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Commander_Pensword


I live in the US, I write stories that deal with standing in difficult times. I also am an amature war historian with some strong beliefs about history. Discord: https://discord.gg/8CcteCH

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After 10 long years, Daybreaker has finally trapped Twilight Sparkle who has been very elusive. Now is the time to change Twilight's destiny from a simple princess to some more... "suitable".

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Note:Right then, kinda nervous posting this but the picture, lack of Daybreaker/Twilight-related fics, and sudden inspiration kind of made it happen so hopefully you enjoy.Also, if you see any grammatical,punctual, and other issues go ahead and point them out. Might as well improve, hopefully.
Link for picture: https://foughtdragon01.deviantart.com/art/Her-Most-Faithful-Student-708458574

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King Talonius II goes through a day like any other. Having breakfast with his family, getting some documents signed... a lot of documents signed. But the queen awakes to hear of his disappearance.

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Twilight once thought she knew everything there was to know about cutie mark magic. She was wrong. As it turns out, there is a lot more content out there when it comes to cutie mark magic, unlocking that potential is something not just any pony can do, much to the frustration of a certain white-coated alicorn princess.

This is a dumb one-shot vaguely inspired by a writing prompt found on Reddit, and was a caffeine fueled midnight adventure into the wonderful world that is fan-fiction.
As my second ever fanfic, first ever completed fanfic, and first upload on this site, I don't expect greatness, but what better way is there to learn and improve?

Feel free to point out any errors I might have missed, as well as anything that is particularly irritating to read, or that doesn't make sense grammatically. Most of all though, hope you enjoy!

Teen tag is for the use of a naughty word or two (depending on what you consider naughty or not)
Cover is by the ever amazing Evehly, used with permission.
Source: https://evehly.deviantart.com/art/Art-663778952

Edit: Featured? Thank you so much everyone, this is heaps more than I had hoped for, I really appreciate that!

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When you are the Ambassador of your nation, you are a cog in the bureaucracy.
When you are a Princess, you tend to think of yourself as above others.
When you are a Princess-Ambassador, you find yourself waiting in a room just to speak with the President.
Princess-Ambassador Starlight Sparkle at least has paintings and photos to look at while she waits.

Hi there amigos! Sorry for the long wait on SCS and Crystal Lane. I've hit a major writer block and so yeah... I've managed to get past that and I should have a chapter for Crystal Lane up sometime soon. Meanwhile I've come up with a new One-Shot series thingy. It'll be based off of the Victoria 2 Equestria mod and what would happen if Equestria (and Griffonia) were on the western coast of North America. Check out the game and the mod because they are awesome! More info coming! Oh and the ponies are ponies in this fic. The human tag is there for consistency with the rest of the series and it felt appropriate. Peace!

The first fic written for my new Victorian Equestria series! Based on the Victoria 2 Equestria mod.

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Long ago, a batpony made a promise to stand by his princess faithfully. It was the only mission he failed to complete. He can never make that up to her, but maybe he can ensure that she has a friend awaiting her return.

Bronze medal winner in the Writeoff Association's "Cold Comfort" event.

Entry in the Bat ponies and Thestrals 2017 contest

Thanks to Present Perfect for prereading.

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A more realistic take on the opening events of the MLP movie, where the entire cast is NOT hit by plot mandated incompetence. It is, as expected, significantly shorter.

(Minor spoilers for first 15 minutes of the MLP movie, but 90% consisting of what would already be known from the trailers.)

Cover image borrowed from DashieMLPFim

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Once upon a time there was a very lazy dragon who did not want to find a town to pillage.

So he decided to make one of his own.

Editors: Mitch H, Dlafrferg
Jake the Army Guy has done an amazing reading of this on YouTube
Excellent cover picture credit: Harwick on Fimfiction or Harwicks-art on Deviantart.com
Also, the Audio Project has done a reading of this and other stories on YouTube

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The first day of school always sucks. It's particularly sucky when you're normally nocturnal.

Now an expanding anthology of one-shots due to popular demand for MOAR!

Featured on Fimfic: 10/1/2017
Featured on Equestria Daily
Now with several chapters in audio: link!
Now with commisioned music: link!

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Editors/Prereaders:
Dreams of Ponies
JackRipper
Level Dasher
Jowijo

Submission for the Bat Ponies and Thestrals 2017 Competition

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Rarity’s little Temptation ends up on pins and needles. Literally.

With her shoulder-devil out of commission, other Temptations pop into her life to pick up the slack from their fallen sister.

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Written for the Barcast's "Make Rarity Not Garbage" contest.

Cover art by JennDyLyon. Adore her. Fear Her. Admire her art!

Pre-read by ScarletWeather and Aragon.

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It had been a long day at the boutique, and Rarity was looking forward to some well-deserved rest. Life, however, had other plans, and brought an unexpected customer with a formidable job at exactly the wrong time.

Refusing would have been the obvious choice, but Rarity sensed there was something more, and she was nothing if not a curious mare.

She wouldn't get her coveted rest, but a story about griffins told over tea seemed fair compensation for it.


Many, many thanks to Ceffyl Dwr for pre-reading and to The Masked Ferret for editing it.

This was an entry for the True Colors Write-Off round, so thanks to all the other authors and reviewers there for helping me polish this story.

Submitted to the Make Rarity Not Garbage Contest.

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