• Member Since 13th Oct, 2013
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JusSonic


Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?

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MLP FIM version of the So Weird episode Widow Walks: Granny Smith who waited fifty years to see her boyfriend wishes she were young horse in her early 20's again… and ends up switching ages with Applejack when Applejack wishes to be old enough to have the same privileges as Big Mac but end up as an elderly aged mare.

Also, an old enemy returns in an odd way.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 8 )

4366258
Your editor didn't take a look at this story before you published it?:ajbemused:

4367340

I was waiting for him to finish looking at a chapter of one of my previous stories so I can revise it later.

4367359
Wouldn't it make more sense to wait instead of publishing the story unedited?

4367429

I'm still waiting for the chapter that I gave him to be revised. I can't wait any longer, so I will send more chapters to be edited when the time comes.

4367429 Lack of quality control is rather repellent.

You should really get someone to help you edit these. Your grammar is really wonky, you change tense in the middle of sentences, your original characters have numerous sue-ish traits... You seriously need to either find an editor, or spend a lot more time on your fics before you post them.

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