EA Legend Returns

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Mystery
• Tragedy

A human appears in equestria, at the middle of season 5, he doesn't know what's happening but everypony knows him.

• Human
• Celestia
• Luna
• OC
• Main 6

654_nosneb · 39k words  ·  47  12 · 2.3k views

Review: A Legend Returns.

Tags: Adventure, Mystery, Tragedy

Summary: How the government wants us to rebel and it’s all their fault for making us this way type.

Review: This fiction is wonderful. I did enjoy myself reading this very interesting plot.  Things that I do not like are the enter gaps, Caps for making them shout or scream whichever it was… didn’t say…  loss of detail there…  and that is all I have to say about it…  

Conclusion the story is a 10/10 I think this was good enough to smack me in the face.

Grammar in between gaps of enter space makes me scroll down a lot making me think it’s a longer fiction but it’s not and it’s all false and caps is very hard to read, sometimes it’s awful.  3/10

I give this at least a 5/10.

I’m going 

to 

make you scroll for this review and see how annoying it 

truly 

is….

Ps... Title is super wrong... It's (A Legend Returns. ) (and not A legend returns.)