Spike considers himself to be a strong individual. Healthy, happy, but most importantly, sober.
Unfortunately for him, that changes during a night time Summer festival courtesy of Pinkie Pie. After a few dances and spiked drinks from Ponyville's delinquent Berry Punch, Spike finds himself getting drunk....by accident of course. And before he realizes what had happened, he finds himself in his room the next morning sleeping on top of Griffonstone's newest resident baker Gilda Gruff.
Spike will soon see if he is to come out of this situation beaten to a bloody pulp, or come out with a new special somepony to share his feelings with.
(I figured it would be interesting to try my hand at my first shipfic)
(Be gentle with me on this one, this is another one of my experimental fics)
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A very interesting start. I wonder what direction you will take this. I reserve judgement for then next chapter at least. Good start, but might need a few minor edits. Some things such as,
is a bit oddly written. Otherwise a good start.
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Definitely interesting. You have my attention, good sir.
I am intrigued
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Interesting! Please continue.
It seems you accidentally left your Author's Note at the top of the story rather than the bottom, but other than that extremely tiny nitpick, this was a nicely-written and decently funny introduction.
Looking forward to seeing where this rabbit hole leads!
:)
To sum up my level of appreciation for this story in one word, I'd have to use...
...Sponks
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Wouldn't the 'contents' already been engulf in flames?
Hrm
Wow, that must have been some crazy party. Gonna need a whole lot of water and bread for everyone.
So twilight was part of the party as well? She certainly come a long way.
COUGHGildaalreadydidCOUGH
I really hope this fic continues, this is probably one of my favourite “obscure” ships, so it will be nice to see it finally get a complete/decent fic
It’s alive! Nice stuff dude, looking forward to the next chapter.
Misery and hangovers love company
This was a nice chapter, can't wait.
Great chapter!
Can't wait to see more
I really hope you can continue this fic, so far it has been quite the funny and enjoyable read
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A year later and believe or not, I still want to see this fic continúe (there’s a reason why this is one of the few fics I have in my tracking list)
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Yeah, sorry. Trying to be better at getting stuff done this year. Having writers block on one of my other fics so I may do this one again