• Member Since 20th Feb, 2012
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friedlambo


Blow me.

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Upon eavesdropping on a conversation between Rarity and Twilight Sparkle, Spike discovers what his "true love" really thinks of him, and after reminiscing on his thoughts about it, he slowly begins to drift away from his friends. With sorrow and despair in his heart, Spike runs away from home, and runs into an old enemy that tries to help him out.

However, after realizing what she has done, Rarity begins to realize and discover that she has feelings for Spike after all, but can she save him before it's too late?

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 570 )

Looks good so far. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

First chapter looks intriguing and well written. I'll deffinitly be tracking this!

Oh shoot I see discord and tragedy I'm prepared to cry *pulls out tissues* :fluttercry:

I know you just posted this today, but MOAR MOAR MOAR! XD

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Want so badly. I love the dynamic between the two.

Tracked keep up good work. I hope this is a good one seems like it well good luck and expect more post from me :twilightsmile:

I cant wait to se where this story goes, I love Spike/Rarity couplings.

Great work so far! :pinkiehappy:

Hope it turns out fine :twilightsmile:

I really like this so far :ajsmug: though I know what's coming :ajsleepy:

Tracking!

Doesn't sound like what I normally read, but it has peaked my interest. Tracking.

I wonder who Spike is going to run into o.O and how they plan to "help" Spike.

Tracked.

Have a good one.

Really intrigued by the synopsis, really wish I could've seen more of where it was going.

But I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Tracked.

I make a habit of avoiding the Tragedy tag but there is something about this fic. Maybe its the potential that I see it could have and that there is a possibility for a happy ending after they fight through the tragedy. I shall track it and wait for updates. :moustache:

I kinda want to track and read, but that title.... Nothing good can come out of it.

This looks interesting. Tracked.
PREPARE YOUR MANLY TEARS, EVERYONE!!

I DEMAND MORE OF THIS! This is really good! It's well structured, and it most definitely is nice. I just want MOOOORRREEEEEE :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::heart:

i got a baaaaaaaaad feeling about the next chapter or tow:duck:

I for one welcome the melodrama, it's the best kind of drama! :moustache:

Me wants next chapets, me needs to see evil spike, me track this

The first chapter = Just another day of Spike's life.
The second chapter = Tragedy? Challenge accepted, manly tears prepared!

~Morning Dart

Sounds interesting, will read. Though you probably shouldn't announce that Rarity develops feeling in the description, cuz you can put in a lot of build-up for that in the text.
Kinda spoils a good part of the story like that :p

Also, dat title!

Very nice, and with a good tune of phrase. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

Tracked... though I hope future chapters of this are a little longer. This is a REALLY short chapter! but... hm. It's fairly well written, and you're definitely setting up the oncomin tragedy well so far. Let us see what shall be!

Well, with a synopsis like that and an intro like this, there's absolutely NOTHING that can go wrong! :pinkiehappy:

Tracking.

Looks pretty good so far. If I could pick one thing to improve, though, it would be the descriptive passages. This is a very minor complaint, so don't stress over it.
I'll be most intrigued as to what paths this story will take.

I am squrming in anticipation for the nuke to fall. This first chap really makes it all picturesque for when shit hits the fan.
Rarity's reveal is going to be 20% more painful since its after "Secret of my excess".

Dear Celestia, I need to find out what Rarity says about Spike. The tension is killing me. :raritydespair:

I WANT TO READ MORE! This is VERY interedting. I got hooked pretty fast. Good job!

First story I've tracked in the last week, good job sir

I'm am interested in reading more:moustache:,i want to find out what rarity is going to say that will drive spike away?oh well,i won't be able to find out until next time:applejackunsure:,can't wait untill then!:raritydespair:

Imma track this story now. (lé click)

I am going to track this, just like 90% of the commenters. Keep up the good work! This fic gets a BIG :yay:

THIS STORY SUCKS... UP ALL OF THE AWESOME IN THE WORLD!

This is so awesome so far! I hope you continue soon! :)

Sounds interesting, and I love the cover art.

what could possibly go wrong?

Really stong opening. I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds throughout the chapters!

This is what we WANT! Keep it up, bro!

Oh boy, this won't be good!

Well I definitely like the premise, I see you're going to start a bit slowly that's cool, I'll track it I have a good feeling about this one.

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