Jedi Padawan Lyra Heartstrings has been with the Jedi Order for a long time. Away from Equestria. Away from home. She cannot go back. Not because the Order is preventing her, but because her home is an undiscovered planet. There are no records of its existence, and the Republic and the Order are clueless of its whereabouts. She’s alone.
But after years of solidarity, the Force gives her a golden opportunity. One that would unravel the mystery missing homeland. She’ll have to traverse through a war-torn galaxy to reach her goal, but anything is worth the risk when her deepest desire is at stake. A chance to find Equestria. Her home.
Note: This is an original story taking place during the Knights of the Old Republic Timeline. Approximately, three-thousand years before the Battle of Yavin. Legends continuity will be used as source material.
Special Thanks to....
My Editors: ChudoJogurt
And My Alpha Readers: Venerable Ro, Tekkit, Lotus Moon
For all your help in making this story happen, thank you.
I dedicate this story to my parents, who've loved and supported me all my life.
If you see any grammatical errors or have any questions, let me know in the comment section.
Well, an interesting start to this story in my opinion.
The only real complaint that I have, if any, is just the extreme specificity of this line.
That may be how you write but it just threw me off a bit.
Otherwise, I'll definitely be reading further as you put more chapters out.
So, since the Equestrian planet is included in the Star Wars universe, should I assume they have the capabilities of space travel at this point?
Or were they a remote/undiscovered planet until those guys came to sell the ponies off?
Great chapter, by the way.
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You'll find that out later in the story. Or you can read one of my old blog posts. It'll explain a few things.
Made some changes to the story description and the prologue chapter.
So far im impressed whit what iv'e seen. IT reads as clearly as a published work and has the charm of one as well. Hope to read more
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Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Amazing start, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
So... Are we going with just the movies here, or with the Expanded Universe? I mean, I don't recall anything like this happening in Star Wars. ...Then again, I've only seen the movies.
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Expanded Universe. The original/prequel/sequel stories have nothing to do with this. Have you played the KOTOR games? This takes place before KOTOR1. I'll clarify this on the description.
Fortune favors the bold as they say, but haste makes waste. Lyra needs a balance between fervor and recklessness.
I kept forgetting that even during this period top Jedi had cabers shoved up where the sun doesn't shine. Hopefully Lyra can control her emotions as her journey continues. However I think many ponies would chafe under the rules of the Jedi as they are a very emotional species.
All chapters have been updated with new author's notes. If you wish to learn more about Star Wars Legends continuity lore, read the notes or follow the provided links.
I like this story.
No new chapter this week. Real life issues popped up and I couldn't finish the chapter. Good news though, I finalized a new schedule for newly released chapters. I'll write about it on my blog later.
Ah Taris, I just can't feel sorry for your fate. I always hold the people down at the lowest levels found their shelter and where safe when the city was leveled.
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Not even the lower city citizens were safe from Darth Malak's bombardment. Even the people who went to the Promised Land barely survived. They reached their destination, but soon died out decades later due to the Rakghoul Plague.
All good so far, and we have anew guy join the team, for how much we will see, great chapter dude.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
nice!
Nice! And I like the reason you found for Hider to go on this trip, much better than pouting and "it's the right thing to do".
I could predict that the boy would be somehow working with the shop owner, and here the temporal gang and connections keep increasing XD, well now they will have more help or information about the auction :D, the force is really going on well with Lyra.
The new chapter will be released tomorrow. I was going to release it today, but it still needs a lot of work. Sorry guys, but I don't want to rush this new chapter.
Edit: Next Chapter delayed again. I didn't feel like it was good enough to be published today even though the chapter as a whole is finished. Will likely post it tomorrow or Saturday by the latest.
Huh, what will she do when she finds her fellow ponies? Quite a conundrum.
(This story exists)
Me:
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lol
Wow, that T3 has some issues.
How deep into Legends material are we going?
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Deep. This is KOTOR era. Mandalorian Wars is just now starting to escalate.
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Guess I have some reading up to do. Kinda forgot about this stuff once it was declared Legends.
Well, this just got interesting.
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Glad you like it.
Nice.
Making your bed in the morning actually makes a lot of practical sense. It has to do with starting the day with an accomplishment and some order in your life. Navy SEAL Admiral McRaven explains at around 4 minutes and some change (though the whole speech is worth listening to).
Interesting story thus far.
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Glad you like it. And I love your tidbit on bed making.
Again, let me know if you find any errors guys.
sneaking into an Exchange base is way too risky
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Thank you.
This is getting interesting.
As always, if you see any errors, missing paragraphs, etc. Let me know in the comments.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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I'm not sure. I haven't thought much about it. Let's see...
Jedi Master Gizar Darran: He's a calm and collected Jedi Master who can take a joke, but when things get serious, his tone shifts appropriately given the situation. I view him closely as a mix between Clone Wars/Revenge of the Sith Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker.
Hider Louhun: A former smuggler who isn't ashamed of his past, but gets annoyed when people throw jokes at him. I'd say he's more akin to Atton Rand, so perhaps he'll give off a nonchalant tone in his voice. He won't give a damn about what's happening at one point, but depending on the situation, he'll either complain or get serious.
This is getting good. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Sweet, now thu fun is about to start :D.
That T3-G4 has a problem.
New chapter needs to be delayed guys. There's a lot of stuff that needs reworking, and I can't release it in it's current state. I should be finished with in 2 days time. Please be patient.
Needs a break in there.
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Thanks. I was supposed to put a line there, but I completely forgot about it.
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Another great chapter, I don't know why it has little likes, but you deserve at least 250.