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Lauren Has been having very strange dreams lately. Dreams of her being in Equestria and killing an evil clone of herself... but were they really just dreams? Or were they something more?

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Hello everypony,
In case you are wondering, yes this is the sequel to 'Journey to My Imagination' by DeiStar.

Credit for giving me permission to write this sequel: DeiStar.
Also, New Cover!

Chapters (11)
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YAaaay Sequel!!! :D *Cheers*

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES:twilightsmile:

It looks good, but since it was mostly a copy paste of the previous one it's hard to tell. For the next chapter, try and put more of your own stuff so we can get a proper idea of the potential of the story. But for now, I'm watching.

If this is the actual sequel to the story then I shall suspect great things. :pinkiehappy:

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Not much new content for now, I shall wait and see.

Send in craig! He has no knowledge of this, and his reaction would be priceless!:rainbowlaugh:

I do realize this first chapter has a lot copied and pasted, but that is mainly because it's pretty much a preview of what happened. The next chapter will be mostly original. :twilightsheepish:

I sense things of epic proportions will occur... :pinkiehappy:

The prequel had a lot of flaws, several redundancies, the flow, sequencing, and dynamics of the dialogue, the way the author described events, the portrayal of some characters seeming off, and the convenient turn of events throughout and at the end of the story. It turned out sub-par in spite of the potential of the premise.

You'll fix that here, right?:unsuresweetie:

I would like to know just who the hell is comfortable writing Faust in Equestria.

Apparently the answer is two people.

I'm not even comfortable with this thing existing, much less reading it, much less creating it or seeing it done and then deciding it needed to be done more.

And for god's sake clean up your synopsis. You have this really creepy idea and then you show me evidence that it's not even going to have spotless grammar...

I need to read the last couple chapters of Journey to My Imagination...

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Be thankful it's not clop.

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That's such a twisted fucking idea that I might have to write it specifically because it's uncomfortable and wtf-inducing.

Except I won't, because I'm not a terrible person.

Woohoo!!! When I read the title I instantly thought of Journey to My Imagination!
A sequel YAY!!! now to read... and thanks of course!

Welp, I'm back! So is this going to explain the reason why Season 3 is delayed? :rainbowlaugh:

Zahahaha! Wunderbar! I was waiting for something like this to happen!

WHATWHATWHATWHAAAT-WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?????

Reading this tonight.:pinkiegasp:

Seems good, faved :ajsmug:

Just a little question: Do I need to read the previous part to fully understand everything? :twilightsheepish:

keep this going :moustache:

You are aware Faust isn't working on MLP since Season 2? She sure isn't working on Season 3...

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Gosh, you sure do like to wrap people up in little boxes of judgement.

-Facepalms-

Should have known the memory removal spell wouldn't have worked. Even in the best case scenarios, they're only meant to be a quick patch for a problem, not a long term solution! Memories never really go, no matter how much we try to get rid of them.

1418901 Exactly. That's why I hate it as a plot device. It'll always come and bite you in the flank when you least suspect it. You end up like Jason Bourne.

Intriguing. The fact you continued an excellent fanfiction from the typical "NOEP, ADVENTURE'S OVER FOLKS" ending is pretty excellent as well!:pinkiehappy:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

WOHOO! Sequel to one of the best Lauren in equestria fics! Spacebattles will go crazy.

1418968 and Like Amnesia: The Dark Descent and Daniel *shivers* that ending...more creepy than the hissing cockaroches :twilightoops: oh... uhh :twilightblush: ANYWAY yes like that but dont worry Pinkiepie knows! :pinkiesmile:

1419406 Well, yeah, but still. You should see the comment thread I started under the story that inspired this. It got REALLY philosophical REALLY fast.

Cliffhanger!
HANGING FROM A CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFF!
And that's why they call him Cliffhanger!

can't... hold... on... much... LONGERRRR!!!

Pretty sure Tara and Lauren are on opposite sides of the continent

I'm starting to think this is going to get serious quick.

Who's gonna' be the antagonist of this story?:derpyderp1:

I'll wait for more chapters

The fun has been doubled

1418052 Engage whine/pout/cry sequence. Runtime: Until I get what I want.:rainbowwild:
Write your own ending. No seriously.:ajbemused:

Ah, the set-up has commenced. Curiosity peaked. Must ... know ... more. :raritystarry:

So what precisely are the odds that Tara will NOT be instantly taking a video of twilight sparkle with her iPhone or whatever to post on her Twitter feed the moment the two meet.

I'm more worried about what Twilight saw. Nothing like no information to get your paranoia going in high gear. :twilightoops:
And I seem to remember the "I am you" thing happening once before, and that didn't exactly go well...

Warning, incoming mind fucks!:pinkiecrazy:

1417875 OOhhhhhh, yesssss~.

HOLD ON A SECOND... WHY THE FUCK DOESN'T CRAIG HAVE A PONY-SONA?!

1419264 What the fuck does that have to do with anything?

1417729 Is this similar to a "glomp"?

This is good stuff. I'll be patiently waiting for... oh who am I kidding... MOAR!!!!:flutterrage: ... I'm sorry, i didn't mean to scream:fluttershyouch::fluttershysad:

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