After 10 long years, Daybreaker has finally trapped Twilight Sparkle who has been very elusive. Now is the time to change Twilight's destiny from a simple princess to some more... "suitable".
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Note:Right then, kinda nervous posting this but the picture, lack of Daybreaker/Twilight-related fics, and sudden inspiration kind of made it happen so hopefully you enjoy.Also, if you see any grammatical,punctual, and other issues go ahead and point them out. Might as well improve, hopefully.
Link for picture: https://foughtdragon01.deviantart.com/art/Her-Most-Faithful-Student-708458574
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This was very interesting read. I enjoyed it.
8590592
Thank ya kindly
Is it just me, or does Twilight look like Tempest Shadow in that picture?
8590826
Yea, she looks a bit more like Tempest minus the mane and cutie mark
but what about luna and the other elements
8591028
Who knows? You well just have to see.Maybe
I demand a sequel. Nuff said.
8591149
Mmmmm... Maybe
Whats this about hands?
8591743
Oops
Fixed it
my only question is where is Luna doing all of this.
8593884
Somewhere safe I assume hopefully. You will just have to wait and see, probably.
My biggest issue is that we don't even know why Twilight was running in the first place. We're never given any evidence that Daybreaker was a tyrant. Using her powers to a greater degree in order to protect her nation more effectively marks her as a far better, more competent ruler than Celestia was. Celestia was willing to let six civilians take up arms against threats that were more than worthy of her full power. She put her own preferences and morality above the security of her country and its citizens. Daybreaker, from what evidence we have in this story, seems to be far more reasonable in her approach.
8610295
) however determining if she is a tyrant or not is something I want the reader to decide themselves.
Let us say that the fear for the unknown can drive individuals to do unnecessary actions. Just to be a little bit more clear, at the start Twilight only knows that her mentor has given into the darkness but not the reason behind it. She is given some information by Daybreaker who at the moment could chose to give select information to Twilight(and the reader) to try to improve her image. Now I agree, maybe some more context should be given about Daybreaker's rule(I thought I gave enough information
Note: Thanks for explaining what you bothered you and hopefully I cleared somethings up(I hope) but if not then I will try to explain better.
8610295
I thought she would be running so she doesnt become a princess
XD
I think this should continue. It was an interesting little read.