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JusSonic


Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?

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Twilight and her friends heads to Canterlot to celebrate its founding. But a terrible creature known as the Demon Pony appears. What is this creature and what is its connection to Twilight's past?

Fanart cover made by nigel5469

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 168 )

i guess the badger is getting a lot of use today

i.imgur.com/MHuW96t.gif

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The "badger"? I don't get it.

3342159 Is that, along with the badger thing, a rude comment? Because it sounds like it to me. :ajbemused:

This is a very awesome start! :twilightsmile:

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Just Engoure that Rude Commit JueSonic. Your Storys are cool.

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It is. LunaUsesCaps got on my nerves too.

Excellent chapter. Twilight and her friends are now in Canterlot for the Founding. Surely, there'll be no problems, right?

To find out, stay tuned for the next chapter.

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That's my reaction right there...

are you using the story of beauty and the beast :rainbowhuh: if so bring something new in. Oh yeah you might want fixed hand into hoof

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To be honest, the whole fanfiction isn't a Beauty and the Beast ripoff, though some parts are inspired by the film in general. I assure you, there are some new stuff (which is technically old like a year ago).

Nopony insults the Earth Ponies and gets away with it! :twilightangry2:

It's time these ponies learn who Ben is.

Now we know who this Ben guy is... an old friend and an old lover for Twilight's. But that dumb Boris is trying to hurt Nyx, that villain.

Keep going!

Goku =Super Sayian
Twilight Sparkle = Rage Mode

Something about that Demon Pony...

Anyway, I'm glad the CMC came back okay. Whew!

Please continue!

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Yeah, but sssssh. We're building suspense here.

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I know, I was just narrating.

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Suspense? What suspense?

3363834 Jus, you couldn't build suspense if it was a two-piece puzzle.

3364173 Why?

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Ha ha ha ha! :rainbowlaugh: Nice one! Also, are you a Weird Al fan? I love that film!

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Shhh, there's no need to be upset.

I've read this story before and I'll read it again!
GO JusSonic!!!:rainbowkiss:
P.S. u might need an editor for grammar.
But your fics tell great stories!

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All right, where can I find an editor? Any ideas?

I don't know, start askin around the website. You'll find somepony.:twilightsmile:

Super Saiyan 1 Twilight Sparkle vs Boris the Animal!

Is the cloaked figure Discord? Probably not, but still...
Anyways, good stuff all around, really getting into the "Beauty and the Beast" vibe. Hope to read more!

Could someone have found her and was planning to bring the lost foal home?

At least I'm pretty sure that's how it's supposed to go, not

Could someone has found her and planning to bring the lost foal home?

So...how do you edit on fim fiction?

A cloaked figure? Suspicious...

But Twilight sure gave details about her nightmares.

Nearly had that Demon Pony. Maybe next time...

...and next chapter.

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A friend of mine wants to be an editor AKA KRyan. He wants to know what an editor does and how to do it.

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*facepalm* Editors edit out spelling and grammar mistakes in your fic.

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Yeeeeah, I know that but my friend wants to know how to do the editing progress for the fics. :facehoof: Some people...

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There are lots of ways...

Through messages.
GoogleDocs.
Comments.
E-Mails.

Take a pick.

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According to a reviewer...

Through messages.
GoogleDocs
Comments
E-Mails.

Either one could work.

3375585 I think I'll go with google docs, emails and messages. Merci beau coup.

Comment posted by JusSonic deleted Oct 21st, 2013

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Oh wait, my mistake. Just fixed it.

Those goons are up to something very bad, I know it.

Keep going!

Perhaps Demon Pony could approach Twilight Sparkle.
"Twilight, you can call me Kage Midnight."
"Kage Midnight, do you know what happened to Ben Mare?"
"Many years ago, I dropped in on a group of three ponies that were beating an Earth Pony, Boris was one of them, I know because the scar that Boris has matches the wound I inflicted back then. They dealt life threatening injuries to Ben. I had to fuse myself with him or drop him at a hospital ER. Given that many Canterlot pegasi and unicorns treat earth ponies like dirt when Celestia's back is turned, the latter was out of the question, so fusion it was."
"So, you share a body?"
"Yes, I oftentimes hear him in my head."
"If you are good, then why do you want to ruin the anniversary of Equestria's founding?"
"Because it celebrates a lie."
"A lie?"
"When Equestria was founded, all ponies were supposedly created equal. In Canterlot, the earth ponies are treated like dirt when the Princesses aren't looking.

Name:Broris
Status:alive
Note: note for long.....:scootangel:

This is not good! Now the ponies want the Demon Pony dead by Boris, and Celestia couldn't do a thing to stop it!

Keep going!

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