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ThatRarityIsaSpy


Jan
27th
2014

First time doing one of these. Anyways. · 10:53pm Jan 27th, 2014

So a friend recommended me here, and I would like to ask for feedback on some of the fits I wrote, judging from various mixed comments, some were better than others.

I'd like to hear someone's two cents over how good of a writer I am overall, how good are the things I write and how I might be able to improve.

Heh, been a long time since I've asked for someone's opinion.

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FOR THE NEW LUNAR REPUBLIC
PURGE THE SOLAR HERETICS OF THE SOLAR EMPIRE

I really like your stories. They manage to bring the two universes together really well, without making it just straight Ponyhammer or to where the Space Marines are just endlessly surrounded by sunshine and rainbows all the time. It's really like two completely different worlds meeting each other.

I'm only on Back to Equestria Brothers, but I really like where it's going. I do look forward to reading the others too. Great job,

1064533 Of course you are derpy, of course you are.

1005093 well same goes for the Death Guard, to a degree, they where forced to die slowly from the viruses or choose to embrace Nurgles "gifts" so they wouldn't feel the pain....and not die(become immune to it i think); if my memory serves me right.
oh, almost forgot
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