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Princess Celestia sends Twilight to a human school to learn how to be more human in case another incident happened... but what Twilight finds is that Yokai Academy is nothing like the human world she went to before. Will Twilight be able to return to Equestria in one piece, or will she be overtaken by the monsters at Yokai Academy first?

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I recommend going onto Wikipedia for those of you who have never seen the Anime series Rosario+Vampire. It'll help give you a better understanding of the characters

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 87 )

i got a question are you going to able to make chapters for this and your another stories that are incomplete at the same time

No romance tag tells me that there won't be a Twilight and Tsukune pairing, dood. And in all honesty... the guy has Moka anyways so.... yeah, dood.

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I might add the romance tag. Right now I'm not sure

3665847 ok and out of all your stories on this account i like is the most is your story called Raising a Human Daughter please don't forget about that story or delete it

The second I saw vampire and Yokai academy, I had to read.

This story is great so far, keep up the good work

You know I hear they are maying a season 3

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Eh... I heard there MIGHT be a season 3 but I'm not putting my hopes up too high

3666090 They better make a season 3, or I'll flip shit.

wait did you base this of the manga or the anime because the manga is so much better and tsukune aono isn't useless like he is in the anime .

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ASking you this-
How can they make a season three when the Anime Season 2 was based off the original manga plans, and the manga was changed big time? It'd be a bit hard to do that right...

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Anime... I never read the manga yet

Usually I hate crossovers with a passion... but this one intrigues me quite a bit.

I've watched the anime and read the manga, and it's one of my favourites... Buck it, I'm giving this a try.

3666403 They can do what they so with other Animes- Change the story. Which they already did.

Nice start you got here.
I was wondering if any one was going to do some thing like this.

Fun fact::
funny thing is there are 2 different types of Pegasuses and 4 for unicorn and some of the unicorn types are considered monsters, because they eat men.

Good thing Twilight and Alicorn :trixieshiftright:

“Hi there.” A female voice said behind me. “You look lost, would you like some help?” I turned to the woman a little surprise and nodded. “Perfect, where is it that you’re headed?” I just held up a piece of paper to her and let her read it. “Ah Miss. Nekonome’s class! right this way please.” she began walking to the direction of the classroom. “So, new student eh? What’s your name?”

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This is written in first person, whereas everything else is third person. I recommend changing it.

Also, it's not that bad. There are a few things such as the names and characterization. For example, I think you should use "Aono Tsukune" instead of "Tsukune Aono." This takes place in Japan, after all, and you should stick to the customs there as much as possible. Though, I would suggest not using the "san" "kun" "chan" etc. It might just get a bit annoying for the reader.

First you had my curiosity, now you have my attention.
Please continue, and see if you can have my favorite.

Please, Please, Please tell me you're sourcing more from the manga than from the horrendous anime. PLEASE!!!!!

please write another chapter before my pants stain :applejackconfused:

3667218 OH SNHUNAP! i did not notice that, i just felt confused after reading it without knowing why.

This would be a great romance

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Well... It's good that some people notice, isn't it? :twilightsmile:

I had to re-read it before I figured out why I was confused :derpytongue2:

(Before reading)
With a name like Twilight Sparkle I'm not sure who's the pony and who's the vampire

3666871 Dude, Tsukune already has enough romance problems in the multitude of suitors that want him if 'suitors' would even be an appropriate term, please, please, please don't put Tsukune and Twilight together, just Twilight being there and helping out is enough of a change for this to potentially be a good fanfic, and that is the not so obvious reason, the obvious reason is that Tsukune actually knows and is attracted to Moka and Moka is attracted to him.

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Do you see a romance tag yet? No? Then don't worry. Like I said I probably won't do that

3670341 There's way more comedy potential if you don't, especially if the rivals refuse to believe it.

Also when are you going to post a new chapter of Turnabout Reunion?

3670395 Also imagine how they react when they find out she is a pony. Outer Moka would probably squee, Inner Moka would probably try to find out how strong she is and that is all I have right now.

:rainbowhuh: Oh this is just... just...
What? My two favorite things all in one?
This is unheard of, insane.
But okay,I can get used to this. :heart:

3670341 Whats this? A strictly platonic Relationship with a female character in a Harem series? :rainbowderp:
Is that even possible? :applejackconfused:

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You're doing a Rosario+Vampire crossover... without romance? :rainbowderp:

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How can you write a Rosario Vamp story that ISN'T romantic.. heck half of it is romance and ecchi with some supernatural comic humor in between

"Friends" huh... yeah that may be how Twilight sees it.. but Moka and the others of Tsukune's harem will instantly think "Competition"

This is going to be amazing! :pinkiehappy:

Brilliant, you kept with running gags in the anime :pinkiehappy:

3670341 Does Twilight have access to the Pony/Human hybrid form she got in Equestria Girls? There are halfway transformations in R+V.

You know, Twi being the sole sane member of Tsukune's circle of friends could lead the other girls to get some dang sense. At the very least she's not the love at first sight type of girl, and you could always slide in a mention of herds nad have the girls come to the obvious realization that all this direct competition isn't helping anybody. Really most harem anime are based upon nobody in area having any sense.

This is definitely my new favorite crossover. The only problem I have with it is the fact that you started using I instead of twilight at one point. Other than that, I look extremely forward to your future updates!

Mizore uses Icicle Spear
Twilight uses Telekinesis to throw said spears back, it's not very effective but with the velocity they are being returned at they might as well be.

This is awesome, I love Rosario+Vampire! :rainbowkiss:

Well.. Congratulations, Twilight has survived DAY ONE in Yokai Academy

More days to come for her

You have quite a bad case of OOC with Twilight and a lot of the other characters.

When you write something, try to read it in the voice of the character. If you can do that successfully, then it means that it is in character, at least somewhat. This, however, is not very much in character I'm afraid.

I just read the title of this story and thought, "you're fucking kidding me"
wtf
why

HA! I saw that ending coming. Tsukune is never going to catch a break.

As for romance...err...Are there any other interesting main male characters?:rainbowderp: I'm curious actually. (Might be interesting too.)

I kind of got thrown off the anime. It's funny, but I got tired of the antics....and also the little girl lusting after him. :ajbemused: Why does anime need a pedo angle. {Still interested to read a crossover fic.}

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Theres wolfboy he's in the club too

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