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Seventh Heaven


"I'm gonna look up Sonic anal vore ... I bet there's some damn good Sonic anal vore" - Seventh Heaven, 2017


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This story is a sequel to A Very Chaotic Proposal


The time has come for Discord to face the inevitable. He is an immortal, and Twilight Sparkle isn't. But will he be able to deal with her passing?

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Nice way to end off the series.

Still kinda sad though...:raritycry:

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us, like you hinted on the podcast :pinkiesmile:

I am in tears right now. Not necessarily bawling, but then again, that rarely even happens with me; so hard is it for a fanfiction to really make me cry. What Discord did, my God, that got me so hard. Thank you for making this. This is definitely one of your best, because of how strong the emotions are. There is no description, really, not much narrative. A lot of it is dialogue, but that is all that is needed for this, because it's their voices alone that made this so powerful, like I said. This was amazing, truly amazing. :fluttercry:

SO MANY FEELS! :fluttercry:

2138911 Thanks! I actually kinda teared up writing the final scene in the afterlife. And listening to "Alive" by Pearl Jam while writing that scene certainly didn't help matters. I'm really happy you enjoyed it!

2138891 Glad you enjoyed the way the story of Twilight and Discord ended, but this isn't the end, per se. I'll still be writing a story detailing their lives with each other.

2138911 And did you notice that I ended in the same way as the other two Discolight stories?

With Discord addressing Celestia one last time.

2138998 Huh. That, I didn't notice. But after thinking about it, yeah, that's certainly a nice consistency. Especially since Celestia, in a way, is the reason Discord and Twilight even met (with her sending her to Ponyville and becoming an Element of Harmony and all) in the first place.

Holy shit. You almost suceeded in making me cry. That has only happened..... 6 times since I have been here.

You son of a wonderful woman.

beautiful just beautiful bravo bravo bravo

I understand Twilight outliving all of her pony friends but how did she outlive Spike? So (unless something killed him) shouldn't he have outlived Twilight by hundreds if not thousands of years? :unsuresweetie:

still it was a wonderful addition to the series :twilightsmile:

2139118 Meh, the way he dies is left up to the viewers themselves. So... go wild!

:fluttercry: all that is needed

a great story and not one downvote was given on this one, not a single one

2140041 Don't jinx it! I'm reading A Twixie Love Story, and I hope there's still 0 dislikes when I'm done!

I present this fic with all of my D'awwwwwwww. :applecry:

Yup. Feels. Damn. I'm honestly crying.
And about this story being your best one.... well, I haven't read all of your stories, but I'm certain that this would be at least number one! :twilightsmile:

Take all my sad emoticons, all of them : :raritycry::raritydespair::pinkiesad2::fluttercry::fluttershysad::applecry:

:raritycry::raritycry:
Heh heh Discolight :pinkiesmile::raritywink:
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in Ponyville

Here, take my tears.:fluttercry: That was bittersweet and the music I'm listening to didn't help me at all.

"Whither thou goest, I will go."

There is no greater love: not here, not there, not anywhere you can imagine.

Take all my feels. :fluttershysad:

2139125
Oh man! .... Why did you have to do that?
My imagination went wild and now all i can think of is ...

Spike died after getting sexed to death by Rarity. The unicorn had been keeping it in so long that not even dragon constitution could keep up with her insatiable needs. Call a doctor after 4 hours? Try 4 Weeks! Non Stop!
Hail Spike! He died a Hero! :moustache:


:trollestia:

2142047 So... "Mares Gone Wild"?

2142091
I had intended to have at least a couple of clean thoughts today ...:facehoof:

:trollestia:

Gonna read in a sec after I catch up on my other favs that I haven't read, but, knowing you, I've instantly liked and fav'd :ajsmug:

2142499 Let me know what you think!

2142617
The amount of feels I received from this fic...
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That picture is nothing compared to this fic...

2141572 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Damn you... If you could ever understand just what it is I feel right now after reading this...
It was beautiful, but very painful to read.

God damn, two stories in two days that made me cry...

Absolutely loved the ending. You're not that bad of a writer, either.

Read this as soon as I woke up.

My feels, they are over 9000...
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Everything about this chapter is spot-on and amazing, aside from the "the day Spike died" thing. Spike would have outlived Twilight and her friends a dozen times over, if not more. Him coming to terms with it would have been a very interesting thing to add on, or just a brief summary of it.

Seriously, that Spike thing completely broke my immersion and halted any feelings from bubbling up to the surface for the ending. Bad timing with that. :/

2359724 Look at the god damned author's note :facehoof:

Oh, and as for Spike dying before Twilight? Try to imagine how he died for yourself, because I know dragons live much longer than ponies. So I'm leaving his death up to you guys.

This chapter... freaking beautiful. I have no words for this.

Just one thing:

He promtply

*prompty :trollestia: Suck it!

2360940 AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

That was great.

2360953 God damnit, I need to go to sleep! :raritydespair: *signs off*

I think the cannon ending of this story is the best and probably the only one I can truly love. but thanks for the alt ending anyway.:twilightsmile:

how darest thou bring tears to mine eyes!!!:raritycry: really good story!

Now I need a comedy

So sad....:fluttercry: and yet so BRILLIANT :raritystarry:

SO. FUCKING. EPIC!

It said Spike was the last to go. Rarity was the last pony. My guess:

After Rarity died, Spike refused to eat. When Twilight tried to help, he refused and ran away. A search party was sent after him.

His tail was found in a Timber Wolf den.

Almost as sad as Eternity's End. I like this one better though.

I CRIED.

I DIDN'T EVEN CRY AT MY LITTLE DASHIE.

ALL OF MY FEELS.

IIII.......It's soo sad! :fluttercry::ajsleepy::applecry::raritycry::raritydespair:You are evil:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright: But a very good author!:twilightsmile::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::pinkiesmile::pinkiesad2::trollestia::twistnerd:

Tuck Everlasting?

I was crying at the end of this... :raritycry: :fluttercry:

You got me to tear up. That is hard for a story to do. This was so sad and I really enjoyed it.

Also, with Spike's death, I'm guessing he was doing something for his friends and fell off a cliff. And then a giant rock landed on him. Yeah...

THESE ARE UNAUTHORIZED FEELS!!
IT HURTS :applecry:

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