(Pic from Samaru163)
Part 1:From man to mare
Part 2:From man to mare: chaotic convergence
Part 3:From man to mare: an aching heart
Part 4:From man to mare: I love my mommy
Derry has gone through quite alot. He was turned into his doll, turned insane by Discord, manipulated by his Giga Sparkle into bearing a child, and having to deal with the pure essence of going through the birth process...and not getting any sleep for three months after. However, he has always doubted the authenticity of his Giga Sparkle's source of insanity. There's something suspicious about an "astral alignment" that just doesn't click in his mind.
As he thinks of this once more, he stands in front of his mirror. His reflection looks back, and this is where the most dangerous of his opponents will appear; himself.
Extra tags: Sad (because I'm very capable of mixing sad and comedy)
wow...
Kill yourself, Derry.
FINALLY
2147935 Oh, that was actually the purpose of the beginning. He was in a dream, so build-up isn't that important in one's mind. I know it's important in a story, but I like my coffee like I like my stories , doing a back-flip.
well.... it's going to be just peachy won't it?
im really looking forward to a record breaking psyco-comment-count.
and the story.
Lets see where your psyche lies, will you fail or earn your prize?
Again and again you withhold the truth, from those whom you love? How very uncouth.
The time has come to release these lies or else you will face your own demise!
Ticks 'n tocks 'n chimes, come one week you'll be out of time~.
Hmhmhmhmhmhmhm.
2165337 Ooo! Another rhymer.
2230914 tsunderetsun? He/she hates him, but loves him enough to marry and bear his children, but still hates him because of his natural gender as a human? I don't know
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I don't think they have been formally married actually.
the only wedding mentioned was the changeling invasion and his/her dream.
2233455 Yeah... time to start from the beginning again
2233998 Denial is a nasty thing.
2234673 Also, what happened to the reply icones?
2231591>>2230914>>2233455
Spoilers below if you haven't read the previous several stories.
Several factors cause this. Lets see..
First, Cyclone was unusually violent towards Derry initially, I believe due to another entities influence (cant recall which)
Derry was male, and is now female. He/she was not ok with that, and still isn't.
Then there was the part where Rarity kept trying to ship them.
I believe the Giga-sparkle entity steped in later, since Derry was still resisting, took control of both of them, and made them have sex, so Derry got pregnent. Neither of them wanted that.
Its also pretty trivial for someone to blame the incorrect person for something, at least uncontinously. And He/she has plenty of reason for that.
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Yea.. I probably also should have mentioned that I don't necessarily agree with this, but just gave reasons that seemed able to explain it.
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so as of what they have said silver and cyclon are not officially married, only living together.
I read all the other parts of the story. i know all that. i simply stated the only weddings in this story were, the canterlot royal wedding, and that's nothing more then a mention. and then silver's dream of marrying cyclon.
on the first chapter of this story, I was thinking that.... how weirded out will everypony be when Derry reveals who he truly is.... but now I remembered.... this is a the Psycopath story...... there's no way logic and conventional story-telling methods be used..... aka Im not even expecting the dreadful plot armor any more
there are so many ways this story can go..... and I actually have a very strong theory going but oh well, saying it would result in you changing it if it really were the case.....
and in other notes.... you go on bronies.memebase dont ya
2237898 Plot armor?
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Plot armor is a device used by most storytellers where their VERY IMPORTANT characters (not only the Main ones) as well as the main ones sometimes are actually immune to death or in best case scenario, they're unkillable until the very end. This kills all suspense from a life or death situation if the media where a main character is about to be killed in still has a few "chapters/episodes" after this one
2239717 I'm well aware of the meaning. Gundam wing taught me that. I just wanted to post an image related to it.
I can't believe I didn't see this until now
Come on let's see him beat up Cyclone more
I love Cyclone abuse.
hey new chapter!! are you taking longer to think them up nowadays or was it just a temporary block?
and I feel like this dark shadow WANTS Silver to die... as I think he/she might have spilled some beans right then and there if it wasn't for the pain.
Also.... that particular line.... omen?
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Because I don't think there's a version that has Derry doing this.
good good go on do and some Cyclone abuse. Because everyone loves Cyclone abuse
2319720 It isn't author's block. It's due to a second story I'm also writing, and important things with school...and now I have a stomach flu.
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kk
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most of the time stomach flues don't bug me that bad.... a cold however will knock my block off.
2338025Eh. For me, the symptoms of any disease only last the day I contracted it, then I only have to be careful of the side effects (not eating anything, don't force too much. I adapt quite quickly to things.
2165644Dark sounds will fall upon
And fill the hearts of dark
and don
a guise of wary, and mark
galore,
The devil and his matador.
how's that psychopath?
awwwwww but I'm draconian.....
2339276 goddamn lucky ..... psycho....more pain.... I can feelz ze TEMPEST!!!! MOARRRRRRR
These stories were definitely an interesting group to read. Very comical as well. Might just have to favorite this for when you get back to writing this.
2735583 Oh, I most certainly will. It just seems I came to a blockade when writing it. Now that I no longer have any exams to study, everything should eventually return to normal.
2761925 WHO ARE YOU?!
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The Treasure Hunter who's read all of your "From man to mare" stories
oh it updated, cool...
*Reads chapter*
Oh that psychopath.
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Am I missing something here?
2762008 A room with a moose?
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What?
Sweet!
OH MY CELESTIA! This updated!! I thought you were DEAD!!
loved this chapter really liking where this is going
2762511 Nope. Just working to get my Computer science diploma. Speaking of, I MADE BLOG FOR VOTING! Y U NO PAY 'TTENTION?!
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because I haven't been on FimFiction for about a year... and I just got back about 2 weeks ago
(haven't been on so much that I got 242 chapters of started stories to read then 70 "To Read Later" stories)
I calculate enough reading for the next 5 months....
so now it has a name
2767616 I posted the blog two days ago.
2768319 I apreciate the criticism. THe constructive critiscism. I have no excuses, but I haven't really written in awhile. Although, by your opinion, it's better written than the previous chapter, no?