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Lyra has always belived in humans, but everypony in ponyville thinks than she is crazy for beliving on stories for colts.
Parallel to her, Sophia is an 9 years old girl that always belived on unicorns but her father just thinks than she is just unmature, and she will eventualy grow up.
However; everything changes the day that...
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Bon-bon left Lyra in her room for her to prepare herself for the day, which she did, but sadly.
Your story details are a lot better that anything I could write, but your punctuation and grammar is bad. My punctuation and grammar is good, but my story making skills are bad. Maybe I can proofread for you?
Sorry for it, my bad.
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Sorry.
Phone's screen
Sorry for the comment spam. It's just the constant pronoun changes are confusing me. ;-;
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Oh, okay! I understand.
Also, I'm really enjoying this so far :D
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Don't worry, I appreciate the help.
Why would they think that's unusual? She is nine, after all.
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Sorry if I appeared as rude. I was just suggesting that I help you proofread.
I hope so too, i always love a good Story of lyra!
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Alright!
Story is cute and has potential, but you need an editor.
I did for sure! The punctuation could need some improvement though. No offense.
But lovely!
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Thanks
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Youre welcome, eager to see how it goes
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Sorry mixed ideas, correcting it right now
You got me a good laugh
You used the wrong to. It should be too (as in "too much") rather than to. (as in "going to the store")
I'm not sure about what I'm about to type, but I think we can eat the flowers themselves, as long as their not straight-up poisonous, like nightshades and Apiaceae. Flowers don't contain as much cellulose as the leaves, so they should be digestible.
Edit: I thought of an example. A common yellow flower in North America and Asia, the dandelion, is edible and nutritious for humans, and it's poison free!
nice done!
Cute story......but you really need an editor.
Wow, this story is set 2000 years in the future? Also, it's relic, not relique.
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Thanks for 'relic'.
And yes it is in the future :)
But as I said in the story, technology is practically the same as ours.
Wow, this chapter is good. Is this actually a 2,000-year-old stagnation of technology?
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Yes it is.
Only minor advancements like more fast computers, and that kind of stuff.
lovely!
Sounds like her dad's job is rubbing off on her
Short but good
very nice but oddly, i saw it only in my feed but no update in the libary
Ya know, Art had it right, 'Kids DO say the darnest things' !!!
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I didn't get an update in my tracking list either.
Very nice! But don't you mean best instead of vest?
Heh, funny, i used a similar idea once
As for military, could you imagine other bronies?
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My finger should have slipped
Anyways, thank you, and what do you mean by other bronies?
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Youre welcome! Well, is equestria here completly unknown or do bronies exist here?
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Nope, in this world, equestria is a very old and unknown legend.
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Okay. Thought like at the news of military Intention, that there could be humans to equestria's defense
Is lyra genderfruid?
Dept driven capitalist society
This future feels like it's made from WEF's wet dream.
What kind of chaotic insanity is that?
Nice work! Hmm, do you need a soldier who tried t reason with the ambassador or something like that? Or a human who reasons with Sophia/ encourages her?
I guess that's one way to give someone confidence. If that wasn't a lie, than the future would have changed due to her seeing that, especially now that she has told someone about it, meaning that Sophia giving a good speech still isn't certain.
Any chance this will continue?