Keep working on that chapter.
And like you Applejack is my favorite then Rainbowdash.
Who doesn't like Rainbowdash.
387984 Thanks for encouragement
And you know what...I really can't find any Dash haters unless they're just plain anti-pony in general...interesting
388121 For that same reason I thought Rainbowdash would be the most popular. Turns out she isn't nowhere near. There was a graph on EQd a while ago showing the most googled ponies. First was Twilight second was somepony I can't remember. Third was Princess Luna. I think Rainbowdash was fifth and Applejack was one of the least popular
388121 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1prPjy6s58
Just thought you might enjoy this song. I was listening to this whilst I read through your story.
388412 Aww WTF no love for AJ?!
Ooh, diggin that song!
And it came out on my birthday!
390571
Coincidence I think not.
But I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
and I can't believe AJ is one of the least popular. And to my count she only gets about 4 episodes in the whole series dedicated to her
These results please me. I always liked AJ but according to this i'm most like AJ.
i.imgur.com/4Pdtv.png
Good show! Jolly good show!
(Cookie if you get that reference.)
NEEDZ MOAR!
whoaorno.com/images/3.jpg
It's so quiet around here...
ECHO
ECHO
ECHO
ECHO
ECHO
I'm... actually somewhat curious now, but I guess the hiatus will last until you finish Blue Angel?
I also find it interesting how so many people will follow a story and then not look at the author's previous work.
well if you want feedback, your characters are perfect i think, even if the Flam brothers are a pain to write, the first four chapters where a great way to settle the character of V, and the world he is living in, i think this story has potential i was sad to see it on a hiatus status, if you could it would be great if you find the chance to continue it.
on a side note i think you captured the exact feeling some bronies, me included get when they got to know the characters for the first time, i was in love at AJ personality, it reminded me that i´m not the only one out there who values honesty, so yeah good story, as soon as university lets me i will read your other stories, i´m curious as to how a story about air fighters and ponies go along so i will definitely read your Blue Angel story
1879448 That's very likely
2329662 Thanks!
Heh, yeah, I kinda need to find some time to write out the rest of this thing, eh?
One word...
NO.
Just kidding... But don't even fuck with my Applejack bro.
I read it and was like
and
keep up the good work
But then was like
vary good story
When I was reading it I was like
and
But than read more and was like
Keep up the vary good work.
4640192 One of these days I'll go back and finish this
But thank you for the compliments nonetheless