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Deyeaz


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You'd think that bronies would end up in their humans forms or as ponies in Equestria. Hell, maybe they even get a little lucky and come out as something different, like a Diamond Dog, a griffin, or a dragon, like what I read in all the other tales of bronies across the world.

Pfft. What a load of crap.

I am Adam... at least, that's what I used to be called. You can refer to me as Praxis, a 17-year-old brony... and this is my tale. One of friendship and happiness, of abhorrence and neglect, as I try to gain the trust of those around me, and the few friends I had gained in Equestria helping me to get by.

This is my tale... as a demon in Ponyville's eyes.

My tale... as a satyr.


Told in 3rd-person omniscient. (The character is basically me.)

*"Others" tab: because FIMfiction won't let me add more than five characters - all of my rage - I've decided to use this tab to help make selections easier. Included in the story are:
1) Princesses.
2) A smidgen of Blueblood.
3) Some Doctor Whooves
4) Zecora and Carrot Top
5) Mane Six and Spike
6) CMC

I'm planning on collaborating with CraimerX's story, "What If: My Second Life", later on in this story. This is my first collab, but my third fan fiction in a row. This whole "Satyr in Equestria" idea was one that I had in my head for a long time, and it came because of all the references to Greek Mythology: the Minotaurs like Iron Will, the griffins, a Sun and a Moon Goddess like Celestia and Luna, and the Pegasi. You guys are what inspire me to either become a laughingstock and someone great in the eyes of you, the masses. Please enjoy this tale, and give me your honest opinion about it.

~S.W.

Chapters (31)
Comments ( 309 )

This has potential...
Looking forward for new chapter

Oh god whenever i think about me going to equestria i think of me as one of those

A satyr, hmm, good premise, lots of possibility, I'll track and see where it goes.

Yay another human turned something other than pony story!

so far it looks good, I hope I will be pleased by what's to come:twilightsmile:

Hmm, very nice but..."The five mares were stomping their forelegs on the ground, the Equestrian way of applause." You said this twice.

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Sorry about that. I copied and pasted when I should have cut and pasted.

"Well, heheh... you're not a pony, that's all I'VE gotta say," Carrot Top finally replied after her fit of laughter ceased.
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This story, I cant believe im saying this but, This story is better than My Second Life.:derpyderp2:
I DEMAND MOAR:flutterrage:

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Not sure if opinion... or blasphemy. Either way, you'll get moar, my friend.

you forgot to mention that satyrs are a symbol for lust and fertility :moustache:

also regarding your last chapter static.djbooth.net/pics-artist/bonethugs.jpg
FINALLY another brony who likes bone thug n harmony... Or was that just some clever joke because elements of harmony and bone thug n harmony if so...cdn.overclock.net/5/54/54afbf53_1617295_i_see_what_you_did_there_holysmurf_super_RE_Sharenator_Community_UNITE-s444x475-150637-580.jpeg

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BAHAHAA. You are right: satyrs are masters of lust and sexual urges, but I'll throw that in.

But no, the character (or me) really does like Bone Thugs-n-Harmony.:pinkiehappy:

Ah, a fellow satyr enthusiast!:twilightsmile:
My first OC was a satyr, though he was a burly old chap.

Wow...Rainbow Dash you done messed up.

Also, why the earrings and tattoos? Does he want to look scary to the ponies that he is trying to win favor with?

Good chapter all in all.

This... Is... AMAZING !

I'm speechless. One thing to say : BRAVO.

I kinda fear that this is falling into what I think common tracks for many HiE, like Praxis being super agile/strong and being able to kill a manticore with ease and so on.
Can't really describe what i'm thinking at the moment so I hope you understand that you shouldn't let this become too chliché, since the general idea is new for me and I'd like to see you make a good story out of it.

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The character wanted the fangs as a nice little memento, to show that he had almost lost his life.

As for the tats... Zecora is one persuasive zebra. Besides, I'm pretty sure Praxis wanted to appear like a badass in the eyes of the others.

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While I do see where you're going with this comment, please note that Praxis had to try and tire out the manticore, which wasn't an easy feat. Defeating it took a bit of cleverness and strategy: since he didn't have any weapons, the only thing he could use to kill the monster was the monster itself.

