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The wise and mysterious "They" have a couple of sayings about love.

Love isn't always on time.

Love hurts.

And distance makes the heart grow fonder.

"They" are wise for a reason. Applejack and Rarity know this all too well.

When the two friends finally admit their deepest feelings for each other, it couldn't have come at a worse possible time. With Rarity moving to Canterlot in less than a month, can their new relationship survive the distance? Or will it be too much for Applejack to endure?

Thanks to Sorren, ValorlordV5, and Loopy Legend for editing.

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Holo #1 · Aug 12th, 2013 · · 7 ·

Instant favorite. Didn't even read yet.

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I did.

Was quite good.

As usual.

~Skeeter The Lurker

best ship :heart:
I love you so much for this, Bad

I do have a soft spot for RariJack ships... and I dont even really care for Rarity too much!

I love it... and I'm a sparity fanboy, I shouldn't like rarijack; its our mortal enemy, but dammit! this is some good ass shit.

my favorite shipper... my favorite ship... my torrnet is finaly working... and I have an extra day of summer?!


thank you Bad Seed, thank you:pinkiehappy:

I'm just gonna drop my gourds off here. xD Great work Ms. Seeds. another ship well done. :twilightsheepish:

The best love stories get me at least somewhat weepy.

It's going to take a towel or two to dry my eyes after this one.

This was a lovely, quiet, romantic story... Perfectly set on a still night. I really enjoyed it, and it was well structured, leaving me guessing how it would end while ultimately giving me a satisfying conclusion that was different from the more simple ones I was suspecting. Very nice work with a very appealing pairing!

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Let me know what you think when you do!

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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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Yes it is! :heart:

D'aww, I love ya too, Regi. :moustache:

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Same!

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Wow, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Sparity is an awesome ship too. :raritystarry::moustache:

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You're welcome, you're welcome, my friend! :pinkiehappy: Hope you like!

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Hehe, thanks! :twilightsheepish:

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Awww...thank you. I hope those are tears of joy... pinkiesad2:

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Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :moustache:

3038291 Should be writing right now... dont know if I am up to doing so

Might just read this one, or the one other of yours I have not read yet...

idk... just feel drained.

DAMN YOU for putting such an awesome distraction in front of me yet AGAIN!!!

(still waiting to find out what happens to Slinga...)

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Sorry you're feeling drained... that sucks. :ajsleepy:

Heh, not sorry for distracting you though. :trollestia:

Finishing that chapter is next on my agenda. This story and the other one I have waiting on a pre-reader had been done for a while...wanna make sure this next SR chapter turns out well. It's importante. :rainbowderp:

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Heh, not sorry for distracting you though

You're EBIL! :trollestia:

All the d'awwww. :heart:

The goodness is strong with this one.

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I can't, words are not befitting of it.

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:twilightblush:

You're too much, Hobbes. Too kind for me.

Comment posted by TheAppleBloomer deleted Mar 10th, 2015

This was a wonderful story. Just as good as all your other stories.

Have a potential atmosphere soundtrack. It actually fits in it's own right. ESPECIALLY, as Applejack and Rarity are comforting/talking to their sisters in the middle of the night. Might not be for this kind of story, but it is beautiful and slightly haunting like this story. You almost made me cry, and you nearly made me like Rarity... :pinkiesad2:

Comment posted by Bad_Seed_72 deleted Mar 10th, 2015

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy: Wow, that song is sure beautiful...and works well for them talking to their sisters. Maybe I will get you to like Rarity someday. If I do make you cry, I hope they are happy tears. :raritywink:

Comment posted by TheAppleBloomer deleted Mar 10th, 2015
Comment posted by Bad_Seed_72 deleted Mar 10th, 2015

