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This story is a sequel to Rainbow Factory

Cloudsdale Weather Corporation has been running without incident for over twenty years. That is, until two foals manage to avoid being processed and find themselves in the haunted bowels of the massive facility. Can they make it out of the abandoned factory with their sanity intact? Will they uncover the secrets even a company as dark as the CWC is ashamed to keep? And what of the workers who help ensure that, in the end, not a single soul gets through...

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is-is this really here?

Hmmm... interesting... Will read later.

1755653 My thoughts exactly :rainbowderp:

sleep will most definitely be for the weak as this updates! unless it's supposed to be marked complete


Our Christmas gift came early this year, it seems.



we are all thinking the same thing! READ IT NOW! SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK!:rainbowlaugh:

There are some stories that work off clever writing and style.

Then there are some stories who will get more upvotes than views solely because of it's ridiculously awesome premise.

You want to know how far I take "Sleep is for the week".

Sleep last night - 3 hours.
Sleep night before that - 0.5 hours.

This is my average. Alot of nights I don't sleep in the slightest.

encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSekO1lr8K9mCzyJuUa3LXcbcH_rwqZB-Tlahepo-G1TkLjAhWj It's great that I met another insomniac; but seriously, there is a story to read and we are interfering with each other. Let's just go and read the dam thing:twilightsmile:

I already read it.

I liked it… RF just scarred me for life.


Looking forward to reading this. :rainbowdetermined2:

are my eyes tricking me :rainbowderp: OMG ITS HERE:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Interesting. Though I'd like some elaboration on the fear affecting spectra content.

Hmmm. Let's see, then.

Comment posted by MLP BRONY 27 deleted Dec 11th, 2012

I didn't get what everyone was talking about, then I checked the author's page...

Is this a sequel (Prequel? Spin-off? Re-imagining?) to Rainbow Factory :twilightoops:

For a highly secured facility, an air vent with a hoof openable latch seems pretty conspicuous... And device that doesn't kill? I think I smell plot device...

Anyways, whoa.

This was a glorious thing to wake up to, I can't read it right now but when I get back those words are going to be dissected by my eyes.

1756318 I'd love to film your reaction to 120 Days of Sodomy.

Also: Aurora Dawn isn't her story. Yes, she writes about ponies dying in gruesome ways. That, however, does not mean that she is insane.
That and the fact that she is allowed to do whatever the fuck she wants to.

I would suggest you to stop trying to fit people in "good" or "bad" groups. Lest you call a coroner a sadist for opening dead bodies on a daily basis.

Good god. Why is this not labelled GRIMDARK?!

I cannot believe this is even being written, regardless. It has revived an absurd horror and run with it.

1756324 Sequel. It's set 20 years after the Incident, and while it hasn't been directly stated, I'm like 95% certain that refers to the events of the original.

Yes.... Yes...... *Rubs hands*

Been waiting for this, finally arrived! :rainbowkiss:

I must read. Screw going to school.....

Aw yeah! Great start-off for the day. :twilightsmile:

And one of the milestones of the grimdark pony stories gets it's sequel. :pinkiesmile:

I not going to read it, because Cupcakes gave me nightmares for a month, but here, have a green thumb. I know that this is another piece of genius, so sorry if you, the author, feel offended if I am going to upvote it without reading.

This is the history of the fandom works happening, so it deserves our recognition. :twilightsmile:

That was amazing. I cannot wait for more. Perfect, just the like original.

Is this some kind of sequel to rainbow factory? Because this had better be gorier if it is. Wasn't enough of that in the first one. :pinkiecrazy:

It's finally here. Finally. I. Must. Read this. :pinkiecrazy: Rainbow Factory was my second fic from this fandom ever, and I loved it. I've been looking forward to this for a long time.

Finally I WUB you arouradawn!!!!

YES, it's here!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Welp, Aury, buddy. You know I can't read this, but best of success with it still. :twilightsmile:

Herp Derp, I'm on a fic with a subject that I hate and I'm whining over it


People are understandably going to dislike my story based on relation to Rainbow Factory alone. It's fine, let's not start any insults going back and forth.

You don't need to defend me, thanks =P

“Now, a rainbow’s tale isn’t quite as nice as the story you know of sugar and spice-”

“She knows about spectra, Gauge. Skip that.”


Being someone who really didn't like Rainbow Factory, I'm still surprised at how much I actually liked this story when I pre-read it. It's so much improved, and the characters are enjoyable to read -- Atmosphere is so much fun and Gentle is fascinating.

So, yeah. Good job, Aurora! I'm eager to see how this all plays out.

You know, boxes of crayons and family photos work just as well as actual foals. For a corporation, CWC certainly is inefficient! :trollestia:

Shit got serious a second time.

I really want Rainbow Dash to have hidden Scootaloo in the old factory...

Rainbow Factory is one of my favorite MLP stories so to see this here...yeah, it made my week. I look forward to the rest of the story you wonderfully talented writer you. :pinkiehappy:
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: out of 5!

*Listening to Awoken while on FIMfiction*
*Sees feature box*

An official sequel to one of my favorite grimdarks... AWESOME!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

A rainbow factory side-fic? OH HELL YES! Totally reading this after dinner later! :pinkiehappy:

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