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William is a human that suddenly appears in equestria. He doesn't know what's going on, but somehow the ponies immediately recognize him by his name, and take him to meet the princess.
He didn't do anything yet, and everypony already knows his name, or that's what he thinks.
Situated in the middle of season five.
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If you are using the image of The Little Prince, many will presume that this somehow is a crossover of the well beloved story.
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I'm not, at all.
As I said the story is already planed, so the image will make sense later
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I see. As you were then.
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Are you ever going to write a The Little Prince crossover story?
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Maybe yes
Is a good idea
But that would ruin what I've planned for this one.
Be patient ;)
Young female equines are fillies, young males are colts
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Oh, I didn't know that.
Thanks.
Update quickly
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It's a statement, or a petition?
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If you update it today, it's a statement.
Otherwise, we will miss it forever.
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Well, if you were reading the story, now you understand why.
It was a surprise ;)
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Okay.
Will there be a second story of the legend returns, after you finish the prequel?
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Yes, I'll continue the story in a second season.
But after it, I planned a last sequel story called: 'The legend ends' that will take place in g5.
And if you ask, I had too much free time during the pandemic, as well as 2021. That's why planned all of this in my head, but never tried to show it before.
Until now :)
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Ok, sounds good.
Keep up the great work.
You think with him being a hero they would have learned a few things beyond the fact he saved the princesses.
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Like what?
The little prince was always a little weird but not as bad as some of the adults he met.
Boooo! Bad ending! He should have saved humanity instead of being a dirty species traitor.
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Well, that was exactly the plot. He was fighting with himself, trying to decide if saving humanity was worth the price of killing all ponies. Eventually, he reaches the conclusion that those ponies were still human at the inside, and decides to save them.
Also, 'saving' humanity will mean killing his friends, and that's not right anyways.
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He chose poorly.
So? You only count as a human if you are a human on the outside.
Killing off humanity is also not right, that's why I called him a dirty species traitor.
Should I read the sequel? Will he realize his mistake and try to save humanity in another way that doesn't kill ponies? Or will it be like those shitty TCB stories where ponies win, exterminate humans and everyone is okay with it?
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It is a prequel, so you'll probably understand it better.
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Meh, I'll pass then. No need to read a story if you know, no matter what happens in it, it's gonna have a bad ending with human genocide.
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As you wish :)
My Little Reviews & Feedback I did this review.
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Now that both this story and the prequel is complete, will you do that crossover?
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Since I finished the prequel, which is an achievement for me, it's time to make the last season of "A Legend Returns".
I just place the "complete" tag just in case I never actually make the second season.
I'm hoping the later chapters are better and I think I can put up with it, but you seriously need to work on your grammar. Nearly every paragraph has at least one grammar issue of some sort.
Other than that, I say it's pretty good so far.
The hard thing is Owlen is technically born from William's own emotions so that means at least a small part of him blames Celestia and Luna, even if it's not much. He is his demons
Owlen's character is basically Chysalis'
I feel like this would've been a good story to use in canon for bronies that wanted it more mature
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as he said, he didn't betray humanity, he simply helped them evolve
Is anyone else getting Midnight Sparkle vibes here?