Sly Cooper: A cunning, devious, Thievius Raccoonus. However, that all changes when a thieving operation with his pals Bentley and Murray goes horribly wrong, thus causing Sly to suffer the perils of death. Sly, however, is given a second chance at life, yet as something else. He then reemerges in a new world to find himself plummeting towards a barn in Equestria, but with alterations to his body: His furry raccoon self gets morphed into that of a pony, yet his ringed tail and his family cane still remain with him. No matter how slick Sly can be, he isn't all that able to escape a certain orange cowpony wanting to check out what that crash was about....
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Another attempt at a fan fiction. Hopefully, you guys can tell me what's wrong with this story via comments.
Once again, you guys are pretty awesome for wanting to read this.
Signed, ~S.W
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*I own absolutely nothing from Sucker Punch, Sony, and Hasbro. The contents of this Fan fiction is theirs and theirs alone.*
*I also give credit to the creator of the coverart, THEPENMAN.*
First
Anyway, looks good so far.
FffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
You have no idea how long I had this fic in my head. Still, none the less, good luck with it. Gotta read it when I get the chance.
The only thing that bothers me is... well, there are plenty of connections that you could use between the Sly Cooper Universe and the MLP universe (For Example: Doctor Whooves, and Bently's Time Machine) to transport them there. Instead, you used the cliche "You Die- You Go To Equestria" Theme. I dunno, that's my opinion. Do the story right though, and... DIS IS GUNNA B GUD!
Oh.
Mah.
GAWRSH.
Sly Cooper was Assassin's Creed for kids. I played these games until they broke. (Then I bought them again.)
Five moustaches for you, sire. Also, Mario Sunshine sucked. Legend of Zelda was awesome.
Hmmm. Any critiques?
Nope. Can't think of any.
You said 'to the left' twice, instead of ' in the middle.' Even so, nice job referencing Mario and Legend of Zelda in one paragraph.
Faved, thumbs uped, and tracked.
I will read this just because I'm a sucker for the Sly games......
YES
YEEEEEEEEEEEEES.
FAVORITE.
DUDE
THIS BETTER BE EQUESTRIA DAILY
SO.... MUCH... WIN!!!!!!!!
Awesome story tracking this
My favorite childhood game and ponies? Be careful, should you deviate from the games only a subtle amount I shall rage. Will read when I have the time and maybe even track if I like it. Be very careful however, you are treading on dangerous territory. Sly better have all his moves. I'll be keeping track.
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i know.GYY6HYUPO9I6YTUIY6T5
thats me banging my head on the keyboard on how awesome it is.
ITS SO MUCH FIUPALJBDFNKLJASDBFNAKDJLSBFKAHJSDVBFASHKLJBVFJSAKHLHB
Read it. I shall track it :)
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IT HAPPENED!
Sir, you just made my day. Bringing back my childhood, tracking!
Nappa: Vegeta! What does the scanner say about the author's awesome level?
Vegeta: It's over NINE THOUUUSAAAAAND!
Oh, me and my boasting.
I don't know... I still would've chosen Link's storyline... But that's just me.
BUT!
If I had a choice between Mario, Link, and Ponies... I choose Ponies...
By the way... The only 'main' character of this story would be Sly, and maybe Applejack. You can't have a successful story with 8 different perspectives...
And dat Prologue...
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I know. However, I'm going to make sure I get the aforemention characters into the story.
371373 No no, you misunderstand me, the character list is ONLY for MAIN CHARACTERS, not every single character in the story.
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*Poker Face*
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Precisely what I was aiming for.
371413 Also, wouldn't Death have Sly's name under C?
Considering that his family is Cooper?
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Death has decided to sort his list of souls via first name. Don't ask: Death just rolls like that.
I saw this, and the only thing I could think was "WIN" I'll have to read it tomarrow then, its late
371453 But that is silly! Death is not Silly!
All of Sly's family have Cooper as their last name! Add effect by making death list some of his relatives, the last one before him being his dad. Add effect, Effect, EFFECT!
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Ahhh! OK, OK, OK!
