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JusSonic


Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?

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Inspired by the fic "My Little Dashie". Justin Exitor was your usual widower with a daughter, both loves "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic". Imagine their surprise when they find six fillies who could be Twilight and her friends. How many years will the two has with their new family before they may have to let them go?

The fanart cover was made by Engrishman

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 91 )

My god that picture f-Ing ADORABLE!!!

I love this story we co-wrote, and I ESPECIALLY love that picture! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

will this story be awesome like our girl scootaloo it show the good and the bad of are kind? and I hope it not were the parent gonna hide them from the world cause they believe the world is terribly bad and fear it. there just so much cute potential~!
earth isn't that terrible I think are kind doing great for a self taught species so far.

I am dead cuz my heart melted 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 times :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Ahhhhhhhh I've been squee to death to much cute ness need insulin now MEDIC MEDIC:twilightsheepish:

D'aww! I want da fillies! :pinkiehappy: And a medic cause my head exploded from all the cuteness!:scootangel:

Comment posted by Cunt_Crusader deleted Feb 20th, 2014

I will keeping an eye out for updates. Great fic! :yay:

Very charming, but comes off a little heavy handed with all the show references. I'd limit those to Pinkie, as is the nature of her character.:pinkiehappy:

k, coupla things about this story.

1- You need an editor. BADLY. There were so many \tensing errors, I could'nt even get into it.
2-Aside from that, its a very good story, but sadly, I can't get into it with all of the tensing errors.

thoroughly enjoyed this chapter

I personally have an issue with how the mane 6 state that they've retained some of their memories, including what they do (which would mean they remember being adults), but are so quick to name the father their new "daddy". It's...honestly a little disturbing, and too convenient for my taste.

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I think the fillies felt that their experiences were dreams to them. No need to worry.

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Oh, I agree with ya. I know of someone who wishes to be an editor but the fact is, I don't know how to recruit him. If you know how to do so, feel free to tell me.

3979842 Just send a private message. Go to his user page and click the mail. Just ask and there you go! I know some others that are good editors....

nice, cute and sweet, all in one chapter

After reading this, I have to ask. Did you write yourself into a story?

so far this a good story I want to try to make something like this into chapters in my story I already have a few ideas but the only problem is getting a word document for free

Wow...I... Love it! but I think everything is happening too fast if you ask me, but Hey! at least I like it!

That fan art is the equivalent to an atom bomb on your heart.

OMG PLEASE TELL ME A SEQUEL IS HAPPENING LIKE IN MY LITTLE DASHIE

AND YES THERE IS A SEQUEL!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

This will be a 'happy' party, I see...:pinkiesad2:

damnit! stop making my heart melt!

Shet! :pinkiegasp: I hope she'll wait until after the party to for lack of a better term: take them away :fluttershysad:

You and your fucking cliff hanger you go damn basted (I love the story:heart:)

Awesome story there. I give it a 100000000000/10

The father secretly wishes that Equestria is indeed real.

we are two my brother

here is my rating :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:out of :pinkiehappy:
or 100/10 so awsome:twilightsmile:

I GIVE YOU A 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/5

Like doctor who (matt smith) said and I quote "I hate endings, never liked endings...":flutterrage:

I GIVE YOU OVER 9000 OUT OF 0!!!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

"Wow, you two...you made me so proud." Ben chuckles as he hugs both his adopted daughters. So far, two of his fillies got cutie marks. That leaves only Rarity, Rainbow, Fluttershy and Pinkie.

Who the hell is Ben?

What's with the cast list in the end?

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I always put cast lists in my fics sometimes. Makes so that the audience can see who's voice who.

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Thanks for pointing that error out. I meant to say Justin. Fixed.

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