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Dreampaw


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If the Elements of Harmony truly failed the mane six on Discord's return, what kind of chaos would erupt? With the truth behind Discord's intentions, Twilight Sparkle isn't sure if she should help Discord or ignore him completely. And as for her friends... it's vital to keep your friends close, and your enemies closer...

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Very nice chapter!
Some mistakes here and there (not a lot but still there) but overall... very well done. :twilightsmile:

466362 Thanks, I'm getting it revised by my friend soon so it should be all fixed up soon! ^^

I am truly interested in this concept I will defenatly come back and read this whenever it is you will update

I loved it. The whole Discord background story enticed me. Discord has always been one of my favorite characters and is by far my favorite villain and I feel like you have done him some justice with this chapter. I will definitely be watching this for the rest of the chapters to come :twilightsmile:

Although the one thing that bothered me was the end of the flashback. Where Discord finally "realized" that he was the God of Chaos, I feel like he came upon that realization too quickly, like the realization should have taken a little more time than just "Oh, I am the god of discord, look at that!". That was my only con about this chapter, but otherwise you did an amazing job! Can't wait to see the rest :rainbowkiss:

468119 Yeah, I had planned for more dialogue from Celestia and maybe a few more days before I did it. It was kind of difficult to go about, But I'm definitely going to revise this chapter, at any rate. I'm so glad you liked it! :yay: Discord is my favourite, and I was afraid someone had already written this kind of story before :trollestia:

MORE, FOR THE LOVE OF DISCORD MORE!

Well I am sorry it took so long, but I finally got to read this. Boy am I glad I did. I am really impressed with your story and glad I was able to read it. :pinkiehappy:

Do I sense Discolight afoot? :pinkiehappy:

Is this dead? Because I'd love to see more.:fluttercry:

Then again, it's essentially a closed circle I guess. Unless you wanted to develop it into a redemption story.

I enjoyed this.

One thing did throw me off, though. "You don't love me? BOOM! Chaos Blast! Your Discord is evolving into... God of Chaos! Yay!"
That seemed a little quick, in my opinion. :pinkiesad2:

Nice chapter. A couple of mistakes but overall I really like it and can't wait to see more. It is definitely an interesting twist away from canon. Discord not knowing he is the god of chaos for a while is definitely an interesting twist.

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