And have you EVER had an adrenaline rush while diagnosed with ADHD? It's kinda like replacing the water in your coffee pot with Red Bull. That's how he became pretty fast and agile. The strength was something he's been working on for a couple of years of hard work and parkour training.

wut

What is this

what

seriously

How does this even

I don't

:derpyderp1:

If anyone is thinking Praxis is OP, remember that Satyrs are BUCKING FAST. Ever hear of 'Bitey of Brackenwood'? No? Go look it up.

I've got to say, you had me with this story until this chapter. Something about it, beyond what I'm going to point out, feels off in comparison to the rest.

The pacing: the story went from fairly slow (for a fanfiction) and good pace to something that just seemed to jump forward very quickly and with very little description beyond basic story telling.

Praxis: very illogical, and not acting like he has in the previous chapters, in my opinion at least. He seemed to be shifting very wildly in a direction that I can only really describe as bad. Another major issue is that he seems to just have a complete grasp of his new body within barely 24 hours, something that to me just doesn't click. Especially the pipes, even though satyrs are gifted with the ability to play them, he would still be limited to those capabilities that he already had mentally, before he became a satyr.

Rainbow Dash: yes she is cocky, yes she is over protective of her friends, and yes she can be rude and be slow to admit her mistakes, but she would not be that insulting or rude, especially after she had been set straight by Fluttershy, even more so after many of the lessons that she has learned with the other Mane 6.

And the biggest issue I have? That explosion at the ending. It was unwarranted and unnecessary, not to mention strangely out of place considering the extremely minimal relations with ponies that Praxis has had up to this point. If he had spent more time working on trying to speak to other ponies than the ones that had seen him upon his entry to Equestria, then I could see it as more rational and a good place to put it, but as it stands? It doesn't feel right there at all.

Those are just my thoughts on the matters, thought I would let you know.

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That explosion at the ending. It was unwarranted and unnecessary, not to mention strangely out of place considering the extremely minimal relations with ponies

First thing that came to my head when he said "YOU'VE BEEN MAKING THIS NEW LIFE OF MINE A LIVING HELL SINCE DAY ONE!" was, "Isn't it still day one?"

Getting emotion right, and even doing it with fluttershy... wow! :derpyderp2:
I must say this is now one of my favourite chapters now :pinkiehappy:

*applauds*
Yeah!
That's how it's done!
Great chapter, good sir:moustache:
I would give you another thumb up if I could.

oh no its sheogorath what ever shall we do :pinkiesmile:

Kind of underwhelming as far as nightmare visions go. It's kinda hard to drive someone ax-crazy within five minutes.

Oh Jesus. TWILIGHT WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU D:

443096 What we should do is arm ourselves with fish, lots and lots of fish, and CHEESE!

Cliffhangers...
DAMN YOU WHY CAN'T YOU CONTINUE?!:flutterrage:
That was good.:scootangel:

Edit: First:pinkiecrazy:

Asshole guards! YOU ASSHOLE GUARDS. ASSHOLE GUARRRRRRRRDS :flutterrage:

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You don't know how hard I was laughing at this picture. :rainbowlaugh:

And yes those guards are utter dickheads :twilightangry2:

Kinda Princess Celestia's fault for being a bit vague. She did say to bring him in, after all. She should have been more specific and added "Peacefully, if possible."

454740 the guards are utter rackets. They regard anything they haven't seen before a threat. Dumb.

REALLY DUMB

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The guard that stomped him will probably be fired.

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Well, since Celestia is merciful, the guard will probably only get a scolding or something. But yeah, the dude deserves to get fired.

:facehoof: Urg...really? Why would you have an entire page devoted to some dude screwing around with a computer and multiple ponies just gushing about it? Not only is it a fandom cliche, it isn't even a very good one.

Other than that, this chapter was okay, but...urg.

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D... do you want me to change it?:fluttercry:

Well now i'm looking forward to see how he gets out of that mess.
So just carry on with whatever you must do to get the next chapter out!

And now praxis will get the living shit beat out of him until he can explain that it was all insanity :trixieshiftleft:

Eeeh....... He was OP enough in the last chapter...... what it feels like it's heading to is

Hello, my name is Gary Stuart, you may call me Praxis,

if you know what I mean.

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...What you did there: I saw it.

But at least I've got the character's OP-ness under control: meaning he'll only access it when he's REALLY furious. Like, "I'm going to dismember and disembowel you with my own two hands" furious.

There is a typo on that flyer, I hope that it's pointed out in-story and not just corrected by the author.

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