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Tired. Sometimes irked. Rarely mad. But always trying to smile. [What does a man need to do to get a cappuccino around here?]

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At the very ripe age of nineteen Spike is still dealing with his dravyern blood. It made him strong, durable, he even has cool fire breathe and wings. The thing that sucked? He was still short. Due to his blood, he'd age physically differently from all his friends and family. So he was stuck shorter then most, due to this he'd get mistaken for a young teen despite being a legal adult. He even drove a car for god's sake!

The one who seemed to forget this the most was his sister Twilight who deemed that he'd need to be watched while home alone for the week or two she was gone. Despite his best attempts to argue he's stuck at home being watched by one of their mutual friends, Rainbow Dash.

She doesn't seem to mind just chilling for a few weeks, she was getting paid after all. But Spike is fed up with the way he's treated. He's at the end of his fuse when Rainbow Dash expertly starts a flashfire that ends unexpectedly.

Art by me.

Part of the Dravyern Verse that I will slowly build into multiple stories. No two Dravyern Verse stories line up with each other and there will be many differences between them. Constant things: there is magic but life is based heavily on modern-day, people humans with the subspecies being Soulsage[people born with magic], Skyborn[people born with retractable wings, Terrans[strong humans with tougher than average bodies, Alicians[people born with the traits of all three]. Other races represent Griffins[Griffman], Dragons[Dravyerns] and such as well.
Might bump rating later

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 83 )

Will there be a possible sequel of this and like the world you setting up so far.

Also like the cover art did you get it commission or did you make it yourself?

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Its not a one shot so XP

And I drew it myself

I kind of feel like "Unis" is a bit of a weak name for magic casting subspecies based on unicorns. Especially when you've been more creative for the other races.

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Its was Unis or like Arcaneborn but I didn't want to do the same one twice. So that's kinda me burning through my creative juices

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Okay I like Soul-Smiths but lemme see

Soulsages? Soulsageians? Hmm...

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Changes made! Thank you so much for that! :pinkiehappy:

Twilight treats Spike like he's a gremlin acting like he needs over the top instructions and rules and all that.

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Oh no I know it’s not a one shot just asking when this is completed will there be a sequel to this? With spike and rainbow exploring their relationship a bit more.


And really you drew it well I have to say I like it very well done 13/10 for me.

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Oh I like how rainbows cutie mark is just a tattoo on her arm

So I don't want to start the 'Oh no, all of the girls are horrible' train, that really wasn't the point. It happens, some people just kinda forget the people in their lives, that doesn't make them terrible and I hope no one thinks I'm trying to paint them like bad guys.

Well, i dont blame the other mane 6 girls, but its clearly when i read it, Twi treats Spike a bit rude, i hope she learns a lesson in the end of this story and apology to Spike.

When I saw this earlier I thought it looked interesting and went why not, but actually reading it I see that it seems to be really well written and leaves me wanting more of it. I think that you did a great job with this chapter and can't wait for more.

*Puts on thick spiraled nerd glasses* Achtually, the short synopsis says Spike is 18, but the long synopsis says he's 19!

Waitaminute... "Art by me"? That's amazing!

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What? No it doesn't :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: Nailed it

Also thank you! I'm pretty proud of it

“If I'm being honest? I didn’t even want this to come out. Before you say anything, I told myself a long time ago that not all relationships are made equal.

Boku no relationship academia?

Unfortunately, Spike’s phone went off.

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You don't interrupt things like that twilight, only villains do that

Maybe these next two weeks would be better than either dared hope?

For some reason i read weeks as chapters and thought they were breaking the fourth wall... I've been watching too much she-hulk

...Huh. This is surprisingly interesting, considering what I'm usually into. I like it!

Also. this is going to sound out of nowhere, but would you mind if I wrote a quick oneshot idea I just got involving these two and this world? Or perhaps I could give you an idea or two for a little extra worldbuilding?

I love the dynamic between Dash and Spike here. Glad Spike is getting the appreciation he deserves; can't wait to see what's in store for these two.

Also, small correction:

he wouldn’t mind spending a week with Moondancer or Twinkleshine, he had a decent repor with them even if it meant he’d be locked to whatever rules Twilight gave them.

