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silvercrystal432


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Twilight and Celestia couldn't be happier with their lives. That is until Chrysalis comes along to ruin that.

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/23812129/

This is a short story. The chapters are meant to be this short.

Chapters (3)
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yoiu say shes dead but me thinks she will be back considering the title of this story

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Hmmm, you've peaked my interesting, my friend.

If Celestia have to become Daybreaker at leash your way is a good way.

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I feel that the only way Celestia can become Daybreaker is if Twilight were to die right in front of her. Something has to hit her hard, really hard. I believe Twilight's death is one of those triggers.

I look forward to seeing where this goes. :twilightsmile:

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There are Daybreaker stories out there that don't even explain how she turned into Daybreaker. And then there are the ones that do explain how she became Daybreaker, but the reasons to why she changed are very minor.

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I'm reading your Daybreaker story as well and I really love it.

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Really glad you are enjoying it thus far. Very stoked about there being a Daybreaker tag now, makers finding stories about her so much easier ^-^ i look forward to your next update.

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You won't believe how excited I am for your next update. Also the update to this story will happen sooner than you think. Wink wink nudge nudge.

Jesus.... Daybreaker just... Brutalized Chrysalis...

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I'm terrify of she's gonna do to everyone else....

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The next chapter is the final chapter, and it's not what you think. There will be a sequal if people want it.

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Once the final chapter comes out I will start on the sequal. In the mean time while your waiting for the sequal you can read my other stories like 'Celestia's twisted love' or 'The 5 confessions.'

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Ok I'll check them out later, promise.

I fine with that and also add reactions of how changeling queen learn to twilight come back to life

Damn your cliffhangers! I demend a sequel now!

P.S. But take your time tho :pinkiehappy:

Sequel please tho no twlight/daybreak (or luna) deaths please

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Well since a lot of people want a sequal to this story I guess i'll start on it soon. I already have an idea of how the sequal will play out too.

chryssie never learns

You need a lot of work.

this story easily could of been way longer

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I might do some changes here and there in the future or add another chapter that shows how Daybreaker has been ruling Equestria ever since Twilight died. I don't know yet

1 Find supernova candidate ( U Scorpii ) sounds good.
2 Dump bug into core with spell of protection on her.
3 Sit back and wait. We have lots of time.

Uh Chrysalis you might wanna start running like now.

Comment posted by robernd deleted Sep 27th, 2018

Not bad! It looks like it needs a little proofreading but otherwise this story is interesting.

You also wrote 'dinning' instead of 'dining' :twilightblush:.

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I had a feeling I spelled that wrong.:twilightsheepish:

*Reading*
*Twilight dies*
Well... That escalated quickly

This was a fun little read, if I had to give one criticism it's that the pacing could use work.
Keep up the good work

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Pacing has never been a strong suit. I also have ADHD, so I can't focus on it for very long and then it ends up looking rushed. I do my best with what I can do and what I got. I hope you understand.:fluttercry:

Story was decent, if a little short, but needs massive editing for spelling, grammar, and sentence structure.

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