Fantastic story can't wait for the next chapter
Hmm...possibilities...
thanks for the wall of nostalgia that just fell on top of me. now when i find my way out of the rubble, not only am i gonna have to take a break from loz: skyward sword but im also gonna need to hook up the ps2 and find my goddamn sly games.
sigh... here take a moustache of approval.
Read it sooner than tomarrow, looks awesome xD
MLPxSC FTELW!
371494 Ahahah! so we meet again! On an awesome story containing my favorite childhood game! HAHA!
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I'm glad to see that You appreciate the story, Sorren. I really liked that Fan Fic about Nico Bellic. I found it both hilarious and true.
372601 I did not think you had seen it. And yes. Sly was my favorite video game charecter when i was a kid.
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You'd be surprised: I find it rather comical that Nico gives Rainbow whiskey, while she's under the impression that it's just some hard apple juice.
SWEET
I FIND THIS FIC.
BEAST MODE.
Literary abomination. HA!
I can translate those words to french.
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{Oof.... Never again, man,}
{Oof .... Jamais encore une fois, l'homme,}
{Please don't find me, please don't find me,}
{S'il vous plaît ne pas me trouver, s'il vous plaît ne me trouverez,}
{Hey! Let me go! Agh!}
{Hey! Lâchez-moi! Agh!}
{Argh! Stop it!}
{Argh! Arrête!}
{I don't... even know... what you're saying, woman!}
Je ne sais pas ... savent même pas ... ce que vous dites, la femme!}
{Just........ stop......... talking....}
{Juste ........ arrêter ......... parler ....}
{Ow.... that really hurt. So much for a new start in a new world.}
{Ow .... qui a vraiment fait mal. Voilà pour un nouveau départ dans un nouveau monde.}
{HOLY SH- Ow!}
{SAINT sh-ow!}
{What are you saying?!?!}
{Que dites-vous?!?!}
{No, no, no, no, no!}
{Non, non, non, non, non!}
{Look, lady,}
{Voyez, dame,}
{I need to find my cane. I have no time for th-}
{J'ai besoin de trouver ma canne. Je n'ai pas de temps pour e-}
Done, thats most of them, some of them are just english.
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Holy crap, that is impressive.
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I had help from my brother.
Your welcome. :D
This story seemed to have a lot of potential...but this chapter really seems to have turned down-hill with the sudden 'friends with everyone cool with the whole other dimension and thief also Twilight likes him' thing. It's a bit much.
the romance has qued, WAAAYYYYY to early, but meh
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Dude, it's the land of Equestria. Friends are sometimes more inportant than breathing. As for Twilight liking Sly, I threw that in not only to just troll some people into oblivion, but because the only time she likes someone is either when she's in heat or whenthat pony she likes is already taken by somepony else.
It's called destroying shit. Either that, or letting her get a shot at love. Whichever works.
I liked it, but I think sly would have acted smoother with twilight xD and maybe have some secondary thoughts about it because of his "relationship" with carmilita. Also, are you PUMPED FOR SLY 4?
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while it's not really considered a relation when you're with someone who's unsure whether she should kiss you or kill you... .eh. it doesn't matter: in a way, Sly got some action.
And to answer your question.... HELLLLLLL YYEEAAAHHHHH!!!
Cue stupidly cheesy kids rhyme:
Twi and Sly sittin in a tree
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K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love then comes marriage
Third comes baby in a carrage (I think carrage is spelled wrong
All joking and stupid rhymes aside good chapter. I also learned something from this. I've played all the games and did not know that Sly was french.
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I couldn't stop laughing at how that song made my night.
I didn't know Sly was French either, until I looked back the first game and saw that they all live in France, yet speak English in the game. It's kinda like Japanese video games and TV shows, like Naruto, Black Butler, or Claymore.
Once again, your mind: Blown.
I read all the chapters, and I LOVE it!!!
I like the part where Sly told them where he come from. I was like, "Cool story, bro"
Keep on writing more chapters, I want to read more and see how it ends. Don't let anypony stop you.
P.S. What an awesome idea of you coming up with a TwiSly romance fic
, I laughed at Pinkie's antic at that part.