This story is a sequel to First appearance
After five years of endless nightmares and regrets of leaving his home world. The human who renamed himself Dynol is now prepared for his revenge.
But does he wants this, a full conflict with their race or will he rise above them and forget it?
Only his new appearance will decided that.
Artwork created by Thresha8
If you are new to the story please now that the other chapters before Preparation were some of my early works and will be of great need of grammar correction. It'll be rewriting after the story is completed. Thank you and I know...
Chapters (25)
Just watching this: !yeeeeeeeeee-(KABOOM),-ríp elemental my friend-
This is pretty good. You might want to go back and do a little grammar and spelling editing. Also, it kind of seems a little too coincidental that the ponies would reminisce about dynol the exact moment he decides to attack.
5895903 speaking about same language
Who wants to bet that next chapter will be the equivalent of the Teutoburg Forest?
How they still remember him after 5 years? I mean, remember him enough to start casual conversation without him waltzing into town.
11/10 great story
More more MOARRRRRR
this is a great way to start the sequel. Keep it up and if I could I'd thumbs this up a few more times. Only a few grammatical errors in it so your off and running strong.
Dude you need to get someone to do grammar and spellchecking for you. Reading your stories is hard because of all the grammatical and spelling mistakes.
as long as he dose not actually become a monster i'm ok with this ^_^
Yes! Let the ponies suffer for their prejudicial arrogance, I bet celestia will be the only one who tries to talk to dynol, considering the town ponies are useless/stupid, the main 6 think they're in the right, and Luna for being the complete bitch that she is( no offense to Luna fans ).
Nice, specially since I've read Dynol's voice in Dracula's voice from the PS1 Castlevania Symphony of the Night. Faved.
Spellcheck and editor. The story can improve just by using those two little things.
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All of my yes
*is halfway thru the chapter* Hm....this looks like my prediction.
*gets to Author's Note* .................HOLY CRAP!!!
And unfortunately no I can't go forward in time. I just look at history a lot.
As for my next prediction...Dynol MIGHT not use Gestapo interrogation methods...emphasis on might.
5909195 Nah, he'll use NKVD or KGB interrogation methods.
5909512 They can go to hell.....even if they're superior.......HEIL DEUTSCHLAND!!!
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5909571 I am quarter German guys
*Awkward silence*
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I laughed so hard when read your comments
5909571 FOR MOTHER RUSSIA!!!!!
Even though I love German tanks. Oh ho, so gorgeous.
5909756 FOR THE FARTHERLAND!!!
5909777 VIVA LA FRANCE!!!!
I don't even know why we're doing this. Can't think of another one so I picked France.
5909777 Hell Yes!!!
Also I will be willing to bet that Celestia or Luna will be crying "Give me back my Ponies!". Why this sudden prediction, I just found Harry Turtledove's "Give me Back my Legions!"
5912635 STOP QUOTING ABOUT WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!
5913299 In the words of dominatusimperator when I asked him to reveal the hidden security devices in my home, "NEVER"
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5909949 FOR QUEEN AND COUNTRY!!!!
5913727 FOR THE EMPEROR!!!!
5914407 FOR THE GREATER GOOD!!!!
5916850 Es lebe die Menschlichkeit!!!
5917124 os ydych yn darllen hwn. Gadewch i stopio nawr!!!
5911609 I try my best. dear reader *Bowed respectfully*
5917144 人間は優れています！
5918007 ima!!!
Hasbro: BUY OUR TOYS!
Dynol: Never!
Hasbro: Then face the wrath of pretty ponies!
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5932309 LOL or it should be:
Hasbro: BUY OUR TOYS!
Dynol: Never!
Hasbro: Then face the wrath of pretty ponies!
Dynol:
Oh Celestia, you so silly.
I honestly thought celestia would b the reasonable one, but apparently she has her head rammed up her own ass like all the other ponies
Does Celestia even know what the Mane 6 or Luna did to him?
I like this story but it desperately needs a proofreader.
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http://www.wowhead.com/npc=10540/voljin
Also I forget if I posted this already for "First Appearance" but even if I did I find that this will be very fitting in the future.
5944531 It works both ways:
One for the ponies against Dynol
The another is Dynol himself against Luna and the six
Which makes this song great to sing about
But I think this song work even well:
You earned this like dude, really! amazing story, can't wait how the ponies go down.
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Great chapter, can't wait for more.
TWILIGHT WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you high or some shit like what?!?!
Oh my God, they're more retarded than I thought. All except for Fluttershy, at least she has some sense of logic.
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Well they... I mean he.... Oh $^%& it! Way ago Twi£$^%!
5991402 I'm starting to think that the wings made her dumber