Should be rapport.

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I don't mind either of those, so long as you credit me and junk lol

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Well, the more I think about it, the more I think it should be you that does it, since I doubt I could replicate the feel of this story.

The idea:

It basically does nothing except expand on Spike's freaking car. Idea is that It's some sporty late 80s sedan (In my head It's just the Ibishu Pessima GTz from BeamNG.Drive) he fixed up. Because It's so nice, his friends like to use it for various things, except they always ask Spike to drive since he is the only one that knows how to drive a freaking stick-shift. Besides Rainbow, that is. She's definitely the type to drive stick.

Yeahhh It's probably not anything too special, but it's a neat idea for a conversation that occurs when they drive to the grocery store.

You're welcome for any other ideas this may give you!

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Its like you guys can read my mind lol

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By the time you get through the long synopsis, he had a birthday. Because it's long. :moustache: :facehoof:

I understand the rest of the girls not caring, lack of attention and exposure continuous, but Twilight?

If i had a warden like that AND had to essentially act as a house slave while juggling my AND HER University studies...

Being forced to live for another under constraint and false chain from birth is death of the ego.

Is slow suffering, unnoticeable almost, till the only choice left is to end oneself or the jailer.

For living like such is simply unbearable for even a second longer.

I'd probably have a breakdown, pull a Shamo and shank a bitch.








(Good writing my man. Love it!)

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Wait, that wasn't the fic? :scootangel:

Always good to see more Spike stories! Plus Spikedash? My man knows my jam well!

Also, good on you for learning how to draw! It's something I wish I could do to accompany my stories. Ensure that you never stop learning and doing.

Damn, shaping out to be some top-tier, Spike, building in this story! And with a, cute and fun Dash as his Co-Star, this is going to be fun.:moustache::heart::rainbowwild:

This is actually... pretty good! I haven't read something quite like this before, so great job!

Dude this story is awesome! Why? 'Cuz you take time and write it properly! You put in it yourself!

Dunno what others think, but as long as you have passion for this story, I can wait as long as needed!

I would prefer you stick to one story. Uploads should be at least once a month.

They're so cute together. Between getting to know each other on a deeper level, setting boundaries right off the bat and a willingness to be open with one another, I think they are well on their way to happy and healthy relationship.

As far as writing goes, go where the wind takes you. If inspiration strikes for another story, by all means, go for it. Just don't let it fall to the wayside, because I am invested. On the subject of upload schedule, whatever works best for you. Doesn't matter to me if you upload once a month or once a day, the moment I see a new chapter, everything else can wait for a few minutes.

I like your characterization of Twilight. She always was overprotective of Spike.

This is a fan-fucking-tastic read!:twilightsmile:
Amazing job!:moustache::rainbowdetermined2:

Them actually talking about what they want in their relationship is awesome and I wish more authors would write it happening.

“I only get to drive my car when I’m taking her somewhere, going to college or picking something up. ‘No joyriding Spike, you could get a ticket’.” He mocked his sister and sighed, still not facing her.

That true you could get a ticket but gas is expensive right now

“...probably not. I don’t want to hurt Pinkie…”

Pinkie already knows or can sense it.

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Wait how old is twilight? And her friends?

I like this so far and finally spike is getting the love he deserves.

But I do wonder? If rainbow dash is going to move in with them or the other way around either way it’s going to be interesting for the two of them if you know what I mean:ajsmug:

And I do wonder how the rest of their friends react to this news.

They both agreed her wings sprouting from her back would go unspoken.

Now said with me now everyone

She got a wingboner!

She got it from… wait did she get horny from spikes cooking

“...I like body heat.”

How is that bad lots of people like body heat.

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They're all around 2-4 years older then Spike

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And for the chapter thing whichever you prefer or have time for.

But when is the next chapter

I’m liking this story more and more it’s got a nice pace, the characters are described nicely, and their personalities fit them just right plus It’s one of my most liked parings not too sure how to fell about spike being bi but not really bothered by it much can’t wait to see we’re this story goes definitely adding to favorites.

Another Phenomenal chapter. Doin great work.

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Thank you! And thank you for the support!!!

Wonder how Twilight is going to react...Awesome job man!

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