Omg :rainbowkiss: So that was tear teasing, damn it was so well done, the story flowed so well with the flashbacks and the present time, it intertwined to fluidly :twilightsmile:. And tbh you absolutely nailed the characters! So easy to imagine each scene. Just ... Amazing, Followed faved and liked :yay:
Keep at it man you have real talent. :ajsmug::heart::raritywink:

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Wow! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile: Thanks for the watch also! :ajsmug::raritystarry:

D'awww...you do write such good romance stories.:twilightsmile:

I do believe I have something for this (posting both versions, but I like the acoustic more. You pick your fav.:twilightsmile:):
(bonus if you have www.rainymood.com open while playing)

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

Wow...Samantha James has such amazing music! I like the acoustic version better. Listened to that with rainymood.com open... :pinkiesad2: Good melancholy feels... :pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy:

That was great! Lately it feels that most RariJack stories are either [in dire need of fixing], clop or "what is this feeling in my chest", of which this story dwelled on or contained neither. I was also a fan of the order the story was told in, though it took me a second to realize it wasn't completely chronological. Those two cartoon horses really deserve each other!

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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Love isn't always on time

Woah! Woah! Woah!:rainbowlaugh:

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Glad somebody caught that! :rainbowlaugh:

I so forgot to add this to my list of favs...Please don't kill me.:scootangel:

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...I'll make it quick. :scootangel:

:applecry::unsuresweetie::Awww!
:scootangel::Eww! Please ignore Scootaloo, this was sweet. Few things I should bring up though. Did Rainbow Dash say the cake was a lie? Bull crap. GLaDOS promised me cake and there will be cake, right Celestia?:trollestia:Right. Secondly Apple Bloom says she's a big pony but I must ask her where's her Cutie Mark? Huh? Huh? Didn't think so.
This was good. Is Rarijack a ship in your AppleSeed fics by any chance?

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Few things I should bring up though. Did Rainbow Dash say the cake was a lie? Bull crap. GLaDOS promised me cake and there will be cake, right Celestia?:trollestia:Right. Secondly Apple Bloom says she's a big pony but I must ask her where's her Cutie Mark? Huh? Huh? Didn't think so.

:rainbowlaugh: So now I can blame Celestia if I don't get my cake? :rainbowwild: And poor Apple Bloom... her special talent is... not having one! :applecry: :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I kid! I kid!

Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile: Actually, there is no Rarijack in my AppleSeed fics... there are some other ships, though, both F/F and F/M. :raritywink:

Great story!
It's been on my read later list for quite some time, and I am sorry I didn't read it sooner.
I love Rarijack, and that was some classic Rarijack right there.
Wonderful job!

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No problem! Thank you for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :ajsmug: :raritywink:

OMG SO ADORABLE I LOVE YOUR STORY WRITE ON:pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::ajsmug::raritystarry:

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Heh, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :twilightblush:

I found a suitable song for this beautiful, yet sad RariJack story. Goes better then the last song I sent to this story. To listen to this sad yet wonderfully haunting song really does this story justice.

:raritydespair: :heart: :ajsleepy:

Such a sad song, yet it is beautiful.... I am actually crying when I look back. Hope you like it as well :pinkiehappy:

3417987 your very kindly welcome man or women:pinkiehappy::heart::duck::heart::ajbemused:

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Wow, I finally saw this and listened! :pinkiegasp: Beautiful song... :pinkiesad2: So fitting as well... :raritystarry::heart::ajsmug: Thank you!

I loved every moment of this story simply because it hit me in the heart and has been one story that has actually made me cry in such a long time it was beautifully written. I hope you keep up the work :fluttercry::heart::raritywink:

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and found it moving. :pinkiesad2: Thanks as well for the follow! :twilightsmile:

The interaction between the two is always so naturally amusing :twilightsmile: You know what they say, opposites attract sometimes :heart: when you like someone and you don't know why, it's love.

Awesome story!

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Heh, very true on all accounts. :twilightsmile: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

I wouldn't change a thing about this fic. :heart:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :twilightsmile:

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