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Speculore


Just someone who wants to see what stories this site has to offer. Also willing to be an editor for any story I feel has potential. Message me here or on Discord: Speculore#8567

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Camp Everfree, a place where campers can go and enjoy whatever activities they enjoy to their hearts content. However, this type of peace does not last long as the camp director, Gloriosa Daisy, has discovered magical gems that grant her power over nature. Using this power, she has plans to protect her camp to ensure that no one is able to take it away from her. The main seven try to stop her, but their magic isn't enough and they are forced to call upon a more powerful entity to aid them in their endeavor. The only question is whether or not this entity will be willing to help them.

(Alternate ending to Equestria Girls: Legend of Everfree. Wanted to make this sooner, but had a hard time playing it out in my head.)

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Midnight rolled her eyes. "Oh please. We both know that you're just doing this to impress Twilight and get under her skirt. Speaking of which, she might be fine with it, but I say no way José." Timber raised an eyebrow, but still kept a hopeful grin. "Don't get me wrong, you're a cool guy that I'm positive would get along great with Twilight. But there's a little bit of an age gap going here and I don't think that a lot of people would be on board."

Now see, this right here is the major plot hole Hasbro is refusing to admit too. Timber has to be way older than Twilight if he is running a camp like he and his sister are. And Twilight is still in high school.

Love the story though. So had to get that out.

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Honestly, I at first defended this relationship by saying that the age gap couldn't have been as bug as people say it might be. But with time, and a closer look at the respective physiologies of the characters, it can kinda see it.

Also, glad you liked it.

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I like to think he is not a real camp counselor more like his older sister pulled a few strings and jumped through some loopholes so he could help run the camp or the age requirement is lower in Equestria girls. My only gripe was that he was flirting on the clock and potentially inviting a lawsuit or worse for the camp. I think it was confirmed that he was 17-18 and considering that it might have been a year or two after Equestria girls it very likely everyone minus the principals and Gloria we're at the cusp or at the age of adulthood. If only Hasbro specify the timeline in the series a simple they are all 18 would suffice.

I like this.

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Glad to hear that.

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You're welcome I do hope this becomes a series.

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I hope so too. I actually have some ideas to turn their relationship into a more comedic Jekyll and Hyde, but I don't have the creative prowess to bring it to light.

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You can always ask for help.

This is a better ending then the actual movie!

This would be a better storyline. If this were canon, Sci-Twi would be like a Hasbro version of Venom. There has already been a Venom like character (Pony of Shadows), but Midnight Sparkle would fit the role much better considering that both Eddie and Twilight accepted their alter egos. The only difference is that Twilight never developed a hatred for anyone, making her much more simular to the movie version of Venom (the 2018 version, not the Spider-Man 3 version). You should really turn this into a series. I'm upvoting, but I have a question. Who is Jekyll and Clyde?

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First off, glad you liked it. Second, I'd love to turn this into a series and I have a bunch of ideas, but I don't have the creativity to bring those stories out. Third, I think Bruce Banner and the Hulk would be a more accurate superhero comparison. Fourth, Jekyll and Hyde is a classic story about a scientist who invents a serum to transform his very being. If you haven't read it, which I assume to be the case considering your question, I highly recommend it.

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WARNING! AVENGERS: INFINITY WAR SPOILERS! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

I remember how in Avengers: Infinity War, when Bruce wanted to transform into the Hulk, he was unable to, giving the film some comedy. Eventually, he resorted to using the Hulkbuster 2.0 (Iron Man Mark XLIX) suit. When he was facing off against Cull Obsidian during the Battle of Wakanda, he tried to transform again, to no avail. However, he attached the left arm of the Hulkbuster suit (it was ripped off) to Cull, causing the behemoth to fly into the force field and explode. After that, Bruce said "Hulk, we got a lot to figure out, pal."

This story brought a smile to my face. It's so reminiscent of Jekyll and Hyde... without all the, ahem, murder.

Thumbs up from me!

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I thought their relationship was cute, but I've been stopping myself from getting on board with it because they never said how old he is. I wish someone in the movie had mentioned it. Sure, he could be several years younger than Gloriosa (and he seems to be in the movie), but they still never really told us his age. At the very youngest, I think it's safe to to say he is around 18 or 19, because I'm assuming he's done with his high school years. But then again, I have no real frame of reference, so I have no idea. And even then, isn't Twilight like 16?

OH MY GOD!!!! WHY ISN'T THERE ANOTHER CHAPTER TO THIS???!!!!

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Mostly because I lack creativity

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