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When a human, is mysteriously sucked into Equestria following his tragic death, he discovers a world of beauty, happiness, and magic. Transformed into a mare, and exposed to this new world that she was no connection to, she begins to learn what friendship is. But the ponies begin to reject her once strange things begin to happen in Equestria, and she embarks on a magical journey with her new friends to put an end to the evils that are penetrating the once peaceful world.

I would really appreciate feedback, support, and some thumbs! Thank you!

Photo credits to Hombre0, his DeviantArt page here.

Edited by Wivoatt, one of the most thorough editors ever! I greatly appreciate her help, here's her DeviantArt.

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Comments ( 234 )

Sounds interesting. Track

Before I begin reading: This is about a male human turned into a female pony? You said he died, but that she begins forming connections. I just want to start this with an open mind if this is the case. It could be a decent premise. A male turned female of a different species. It's two culture shocks in one.

I don't care if this prologue didn't have any ponies, well maybe a hint of one, BUT IT WAS AMAZING! Please, keep on writing! :twilightsmile:


from what I read so far, it is as you say, but it's not the only story like this. There's also "From man to mare" by Silverdragon which is pretty much the same basis of a human male turned into a female pony........ except for the main character's personality....

Leafwing is such a hipster, becoming friends with the Mane 6 is too mainstream.

this is beautiful and sad.
i am crying irl

You deserve a mustache Spike: :moustache:

Shouldn't this have the human tag on it?

Really good story so far.
For the 7 circles of heck, there are circles for people with tough lives in heaven.
Equestria is the circle for being friendless.

339638 it's not human.
They're ponies, see?

339808 But it involves a human turning into a pony.

339638 Technically, it's not a hardcore HiE, as the main character is ponified. Kinda like my story Diamond Heart.

But I digress. Tracking, and waiting for more, as this is getting me interested....

I wish I could sense others feelings.this story is going places and im going to follow it to the end.

339592 :twistnerd: mane 6? more like Mane stream 6.

but I like where this is going ^^ tracked for more lolz

Wow! I'm glad people truly enjoy this story! The feedback has been tremendous, and helpful!
To clear some controversy up, the man to mare subject has always been a little touchy, but the decision was based on two premises:
1. The fact that most ponies in Equestria happen to be girls and
2. The fact that this boy was, in essence, shy and timid to start out as, and the personality hasn't changed.

Also, there's the premise that I felt like writing it. :trollestia:

I'm definitely going to put out more parts as the week progresses, thanks a ton!

339587 That sounds like an interesting tail (hehe feelin punny today), I might check it out!

Oooo very interesting I love it I hope there's more to this XD.

YES A PONY-HUMAN STORY!!!!!1 I have been looking everywhere for one. *crys tears of joy* I must READ!

i like this story so far. have a few staches.
:moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

seems interesting. i'll see where it goes.
:moustache: :moustache:

There's two prints on the knife though Blades and his. Though with his life and Blades attitude I'd be 50/50 on which side to believe

360925 While that is true, given the fact that Blades, as well as his two friends were the only witnesses, added to the fact that Blades has a father capable of commissioning entire apartment projects, you can assume that they could easily avoid prosecution assuming no prolonged investigation, which would only be instigated by someone who cares about the character, which doesn't seem to be the case, as his own parents don't even.

But nice catch! A stache to you for insight.:moustache:

Yay my first stache I shall frame it on the wall |:moustache:| there perfect

Another gb fic that finally focuses on the characters reacting to their new environments and predicaments. Thank you sir/madam:pinkiehappy:

Loving every single sentence of this.:pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiehappy:

I LOVE these types of stories. Just people turning into something else and adjusting to their new life, it leads to so many possibilities (especially if gb is involved, No I don't mean like that!) I wish there were more stories like this.:pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiehappy::heart:

368812 Wow! I'm glad that you're interested, I'll have a new part up really soon, just need to get the part passed by my faithful editor, Twilight, er, Wivoatt. :twilightsheepish:

Just realized I didn't comment on every chapter, so here I am again!:pinkiehappy:

This is a great way to start this amazing story, and really, I think it should be mandatory.:twilightsmile:

Why are these stories in such short supply, I wonder? :unsuresweetie:

377715 Because much of the time, the community doesn't want to embarrass itself by writing something like a tg story.

But there's probably many factors involved.

378422 True, but at least the ones that are being made are really good.:twilightsmile:

378911 I only flatter those who deserve it:twilightsmile:

378914 :twilightsheepish: Gee... thanks, I guess... don't know what to say... (^.^;)7

379119 Oh, this? (^.^;) it's an emotion, like this (>_<) or this (._.)

356782 Thanks for the staches. Here you go. Have some yourself :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:


You sir, win +50 respect points from me. :moustache:

387542 Why thank you fellow viewer, a stache to you as well:moustache:

388675 You both get free internets for having a conversation on my beloved story. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

389092 Happy to oblige. Hope you got my note:twilightsmile:

Glad you liked it, that was the purpose you see
And for that reply you get a heart times three


389127 I love your rhythm, it's really quite fine.
for that, you get a stache times nine. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

389138 never did understand how the staches became so popular, but I happily accept:pinkiehappy:

389161 But hearts are popular as well, so those I kept :heart::heart::heart:

389167 :rainbowderp:I see what your doing, and I approve:twilightsmile:

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